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I dislike the main character a lot he's not very charismatic or interesting I've read all the chapters not a fan would not recommend He doesn't use the force it's says over know what he understand Star Wars but he doesn't really use it to any effect doesn't embrace what it is
Настолько ужасно, что пиздец. Автор явно не знает лора Звездных Войн и Киновсленной Марвел. Например, получить силу и развиваться без голоктрона - гиблое дело, человек просто превратился в животное, которым управляет сила, и МС не станет ни ситхом, ни джедаем, в чем смысл?
I love this book and thought it was a great idea, I hope you continue to write and come back to this.
Mehh.. kinda amateurish for me. Its kinda sucks. Sorry... ...........................................................................................................................................Sorry... ...........................................................................................................................................Sorry... ...........................................................................................................................................Sorry... ........................................................................................................................................... ............
Why it does seems as if it's written by AI? All the chapters after the first 14 or 15 have very odd writing, some very generic gimmicks and overall a very artificial story progression, idk man, not for me.
This story started out great. Good story, reasonable and down to each protagonist, then he suddenly becomes a stereotypical face slapping arogant Chinese edge lord protagonist with a laughable hero name. So much potential wasted. Protagonist seemed to completely forget about their main motivation and just go on a random vigilante spree. Author admits in some places that what they wrote is unrealistic but does it anyway, breaking the narrative even more. Great story if the author is writing for themselves, not so much for other readers.
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Gets worse as the novel goes on with more nonsensical plot and the mc doing nothing while those he’s close to die. It devolves into trash
Never have been a huge Star Wars fan, but I am a diehard Marvel fan. Solid 5/5 in my eyes.
very good writing so far with a very cool story. The only reason its not 4 out of 5 is cause this isnt my kind of story while i love weak to strong stories. Ive just read too many over the years that ive kind gone off on them. Im into slice of life or more op mc. Cause they dont have the same battle manga type storyline where its all about fighting stronger people till eventually your powerful.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
I read up to chapter 32, but that's not enough, this is shit, a lot of writing by AI, the MC doesn't develop, lots of holes in the plot, for example he wears metal armor while fighting with Mao, and His staff isn't cut and his armor is lol, there's another one, his power doesn't grow, the amount of drama there is here is repetitive. Characters who have the strength can lift entire ships, pick up people and crush them, here he can't even do that because he is so weak, there are times when he uses the power and there are times when he doesn't use it. Well, that's my review of this weird fanfic. translation generated by google
well what can i say? It's overall a great book, but there are a few instances that confuse me. For example ch 48-52 left me quite stunned. I really don't know what is going on anymore, but as it's the current newest chapter (52) i have high hopes of it all making sense in the next few chapters. No romance or harem in sight, for those wondering. Though if the author stays true to what he stated in the synopsis, the book is only going to be better and better.
A excepción del desarrollo de la historia al que le di unas 3 estrellas el resto merece 4, el protagonista me agrada, pero el autor se apresuró en ciertos momentos, lo del orfanato era algo que potenciaría el crecimiento del protagonista pero las motivaciones de los villanos me parecieron poco probables y la ejecución dejo algunas cosas un poco confusas, como el porqué los soldados se concentraron en los niños cuando el protagonista estaba acabando con todos ellos, hubiera sido más realista que se centran en la mayor amenaza antes de distraerse con los indefensos, tal vez sea mis perjuicios porque en verdad estoy un poco arto de leer sobre protagonistas arrogantes, que a pesar de vivir en buenos entornos se mantienen fríos o que los autores fuercen situaciones trágicas para conseguir que sus protagonistas caigan en la oscuridad o algo similar, la vida de este protagonista iba a ser difícil por su punto de partida como huérfano pobre, por eso esperaba que consiguiera algunos aliados que lo ayudaran en su camino, incluso si algunos caerían lo hubiera aceptado, es incómodo ver qué la mayoría de los autores se esfuerzan en tomar las peores características de los personajes de Marvel y se las dan a sus personajes, la arrogancia de Tony, la desconfianza de Nick, la trágica vida de Spiderman, etc. Me preguntó si es tan difícil encontrar un fanfiction donde el protagonista no se vea envuelto en la mala suerte y que además no se recurra a volverlo invencible en el capítulo 2 o 3.
It's better written than before. I think I like the face so far and will see how the whole thing develops Mc is smart on Tony Stark Niwvu Mc has the power but has to transnate to get it so most won't op right away but I think over time he will be very strong So far no Mc has girlfriend but I hope it will be Wanda and I hope he can save her brothers
Bro you are awesome. When I saw your reply to my comment I didn't expect this, you revamped the hell out of it. It's far more better than the previous version. The character is much better than the older one, his development is a bit cliche but what in fanfiction is not. I really liked how he discovered what his power is, how he developed it. The story progression is much better and other characters are more fleshed out. I got irritated reading the previous version and put it in the maybe list. But now this, deserves a place in the 'Let Him Cook' list. Amazing work and can't wait to see how it moves forward. All the best Author.
This novel is trash all the plots are stupid. The good reviews are either bots or payed people to give out good reviews to this trash novel. Stop wasting your time in this novel.
Let's go. First of all, while it's totally ungrateful what the guy did, he was right when he said that One Above All should and IS above that bullshit. "I am the One Above All. I see through many eyes. I build with many hands. They are themselves, but they are also me. I am all-powerful. My only weapon is love. The mystery intrigues me."
Even though I haven't read it just because it involves star wars it an instant 5. Please don't make it into a harem.
So far so good. But i have a few nitpicks. First, author made it so he cant find xmen but most people who watch or read xmen know that he has a mansion in new york. His progress is interesting but the story progression makes the reader feel anxiety from the pressure and sadness for those he lost. I just wish author made him reach out to allies or something. If it were me, id find a way to talk to stark. If its before iron man, then as a genius inventor. If its after iron man, then as a hero. Though kamar taj is still better tbh. A good portal to escape is always the best skill for survival.
I like how the MC is taking his time to grow and has his onw problems apart from the usual Avenger stuff
Very well written a few issues with mc development but it is all around a great book intriguing story well developed plot I would recommend this for anyone to read and I honestly look forward to seeing what the author has planned for this in the future
I'm giving this story 5 stars, the story is entertaining, and I look forward to reading more soon, including seeing more Star Wars themes in this story.
I'm liking the story, It's a bit of a slow burn in some areas and fast in others, but it's done in a way that keeps the story interesting. The update stability is solid, really can't complain there and I haven't come across anything bad in the grammar department. The MC is pretty funny and seems to have a mind of his own and isn't simply a yes man plus he's smart so you won't feel like you're having a brain aneurysm from stupidity. As for world background. That's part of where it feels like a slow burn. But it's done in a way that I personally like. Note for the Author. "Keep up the good work, I'm sure someone out there is proud of you"
its a good story with a good writing style, nothing to complain, good job author 👍🏼
I dislike the main character a lot he's not very charismatic or interesting I've read all the chapters not a fan would not recommend He doesn't use the force it's says over know what he understand Star Wars but he doesn't really use it to any effect doesn't embrace what it is
Настолько ужасно, что пиздец. Автор явно не знает лора Звездных Войн и Киновсленной Марвел. Например, получить силу и развиваться без голоктрона - гиблое дело, человек просто превратился в животное, которым управляет сила, и МС не станет ни ситхом, ни джедаем, в чем смысл?
I love this book and thought it was a great idea, I hope you continue to write and come back to this.
Mehh.. kinda amateurish for me. Its kinda sucks. Sorry... ...........................................................................................................................................Sorry... ...........................................................................................................................................Sorry... ...........................................................................................................................................Sorry... ........................................................................................................................................... ............
Why it does seems as if it's written by AI? All the chapters after the first 14 or 15 have very odd writing, some very generic gimmicks and overall a very artificial story progression, idk man, not for me.
This story started out great. Good story, reasonable and down to each protagonist, then he suddenly becomes a stereotypical face slapping arogant Chinese edge lord protagonist with a laughable hero name. So much potential wasted. Protagonist seemed to completely forget about their main motivation and just go on a random vigilante spree. Author admits in some places that what they wrote is unrealistic but does it anyway, breaking the narrative even more. Great story if the author is writing for themselves, not so much for other readers.
Reveal Spoiler Gets worse as the novel goes on with more nonsensical plot and the mc doing nothing while those he’s close to die. It devolves into trash
Never have been a huge Star Wars fan, but I am a diehard Marvel fan. Solid 5/5 in my eyes.
very good writing so far with a very cool story. The only reason its not 4 out of 5 is cause this isnt my kind of story while i love weak to strong stories. Ive just read too many over the years that ive kind gone off on them. Im into slice of life or more op mc. Cause they dont have the same battle manga type storyline where its all about fighting stronger people till eventually your powerful.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
I read up to chapter 32, but that's not enough, this is shit, a lot of writing by AI, the MC doesn't develop, lots of holes in the plot, for example he wears metal armor while fighting with Mao, and His staff isn't cut and his armor is lol, there's another one, his power doesn't grow, the amount of drama there is here is repetitive. Characters who have the strength can lift entire ships, pick up people and crush them, here he can't even do that because he is so weak, there are times when he uses the power and there are times when he doesn't use it. Well, that's my review of this weird fanfic. translation generated by google
well what can i say? It's overall a great book, but there are a few instances that confuse me. For example ch 48-52 left me quite stunned. I really don't know what is going on anymore, but as it's the current newest chapter (52) i have high hopes of it all making sense in the next few chapters. No romance or harem in sight, for those wondering. Though if the author stays true to what he stated in the synopsis, the book is only going to be better and better.
A excepción del desarrollo de la historia al que le di unas 3 estrellas el resto merece 4, el protagonista me agrada, pero el autor se apresuró en ciertos momentos, lo del orfanato era algo que potenciaría el crecimiento del protagonista pero las motivaciones de los villanos me parecieron poco probables y la ejecución dejo algunas cosas un poco confusas, como el porqué los soldados se concentraron en los niños cuando el protagonista estaba acabando con todos ellos, hubiera sido más realista que se centran en la mayor amenaza antes de distraerse con los indefensos, tal vez sea mis perjuicios porque en verdad estoy un poco arto de leer sobre protagonistas arrogantes, que a pesar de vivir en buenos entornos se mantienen fríos o que los autores fuercen situaciones trágicas para conseguir que sus protagonistas caigan en la oscuridad o algo similar, la vida de este protagonista iba a ser difícil por su punto de partida como huérfano pobre, por eso esperaba que consiguiera algunos aliados que lo ayudaran en su camino, incluso si algunos caerían lo hubiera aceptado, es incómodo ver qué la mayoría de los autores se esfuerzan en tomar las peores características de los personajes de Marvel y se las dan a sus personajes, la arrogancia de Tony, la desconfianza de Nick, la trágica vida de Spiderman, etc. Me preguntó si es tan difícil encontrar un fanfiction donde el protagonista no se vea envuelto en la mala suerte y que además no se recurra a volverlo invencible en el capítulo 2 o 3.
It's better written than before. I think I like the face so far and will see how the whole thing develops Mc is smart on Tony Stark Niwvu Mc has the power but has to transnate to get it so most won't op right away but I think over time he will be very strong So far no Mc has girlfriend but I hope it will be Wanda and I hope he can save her brothers
Bro you are awesome. When I saw your reply to my comment I didn't expect this, you revamped the hell out of it. It's far more better than the previous version. The character is much better than the older one, his development is a bit cliche but what in fanfiction is not. I really liked how he discovered what his power is, how he developed it. The story progression is much better and other characters are more fleshed out. I got irritated reading the previous version and put it in the maybe list. But now this, deserves a place in the 'Let Him Cook' list. Amazing work and can't wait to see how it moves forward. All the best Author.
This novel is trash all the plots are stupid. The good reviews are either bots or payed people to give out good reviews to this trash novel. Stop wasting your time in this novel.
Let's go. First of all, while it's totally ungrateful what the guy did, he was right when he said that One Above All should and IS above that bullshit. "I am the One Above All. I see through many eyes. I build with many hands. They are themselves, but they are also me. I am all-powerful. My only weapon is love. The mystery intrigues me."
Even though I haven't read it just because it involves star wars it an instant 5. Please don't make it into a harem.
So far so good. But i have a few nitpicks. First, author made it so he cant find xmen but most people who watch or read xmen know that he has a mansion in new york. His progress is interesting but the story progression makes the reader feel anxiety from the pressure and sadness for those he lost. I just wish author made him reach out to allies or something. If it were me, id find a way to talk to stark. If its before iron man, then as a genius inventor. If its after iron man, then as a hero. Though kamar taj is still better tbh. A good portal to escape is always the best skill for survival.
I like how the MC is taking his time to grow and has his onw problems apart from the usual Avenger stuff
Very well written a few issues with mc development but it is all around a great book intriguing story well developed plot I would recommend this for anyone to read and I honestly look forward to seeing what the author has planned for this in the future
I'm giving this story 5 stars, the story is entertaining, and I look forward to reading more soon, including seeing more Star Wars themes in this story.
I'm liking the story, It's a bit of a slow burn in some areas and fast in others, but it's done in a way that keeps the story interesting. The update stability is solid, really can't complain there and I haven't come across anything bad in the grammar department. The MC is pretty funny and seems to have a mind of his own and isn't simply a yes man plus he's smart so you won't feel like you're having a brain aneurysm from stupidity. As for world background. That's part of where it feels like a slow burn. But it's done in a way that I personally like. Note for the Author. "Keep up the good work, I'm sure someone out there is proud of you"
its a good story with a good writing style, nothing to complain, good job author 👍🏼
The story can be a lil inconsistent at times, but it's a fun read