Reviews of Magic Chronicles : Fallen Race by Hail_The_loli - Webnovel

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knoll
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A good novel, Well paced, interesting developments, and a pretty solid plot line while also well explained when slight confusion appears in parts.

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Labrarian

oh my GOD this is an AMAZING book! everything (other than update stability) is five stars, and i love it. also the plot twist at the end, and the book connections. ohh... it. is. great!

5mth
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Hanimated

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CulturedVoid

Overall this is a good book with the exception of the writing style seeming a bitโ€ฆ peculiar. Also donโ€™t be fooled by the villain tag, the protagonist is far more of an anti-hero than a villain

7mth
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Lunacy_
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Im just writing a quick review to ask the author a question aswell as inform some of you lot about the mc's early personality. im only 16 chaps in, but hear me out first, im drawn in by the tags villain, aswell as the combination of story potential that seems to be fun, if u're drawn in by that then the author's answer might be determential for you. but it seems like it will take a long time for him to become "villain like" because right now, he is more of a hero than a villain. he dislikes evil things, he dislikes murder, he dislikes torture, he dislikes the demon'9s ways in general, he seems more of a chara that just wants to live freely witht he one you love while occasionally protecting justice yknow. so imma use this review to ask one questions to make me made up my mind. will he kill innocents? some one that does nothing wrong? maybe even someone that's has been nice to him? or is he someone that only kill "evil human" or someone that's annoying to him, or someone who is in his way?

7mth
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yung_Ericsef

why did you only give Lemons scene to the succubus but skipped the elf princess?? only reason i dropped it, otherwise it was actually a good story. sad

7mth
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Ellipse_ark

I have reached the chapters 60 and my impression is that the interaction between mc and fl is not so good It looks forced if you use logic but the overall novel is good for time pass there are some minor mistakes but ok

9mth
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No_La2

amazing novel with tons of potential,but where are the character illustrations ?

9mth
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Viadhivan_Ranata

Thanks for the Book!!!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ“–๐ŸŒ  I even throw the stone before reading it ๐ŸŒ ๐Ÿ’Ž๐Ÿคฃ Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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FamilyMan

All Five Stars ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ  Even though I have not read your work yet because I have Faith from Fallen Chronicles ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿฅ‚

10mth
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CozyCatCake

I have read the Book yet but I have Faith ๐Ÿ˜ผ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿฅ‚ So here is the Perfect Score for the Perfect Ninth Review ๐Ÿ˜ป๐Ÿฅฎ9๏ธโƒฃ Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ธ๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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SweetnessSaintess

Wow, I am just online and I the Author of Fallen Chronicles made a new book ๐Ÿ˜ I haven't read it yet but I have Faith that it will be worth the stars I give ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ  Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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Amelia_Gladhis

Only Six Reviews? Let me Fix it by making the Lucky Seventh one ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐ŸŽฐ๐Ÿ“– Hail the Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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Kamala_Nadhia

Holy Moly Roly Poly Doly Moly Loli ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿญ๐Ÿ’– All Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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Vanadhi_Lucia

After Fallen Chronicles, now we have Magic Chronicles ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ’– All Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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InfinityWolfS2

Bem nรฃo tem muito oque dizer. Vamos comeรงar com o MC completa perda de tempo, se oque acontece com ele fosse uma situaรงรฃo real ele estaria morto assim que foi convocado.(bom que nรฃo seja). A dificuldade para ele aumentar o poder รฉ muito grande(nรฃo fui muito a frente do romance) pelo menos para mim, devido as escolhas idiot@s dele. E acima de tudo para um Rei Demรดnio ele รฉ patรฉtico e fraco. Se o autor(a) queria que ele fosse fraco do jeito que ele รฉ, era melhor te-lo convocar como um demรดnio normal, e assim ele iria subindo no poder, pois acho que para conseguir o titulo de Rei Demรดnio precisa de muito mais do que pecado. Fora o absurdo da Santa que depois de todo esse tempo deveria ser extremamente mais forte que ele e sua raรงa.( nรฃo cheguei nessa parte, apenas suposiรงรฃo).

10mth
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TheEyePatch

I have not read it yet but , I have faith

11mth
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GolbalOffender

I really shouldn't make a review of this book since I haven't read it โญโญโญโญโญ

11mth
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Bidenthebobo

Hello, I've created a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!

11mth
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knoll
LV 15 Badge

A good novel, Well paced, interesting developments, and a pretty solid plot line while also well explained when slight confusion appears in parts.

1mth
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Labrarian

oh my GOD this is an AMAZING book! everything (other than update stability) is five stars, and i love it. also the plot twist at the end, and the book connections. ohh... it. is. great!

5mth
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Hanimated

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6mth
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CulturedVoid

Overall this is a good book with the exception of the writing style seeming a bitโ€ฆ peculiar. Also donโ€™t be fooled by the villain tag, the protagonist is far more of an anti-hero than a villain

7mth
View 2 Replies
Lunacy_
LV 14 Badge

Im just writing a quick review to ask the author a question aswell as inform some of you lot about the mc's early personality. im only 16 chaps in, but hear me out first, im drawn in by the tags villain, aswell as the combination of story potential that seems to be fun, if u're drawn in by that then the author's answer might be determential for you. but it seems like it will take a long time for him to become "villain like" because right now, he is more of a hero than a villain. he dislikes evil things, he dislikes murder, he dislikes torture, he dislikes the demon'9s ways in general, he seems more of a chara that just wants to live freely witht he one you love while occasionally protecting justice yknow. so imma use this review to ask one questions to make me made up my mind. will he kill innocents? some one that does nothing wrong? maybe even someone that's has been nice to him? or is he someone that only kill "evil human" or someone that's annoying to him, or someone who is in his way?

7mth
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yung_Ericsef

why did you only give Lemons scene to the succubus but skipped the elf princess?? only reason i dropped it, otherwise it was actually a good story. sad

7mth
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Ellipse_ark

I have reached the chapters 60 and my impression is that the interaction between mc and fl is not so good It looks forced if you use logic but the overall novel is good for time pass there are some minor mistakes but ok

9mth
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No_La2

amazing novel with tons of potential,but where are the character illustrations ?

9mth
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Viadhivan_Ranata

Thanks for the Book!!!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ“–๐ŸŒ  I even throw the stone before reading it ๐ŸŒ ๐Ÿ’Ž๐Ÿคฃ Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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FamilyMan

All Five Stars ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ  Even though I have not read your work yet because I have Faith from Fallen Chronicles ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿฅ‚

10mth
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CozyCatCake

I have read the Book yet but I have Faith ๐Ÿ˜ผ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿฅ‚ So here is the Perfect Score for the Perfect Ninth Review ๐Ÿ˜ป๐Ÿฅฎ9๏ธโƒฃ Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ธ๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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SweetnessSaintess

Wow, I am just online and I the Author of Fallen Chronicles made a new book ๐Ÿ˜ I haven't read it yet but I have Faith that it will be worth the stars I give ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ  Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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Amelia_Gladhis

Only Six Reviews? Let me Fix it by making the Lucky Seventh one ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐ŸŽฐ๐Ÿ“– Hail the Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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Kamala_Nadhia

Holy Moly Roly Poly Doly Moly Loli ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿญ๐Ÿ’– All Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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Vanadhi_Lucia

After Fallen Chronicles, now we have Magic Chronicles ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ’– All Hail The Loli!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿญ๐Ÿป

10mth
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InfinityWolfS2

Bem nรฃo tem muito oque dizer. Vamos comeรงar com o MC completa perda de tempo, se oque acontece com ele fosse uma situaรงรฃo real ele estaria morto assim que foi convocado.(bom que nรฃo seja). A dificuldade para ele aumentar o poder รฉ muito grande(nรฃo fui muito a frente do romance) pelo menos para mim, devido as escolhas idiot@s dele. E acima de tudo para um Rei Demรดnio ele รฉ patรฉtico e fraco. Se o autor(a) queria que ele fosse fraco do jeito que ele รฉ, era melhor te-lo convocar como um demรดnio normal, e assim ele iria subindo no poder, pois acho que para conseguir o titulo de Rei Demรดnio precisa de muito mais do que pecado. Fora o absurdo da Santa que depois de todo esse tempo deveria ser extremamente mais forte que ele e sua raรงa.( nรฃo cheguei nessa parte, apenas suposiรงรฃo).

10mth
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TheEyePatch

I have not read it yet but , I have faith

11mth
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GolbalOffender

I really shouldn't make a review of this book since I haven't read it โญโญโญโญโญ

11mth
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Bidenthebobo

Hello, I've created a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!

11mth
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