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FIRST OF ALL I RECCOMEND THIS TO ANYONE WHO IS LOOKING FOR A GREAT READ!! Now on to the small review I am rushing before work. So far I am absolutely in love with this story as it was much needed due to authors only writing stories with Cliche tropes like where the MC is dense, stupid, strong but acts weak and let's everyone walk on him. Or the authors that cave to the harem haters, which I don't understand at all, why any man would be against a harem in a fantasy story. Fantasy stories are stories that we can't have in real life, but they act as if they are trying to act noble as if their girl is next to them judging them smh. Anyway, this story has a new refreshing power system with the monoliths, also it has good balance and is realistic in the fact that the MC focuses both on increasing his strength and playing with the girls in his life. Also, I like how he chooses to stand up and act like a man instead of hiding with his head down. I will continue to read and support this novel and thank you, author, for the great story so far.
If you’re finding a good harem novel then I recommend it. After I’ve read 230 chapters I discovered there are no yuri, no netori, no netorare or anything that reader hate. There are balanced between characters development, romance, slice of life, adventures, action. Now it’s my top 5th favorite harem novel. Thanks the author.
I love this book idk why its not mpre popular. I hope it keeps going like this. Author i hope you finish this work of art. I wish you the best :)
So I can only rate it as this right now because I feel like it’s good it could even become spectacular if the story wasn’t allways all over the place, I feel like you forget what you have said previously in the story like your making silly little mistakes which plenty of people have commented on here, which I believe you have read a few of the ones you noticed.
This book is a fantastic read because of the Rollercoaster amount of events that put you on the edge of your seat as if you were actually living the main characters life. The emotions hit you hard in the first couple of chapters and then get you hooked
This novel is so good! It should be in the top 10 every month. The characters are well thought up with unique personalities that feel real. The world was built and explained wonderfully by the author, and the plot is fun and exciting. Plus, the writing quality is good, and the chapters are updated consistently.
Hey author do you have a patreon where we’re able to support you and read your story? I refuse to give any money to these scum bag at WebNovel. Thanks in advance
I enjoyed this up until the point you find out MC has a hidden past that he doesn't remember. The author did a very similar thing in another of his books. I understand it adds some complexity, but I completely dislike the extra "mystery". The story was perfectly fine with him going back in time once. Other than that point I thought it was fantastic. Unfortunately it was too big of an annoyance for me to continue past chapter 60ish when we found out.
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5/5 from me anyways! Enjoying this book a lot. Please don’t stop updating!!!!
So far so good, I only read chapter 1 and it instantly got my attention. This has a lot of potential to be in the top 10 novels. Keep up the good work, Author. Stay healthy
Great story so far can’t wait for more it’s really up there in my favorite web novels
I'd give it a 5 if the name wasn't so cliche/trope like. really their name is Asura (Demonic/warrior etc) Fenix(misspelling/alternate spelling of Phoenix)
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the story is very interesting. I love reading this story and hope for more from the author.
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who is in cover? that red eye and black hair girl. sauce please author /................................................................................
One of the best new novels on WN. It’s got everything a strong MC and harem. I’d give it 5 if there were some things left for you to wonder about. I’m at chapter 150, id go into detail but don’t want to give spoilers. I’d definitely recommend this novel to anyone
The only complaint is that there are not enough chapters. The story is amazing and I’m sad there is only one chapter a day. Favorite novel right now!!!
There is one question I want to ask before starting this novel. Is he hiding the fact that he can use magic after going back in time? I absolutely hate it when someone of noble origin hides his strength because I can understand it if it's a commoner but what does a noble has to fear? He has political & monetary power and he has abilities that can make him invincible so I hate it when authors make MC hide his power and take all that trash talk without doing anything back for the sake of "He gained power so he didn't care about others' opinion".
it seems very cool, the MC's powers are very interesting and the relationships it has so far(chp 40) are enjoyable in my opinion. One weak point I found is world-building and the fact that the protagonist's magical spells and powers aren't really explained. I think the story has great potential, even if it's harem. keep up the good work!!
I absolutely loved this novel so far. It has great potential. I just request the writer to continue writing it. Also, I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
I just realised that you're re-writen this, I finally found it after a while ☺️
I am really enjoying this novel so far. It has great characters and fights. I am hoping for more characters developing and world building . Keep up with your good work.
FIRST OF ALL I RECCOMEND THIS TO ANYONE WHO IS LOOKING FOR A GREAT READ!! Now on to the small review I am rushing before work. So far I am absolutely in love with this story as it was much needed due to authors only writing stories with Cliche tropes like where the MC is dense, stupid, strong but acts weak and let's everyone walk on him. Or the authors that cave to the harem haters, which I don't understand at all, why any man would be against a harem in a fantasy story. Fantasy stories are stories that we can't have in real life, but they act as if they are trying to act noble as if their girl is next to them judging them smh. Anyway, this story has a new refreshing power system with the monoliths, also it has good balance and is realistic in the fact that the MC focuses both on increasing his strength and playing with the girls in his life. Also, I like how he chooses to stand up and act like a man instead of hiding with his head down. I will continue to read and support this novel and thank you, author, for the great story so far.
If you’re finding a good harem novel then I recommend it. After I’ve read 230 chapters I discovered there are no yuri, no netori, no netorare or anything that reader hate. There are balanced between characters development, romance, slice of life, adventures, action. Now it’s my top 5th favorite harem novel. Thanks the author.
I love this book idk why its not mpre popular. I hope it keeps going like this. Author i hope you finish this work of art. I wish you the best :)
So I can only rate it as this right now because I feel like it’s good it could even become spectacular if the story wasn’t allways all over the place, I feel like you forget what you have said previously in the story like your making silly little mistakes which plenty of people have commented on here, which I believe you have read a few of the ones you noticed.
This book is a fantastic read because of the Rollercoaster amount of events that put you on the edge of your seat as if you were actually living the main characters life. The emotions hit you hard in the first couple of chapters and then get you hooked
This novel is so good! It should be in the top 10 every month. The characters are well thought up with unique personalities that feel real. The world was built and explained wonderfully by the author, and the plot is fun and exciting. Plus, the writing quality is good, and the chapters are updated consistently.
Hey author do you have a patreon where we’re able to support you and read your story? I refuse to give any money to these scum bag at WebNovel. Thanks in advance
I enjoyed this up until the point you find out MC has a hidden past that he doesn't remember. The author did a very similar thing in another of his books. I understand it adds some complexity, but I completely dislike the extra "mystery". The story was perfectly fine with him going back in time once. Other than that point I thought it was fantastic. Unfortunately it was too big of an annoyance for me to continue past chapter 60ish when we found out.
Reveal Spoiler 5/5 from me anyways! Enjoying this book a lot. Please don’t stop updating!!!!
So far so good, I only read chapter 1 and it instantly got my attention. This has a lot of potential to be in the top 10 novels. Keep up the good work, Author. Stay healthy
Great story so far can’t wait for more it’s really up there in my favorite web novels
I'd give it a 5 if the name wasn't so cliche/trope like. really their name is Asura (Demonic/warrior etc) Fenix(misspelling/alternate spelling of Phoenix)
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the story is very interesting. I love reading this story and hope for more from the author.
Reveal Spoiler who is in cover? that red eye and black hair girl. sauce please author /................................................................................
One of the best new novels on WN. It’s got everything a strong MC and harem. I’d give it 5 if there were some things left for you to wonder about. I’m at chapter 150, id go into detail but don’t want to give spoilers. I’d definitely recommend this novel to anyone
The only complaint is that there are not enough chapters. The story is amazing and I’m sad there is only one chapter a day. Favorite novel right now!!!
There is one question I want to ask before starting this novel. Is he hiding the fact that he can use magic after going back in time? I absolutely hate it when someone of noble origin hides his strength because I can understand it if it's a commoner but what does a noble has to fear? He has political & monetary power and he has abilities that can make him invincible so I hate it when authors make MC hide his power and take all that trash talk without doing anything back for the sake of "He gained power so he didn't care about others' opinion".
it seems very cool, the MC's powers are very interesting and the relationships it has so far(chp 40) are enjoyable in my opinion. One weak point I found is world-building and the fact that the protagonist's magical spells and powers aren't really explained. I think the story has great potential, even if it's harem. keep up the good work!!
I absolutely loved this novel so far. It has great potential. I just request the writer to continue writing it. Also, I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
I just realised that you're re-writen this, I finally found it after a while ☺️
I am really enjoying this novel so far. It has great characters and fights. I am hoping for more characters developing and world building . Keep up with your good work.