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if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return'
This is one of the most stimulating novel I've ever read. It's very slow, while some people might dislike that, yours truly really loved how detailed every scene was. But there's one problem - I used all my FP😭😭 I wanna read next chapter so bad 😭 pls make this very famous🙏 (so that it can be read for free😏)
The pacing of this story is slow. Like unbelievably slow. A simple interaction that should be done in 1 chapter, 2 at the most, gets spread to 5 or 10 chapters. Run on sentences take up the majority of this book, and the same stuff keeps getting repeated over and over. Author, you need to cut down on the characters constantly repeating what each other says in disbelief cuz that gets tiring real quick. Also the ideas you're trying to convey can be condensed a lot. So much unnecessary writing that the plot has barely gotten anywhere after 300 chapters.
Love your novel. Although I haven't read till the latest chapter I know it's good. I will wait until more chapters come out. So keep those chapters coming.
Tbh story it ain’t even that bad in general but how does the meat riding happen before the actual meat ride begins😭 Legit Yip Yap and Legendary D, Yop was present everywhere in this story with how they kept rambling and 🥩🚴 the MC💀
This novel is way too slow paced it took 120 chapters just to finish the interaction with his mom. For no reason at all did it need to be for that long. I’m sorry and for that I have to take my leave, even though the setting and plot is exactly what I like
I think the best smut I've ever read. Only hindrance is lack of access to the content otherwise Id have already binged it all. Love hate how slow it is but the anticipation is destroying me!
I really liked the premise of this novel, and the first ten chapters were interesting, but from there it's been 40+ chapters of ONE scene. And there's barely anything happening. The kinky role-playing felt really weird and came out of nowhere. I really hoped to see more development and exploring the world, setting and characters by this point, but by chapter 57 it's only been like an hour or something in the story since the MC arrived in that world. This is honestly too slow for me, and doesn't feel like something I would pay to unlock more.
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I really like this story so please author can u complete this novel. hmm... it's not like I haven't read this type of genre but there was no such interaction into those type of novel, MC will directly go into main dish or little preparing like 2 or 3 chapter than bangggggg
I love this story it is like a new type. the worst thing is that it is too much slow paced I mean tooooo much to the point from start to chapter 60 they are starting the dinner which has been on the table from 15 or 20 no chapter author I know you want to keep it slow paced but u have crossed the limit of it and I am not going to unlock the chapter with my coins when there is no much difference in every chapter. THE MAIN THING IS IF YOU STILL MAKE THE STORY THIS SLOW PACED I AM GONNA DROP IT AND NOT ME BUT EVRYONE HAVE THIS PROBLEM SO FIX THIS SLOW PACED . author i really love this novel plz stop making it so much slow paced I don't want to drop is so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 also reply me
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51 chapters of cringe dopamine, I skimmed through them all so I didn’t suffer much 😂
The story will be slow placed without any forced interactions, so don't expect lemons the moment the MC lays his eyes upon a girl. But in exchange for that, the 18+ scenes will be long thoroughly described and will feel unique and non-basic. This is the tenth review for this story, so I had to make a review to get a rating. But if you have any doubts about the story let me know below
I am not a person who can write a good review. . . So all I can say is that I really liked this story. Especially the long buildup. [img=update][img=recommend]
Author, I curse you to complete this beautiful novel and write many more like this or else[img=proud]
if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return'
This is one of the most stimulating novel I've ever read. It's very slow, while some people might dislike that, yours truly really loved how detailed every scene was. But there's one problem - I used all my FP😭😭 I wanna read next chapter so bad 😭 pls make this very famous🙏 (so that it can be read for free😏)
The pacing of this story is slow. Like unbelievably slow. A simple interaction that should be done in 1 chapter, 2 at the most, gets spread to 5 or 10 chapters. Run on sentences take up the majority of this book, and the same stuff keeps getting repeated over and over. Author, you need to cut down on the characters constantly repeating what each other says in disbelief cuz that gets tiring real quick. Also the ideas you're trying to convey can be condensed a lot. So much unnecessary writing that the plot has barely gotten anywhere after 300 chapters.
Love your novel. Although I haven't read till the latest chapter I know it's good. I will wait until more chapters come out. So keep those chapters coming.
Tbh story it ain’t even that bad in general but how does the meat riding happen before the actual meat ride begins😭 Legit Yip Yap and Legendary D, Yop was present everywhere in this story with how they kept rambling and 🥩🚴 the MC💀
This novel is way too slow paced it took 120 chapters just to finish the interaction with his mom. For no reason at all did it need to be for that long. I’m sorry and for that I have to take my leave, even though the setting and plot is exactly what I like
I think the best smut I've ever read. Only hindrance is lack of access to the content otherwise Id have already binged it all. Love hate how slow it is but the anticipation is destroying me!
I really liked the premise of this novel, and the first ten chapters were interesting, but from there it's been 40+ chapters of ONE scene. And there's barely anything happening. The kinky role-playing felt really weird and came out of nowhere. I really hoped to see more development and exploring the world, setting and characters by this point, but by chapter 57 it's only been like an hour or something in the story since the MC arrived in that world. This is honestly too slow for me, and doesn't feel like something I would pay to unlock more.
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I really like this story so please author can u complete this novel. hmm... it's not like I haven't read this type of genre but there was no such interaction into those type of novel, MC will directly go into main dish or little preparing like 2 or 3 chapter than bangggggg
I love this story it is like a new type. the worst thing is that it is too much slow paced I mean tooooo much to the point from start to chapter 60 they are starting the dinner which has been on the table from 15 or 20 no chapter author I know you want to keep it slow paced but u have crossed the limit of it and I am not going to unlock the chapter with my coins when there is no much difference in every chapter. THE MAIN THING IS IF YOU STILL MAKE THE STORY THIS SLOW PACED I AM GONNA DROP IT AND NOT ME BUT EVRYONE HAVE THIS PROBLEM SO FIX THIS SLOW PACED . author i really love this novel plz stop making it so much slow paced I don't want to drop is so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 also reply me
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51 chapters of cringe dopamine, I skimmed through them all so I didn’t suffer much 😂
The story will be slow placed without any forced interactions, so don't expect lemons the moment the MC lays his eyes upon a girl. But in exchange for that, the 18+ scenes will be long thoroughly described and will feel unique and non-basic. This is the tenth review for this story, so I had to make a review to get a rating. But if you have any doubts about the story let me know below
I am not a person who can write a good review. . . So all I can say is that I really liked this story. Especially the long buildup. [img=update][img=recommend]
Author, I curse you to complete this beautiful novel and write many more like this or else[img=proud]