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DaoistzBeIL4

hilarious how the mc gets angry when he sees a world where vampires rule and humans are livestock but he treats humans the same way in his world. 1st he says he decides what do you with dogs (humans) then when others do the same he says humans are noble and gods favourite. completely new level of braindead hypocrisy that it's not even funny it's just annoying.

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Walking_death

It's a copy of an existing novel Just one without an official translation

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Newto
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Face slapping, death courting cultivation novel converted into zombie Apocalypse novel through ChatGPT[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Skollar

Hello, author. I found this novel suspiciously familiar with an another novel i found in internet, a chinese-language novel. Are you two the same person or not

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Smedzz
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This novel I believe shows when a coward and someone of low self esteem gets a bit of power 😂😂😂

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Aliiireza

99% is a copy of a Chinese novel that I read about 2 years ago, but I don't remember the name, if you are copying, at least remove the Chinese name.

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blancheart

Chinese nerds power trip... no imagination or creativity

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Forlorn_Wendigo

It's evident from the outset that the author lacks survival skills, evident in the constant errors made to fulfill power fantasies. The only consistent element is the dedication to the author's fetishes, which seem disconnected from real-life experiences. The erotica is notably poor, particularly due to the absence of consensual encounters on top of the recurring theme of deflowering women. The dialogue lacks realism, suggesting a disregard for female agency while simultaneously reflecting the author's fragile ego. While certain aspects of the content may appeal to some, the author's fixation on personal fantasies neglects the reader's enjoyment. Despite potential perceptions of the author as cultured or myself as weak-minded, the reality is far from it. As a war veteran from a prestigious military unit, I've experienced diverse situations, but this narrative lacks realism and adventure, offering little appeal. Ultimately, this is subpar erotica and a poorly crafted fantasy, likely conceived by an immature individual lacking the talent to create compelling narratives. Regarding recommendations, "Debauchery of the Village Chief" offers degeneracy within a story, while "The First Hunter" provides a compelling apocalyptic survival narrative. Both are preferable alternatives to the presented content, which lacks authenticity and quality.

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DaoistHerbz

Boring. The MC's brain is on his 🍆 He acts like a teenager full of hormones. ಠಿ⁠_⁠ಠಿ

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Lycrat
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Would've been more interesting if the names hadn't changed every so often from English to Chinese like a badly translated novel

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Mhay_xxi

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ertrision88

The main character is black, if you like this kind of degenerate novels go for it, it's not my case at least. Besides, interracial relationships are unpleasant, even if it is with Asians or blacks.

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Umesh_Khatri_5607

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azazel1708

Love it, the more degenerate it is the more I love it

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HeavenSlayer

Overall it is a good idea and should be a good story but I don't like MC's character you know like a loser I don't if he matured later in the story but it a no for me.

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webnovel433

Before you decide to start reading go take a look at chapter 118 and 119 sigh...

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Fjdjjfjsjiwos

Anyway, I'll leave it here, thanks to the brave man who read the novel and gave us this information. If you liked what the author did in this novel, then you can't call yourself a man. Unfortunately, the author does not seem to be able to respond to comments, I would like to know what problems with his head made him write this in his novel.

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Yang_ki

this is a perfect novel for apocalypse harem lovers with a system there is everything u could ask for in these types of novels mc is smart cunning not simp at all also quite op . update stability is good 5/5writing quality 4/5story development is good and fast paced this novel is for degens

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HC_Pwnography

Let me summarize the first 16 or so chapters. he gets an OP system that is very vague and is acquired in the first chapter. THEN he rapes 3 girls following that.

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Spirit_Immortal

no YURI here big HAREM 😁 only thing bad is that MC previous gals get overshadowed

10mth
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Anakin_Lost

this is the cringiest protagonist I've ever read. I'm not sure about effective creation of an evil character but this is not it. it started off like Uncle p*RN and did not even have the courtesy of being a good shelter genre novel.

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Spirit_Immortal

don't read if u r feminist otherwise it's a gem 💎💎💎 for me need more chapters

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DaoisthiEB5M

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ASM_92
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Great start, the first 50 chapters are great. But, all of this is the easy part. The world building the future plot will determine how good this story can be.

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MajidX200

The novel "Apocalypse King System" first used this photo. The same photo and the same name cause people to get confused.

11mth
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Reality_King4ever

I like this is there any more like were MC makes a city in a apocalypse and only women are allowed in that are his harem and has lots of seggs

11mth
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kamnevvai4eslav

It's a pity that I can't buy the sequel.😢😢😢😢😢

11mth
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supersilya

It is better and different from similar stories.

11mth
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DaoistzBeIL4

hilarious how the mc gets angry when he sees a world where vampires rule and humans are livestock but he treats humans the same way in his world. 1st he says he decides what do you with dogs (humans) then when others do the same he says humans are noble and gods favourite. completely new level of braindead hypocrisy that it's not even funny it's just annoying.

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2mth
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Walking_death

It's a copy of an existing novel Just one without an official translation

7mth
View 0 Replies
Newto
LV 4 Badge

Face slapping, death courting cultivation novel converted into zombie Apocalypse novel through ChatGPT[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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7mth
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Skollar

Hello, author. I found this novel suspiciously familiar with an another novel i found in internet, a chinese-language novel. Are you two the same person or not

img
7mth
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Smedzz
LV 15 Badge

This novel I believe shows when a coward and someone of low self esteem gets a bit of power 😂😂😂

8mth
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Aliiireza

99% is a copy of a Chinese novel that I read about 2 years ago, but I don't remember the name, if you are copying, at least remove the Chinese name.

8mth
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blancheart

Chinese nerds power trip... no imagination or creativity

8mth
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Forlorn_Wendigo

It's evident from the outset that the author lacks survival skills, evident in the constant errors made to fulfill power fantasies. The only consistent element is the dedication to the author's fetishes, which seem disconnected from real-life experiences. The erotica is notably poor, particularly due to the absence of consensual encounters on top of the recurring theme of deflowering women. The dialogue lacks realism, suggesting a disregard for female agency while simultaneously reflecting the author's fragile ego. While certain aspects of the content may appeal to some, the author's fixation on personal fantasies neglects the reader's enjoyment. Despite potential perceptions of the author as cultured or myself as weak-minded, the reality is far from it. As a war veteran from a prestigious military unit, I've experienced diverse situations, but this narrative lacks realism and adventure, offering little appeal. Ultimately, this is subpar erotica and a poorly crafted fantasy, likely conceived by an immature individual lacking the talent to create compelling narratives. Regarding recommendations, "Debauchery of the Village Chief" offers degeneracy within a story, while "The First Hunter" provides a compelling apocalyptic survival narrative. Both are preferable alternatives to the presented content, which lacks authenticity and quality.

8mth
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DaoistHerbz

Boring. The MC's brain is on his 🍆 He acts like a teenager full of hormones. ಠಿ⁠_⁠ಠಿ

8mth
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Lycrat
LV 13 Badge

Would've been more interesting if the names hadn't changed every so often from English to Chinese like a badly translated novel

9mth
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Mhay_xxi

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9mth
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ertrision88

The main character is black, if you like this kind of degenerate novels go for it, it's not my case at least. Besides, interracial relationships are unpleasant, even if it is with Asians or blacks.

9mth
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Umesh_Khatri_5607

💨👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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azazel1708

Love it, the more degenerate it is the more I love it

10mth
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HeavenSlayer

Overall it is a good idea and should be a good story but I don't like MC's character you know like a loser I don't if he matured later in the story but it a no for me.

10mth
View 0 Replies
webnovel433

Before you decide to start reading go take a look at chapter 118 and 119 sigh...

img
10mth
View 9 Replies
Fjdjjfjsjiwos

Anyway, I'll leave it here, thanks to the brave man who read the novel and gave us this information. If you liked what the author did in this novel, then you can't call yourself a man. Unfortunately, the author does not seem to be able to respond to comments, I would like to know what problems with his head made him write this in his novel.

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10mth
View 25 Replies
Tranmaxx_Agency

Experience the awe-inspiring tale penned by an exceptional author. Are you seeking a captivating trailer video that befits your remarkable book? Connect with me on FB at "TRANMAXX PRO" for more info

10mth
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Yang_ki

this is a perfect novel for apocalypse harem lovers with a system there is everything u could ask for in these types of novels mc is smart cunning not simp at all also quite op . update stability is good 5/5writing quality 4/5story development is good and fast paced this novel is for degens

10mth
View 2 Replies
HC_Pwnography

Let me summarize the first 16 or so chapters. he gets an OP system that is very vague and is acquired in the first chapter. THEN he rapes 3 girls following that.

Reveal Spoiler
10mth
View 14 Replies
Spirit_Immortal

no YURI here big HAREM 😁 only thing bad is that MC previous gals get overshadowed

10mth
View 5 Replies
Anakin_Lost

this is the cringiest protagonist I've ever read. I'm not sure about effective creation of an evil character but this is not it. it started off like Uncle p*RN and did not even have the courtesy of being a good shelter genre novel.

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10mth
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Spirit_Immortal

don't read if u r feminist otherwise it's a gem 💎💎💎 for me need more chapters

10mth
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DaoisthiEB5M

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10mth
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ASM_92
LV 14 Badge

Great start, the first 50 chapters are great. But, all of this is the easy part. The world building the future plot will determine how good this story can be.

11mth
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MajidX200

The novel "Apocalypse King System" first used this photo. The same photo and the same name cause people to get confused.

11mth
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Reality_King4ever

I like this is there any more like were MC makes a city in a apocalypse and only women are allowed in that are his harem and has lots of seggs

11mth
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kamnevvai4eslav

It's a pity that I can't buy the sequel.😢😢😢😢😢

11mth
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supersilya

It is better and different from similar stories.

11mth
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