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So far this is one of the best novels I've read of this genre! Great job, Author-san!
I’m not gonna rate this story bad cuz I only read two chapters but my personal opinion I hate system novels that force the host to it wishes. Makes me feel as if the the Mc is a slave to the system.
As far as I could read, the story is going in a good direction, with interesting characters and good development.The writing is understandable and without many visible errors. It has a harem tag, so I hope there is a good development in the characters' relationships.[img=update][img=More pls]
Unfortunately, I can only read free chapters, which I regret because the story captivated me a lot, but so far it's very interesting, I recommend it.
the story is really interesting . the writing quality is great . the characters are expressed really well. since its the beginning of the story the world building is early but good so far. I dont know about the update quality yet either
Looks good. It's clear that you are not a beginner alike me, your writing style is good and clean, and the story has a potential. I hope you will continue writing, you doing great.
Welcome to join Talon's journey! Each character has their own special traits that you can feel while reading. The main character, Talon, is calm and collected. He thinks before he acts and cares about others. But don't mistake him for being weak. He can stand up for himself when needed. He's also good at building romantic relationships with different women. If you have any more questions, feel free to ask.
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So far this is one of the best novels I've read of this genre! Great job, Author-san!
I’m not gonna rate this story bad cuz I only read two chapters but my personal opinion I hate system novels that force the host to it wishes. Makes me feel as if the the Mc is a slave to the system.
As far as I could read, the story is going in a good direction, with interesting characters and good development.The writing is understandable and without many visible errors. It has a harem tag, so I hope there is a good development in the characters' relationships.[img=update][img=More pls]
Unfortunately, I can only read free chapters, which I regret because the story captivated me a lot, but so far it's very interesting, I recommend it.
the story is really interesting . the writing quality is great . the characters are expressed really well. since its the beginning of the story the world building is early but good so far. I dont know about the update quality yet either
Looks good. It's clear that you are not a beginner alike me, your writing style is good and clean, and the story has a potential. I hope you will continue writing, you doing great.
Welcome to join Talon's journey! Each character has their own special traits that you can feel while reading. The main character, Talon, is calm and collected. He thinks before he acts and cares about others. But don't mistake him for being weak. He can stand up for himself when needed. He's also good at building romantic relationships with different women. If you have any more questions, feel free to ask.