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Interesante historia de aventura en otro mundo. Solo espero que el MC logre evitar el ntr. Que la fuerza lo acompañe 😅
overall story is good and i loved it. I hope there is an academy arc something like that
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Although, i don't like to give 5 star reviews on my book, I have to leave it because you guys may have questions. So, feel free to ask anything. One thing i would like to say is that the starting chaps till 20th chap are year old cuz i took a long ass hiatus. what I want to say is that if you think there are mistakes and things could be improved then there's 90% chance i improved it that if not than you can always give me feedback I want to hear from y'all. so, that's it... I tend to unknowingly stretch out r18 chaps I'm working on reducing that stretch.
Interesante historia de aventura en otro mundo. Solo espero que el MC logre evitar el ntr. Que la fuerza lo acompañe 😅
overall story is good and i loved it. I hope there is an academy arc something like that
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Although, i don't like to give 5 star reviews on my book, I have to leave it because you guys may have questions. So, feel free to ask anything. One thing i would like to say is that the starting chaps till 20th chap are year old cuz i took a long ass hiatus. what I want to say is that if you think there are mistakes and things could be improved then there's 90% chance i improved it that if not than you can always give me feedback I want to hear from y'all. so, that's it... I tend to unknowingly stretch out r18 chaps I'm working on reducing that stretch.