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Besides the rather Eh grammar. The actual plot is pretty freaking good. The author got Kol rather spot on, and some of the explanations for stuff like magic, is pretty interesting and plausible. The only hope I have is that the author gives him a halfway decent love interest (or love interests) like Bonnie, Davina, or even Caroline. (Or two of them if they want)
This is fun. I'm loving the personality of the characters. I can feel the distinctness of each. The writing formatting isn't my favorite and could potentially be improved upon more but, I like it. This story has a lot of potential and I hope you continue and improve.
this is purely tradition and self motivation kindly give reviews and tell me where to improve I will probably release more chapters today
I like the smoothness of the rewrite I look forward to the continuation and hope to see mc go to another world of magic like charmed to see how it would go or another magical world like teen Wolf to see what happened with The originals in those worlds
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Besides the rather Eh grammar. The actual plot is pretty freaking good. The author got Kol rather spot on, and some of the explanations for stuff like magic, is pretty interesting and plausible. The only hope I have is that the author gives him a halfway decent love interest (or love interests) like Bonnie, Davina, or even Caroline. (Or two of them if they want)
This is fun. I'm loving the personality of the characters. I can feel the distinctness of each. The writing formatting isn't my favorite and could potentially be improved upon more but, I like it. This story has a lot of potential and I hope you continue and improve.
this is purely tradition and self motivation kindly give reviews and tell me where to improve I will probably release more chapters today
I like the smoothness of the rewrite I look forward to the continuation and hope to see mc go to another world of magic like charmed to see how it would go or another magical world like teen Wolf to see what happened with The originals in those worlds