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I never realized how badly I needed a HP and 40k crossover with Harry as the MC in my life until I read this. The author is doing a good job, I've been enjoying it a lot so far.
Why you deleted this story it was very good ? and I was reading it in chapter 19 when you deleted it.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Sick, is all I can say it truly a fun read, parts actually get your adrenaline pumping. Plus 40k Bingo Bango couldn't ask for anything more.
The author's lack of understanding of grammar and his lack of familiarity with English made me unable to get through the first chapter. You will have a much easier time enjoying this fanfic if English isn't your first language.
Not words really just this story is unique, I think the author should go use there skill and write an original fantasy novel or go write the next Rick and Morty, just the right balance of craziness, action and attention to detail.
it's not my cup of tea but it's a extremely good story and has a interesting plot that is well written
This novels great, has a very unique idea and setting. Plus the author seems to have done his 40k research which is nice to see. I'm interested to see how it integrates in HP universe as tonally it's very different.
I love this story, the idea, the setting and especially the writing style
I'm really enjoying the book, it's nice to see the middle of the book expanding and I'm looking forward to how you'll integrate the two dynamics though I expect it to be quite the challenge.
Great start (currently at chapter 6). Quality of the writing, in terms of grammar and spelling is great, so big plus there. So far the story has been a little rushed, but I think this fic is for people who already understand the base premise of the universes you're drawing from so it makes sense not to waist time. Overall I'm looking forward to reading more of this, keep up the good work.
Obligatory Shameless Author Review. I would appreciate any feedback, I'm very dyslexic so I apologise if the grammar or phrasing is a little difficult. More chapters coming tomorrow.
I never realized how badly I needed a HP and 40k crossover with Harry as the MC in my life until I read this. The author is doing a good job, I've been enjoying it a lot so far.
Why you deleted this story it was very good ? and I was reading it in chapter 19 when you deleted it.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Sick, is all I can say it truly a fun read, parts actually get your adrenaline pumping. Plus 40k Bingo Bango couldn't ask for anything more.
The author's lack of understanding of grammar and his lack of familiarity with English made me unable to get through the first chapter. You will have a much easier time enjoying this fanfic if English isn't your first language.
Not words really just this story is unique, I think the author should go use there skill and write an original fantasy novel or go write the next Rick and Morty, just the right balance of craziness, action and attention to detail.
it's not my cup of tea but it's a extremely good story and has a interesting plot that is well written
This novels great, has a very unique idea and setting. Plus the author seems to have done his 40k research which is nice to see. I'm interested to see how it integrates in HP universe as tonally it's very different.
I love this story, the idea, the setting and especially the writing style
I'm really enjoying the book, it's nice to see the middle of the book expanding and I'm looking forward to how you'll integrate the two dynamics though I expect it to be quite the challenge.
Great start (currently at chapter 6). Quality of the writing, in terms of grammar and spelling is great, so big plus there. So far the story has been a little rushed, but I think this fic is for people who already understand the base premise of the universes you're drawing from so it makes sense not to waist time. Overall I'm looking forward to reading more of this, keep up the good work.
Obligatory Shameless Author Review. I would appreciate any feedback, I'm very dyslexic so I apologise if the grammar or phrasing is a little difficult. More chapters coming tomorrow.
Just super new and cool premise. Really enjoyed it so far.