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love it so far, would like if you change the writing style of the conversationts.
I very interested in the story . I believe this story has a lot of potential and I love the fact that the first pov is not the main character but rather someone who is watching the mc. I look forward to the rest of the story.
Written at chapter 5. I'm really enjoying this story, but it has a few problems, mainly just some bad grammar or spelling. Other than that, I loved it. WQ 3 SD 5 CD 4 US 3 WB 2
love it so far, would like if you change the writing style of the conversationts.
I very interested in the story . I believe this story has a lot of potential and I love the fact that the first pov is not the main character but rather someone who is watching the mc. I look forward to the rest of the story.
Written at chapter 5. I'm really enjoying this story, but it has a few problems, mainly just some bad grammar or spelling. Other than that, I loved it. WQ 3 SD 5 CD 4 US 3 WB 2