Harry Potter with Technology System

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ErickHenrique_BR

I didn't like that an AI is manipulating the MC, in fact, it seems that the MC doesn't know how to do anything without the AI, another reason is that it's a technological System but why doesn't everything he does have anything to do with creating technology? It seems more like a help system and not a technological one, if he was just going to learn magic it would be better to put the title as a magic system

LV 11

SalveYing

I just read about 30 chapters, and this is my initial review. I don't like the system, or rather Nigel. I don't know who the real protagonist is, Nigel or Harry? Nigel guides him at an exaggerated level. For example, 'Well, Harry, let's manipulate your aunt,' or 'Harry, your aunt is sensitive, you need to say some nice words to deliver the final blow.' That's not guidance; it's manipulation. It could be called 'Reincarnation as the Harry Potter system' since it acts like an independent person with knowledge of HP. Also, why is it called a technological system if it doesn't bring any technology? Finally, the pace is too slow in my opinion. I'm not trying to offend anyone. Have a good day.

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Ep_E_X

I understand that Harry needs basic knowledge to survive in the early stage but the author overdid it by integrating an overly intelligent Ai that seems to manipulate him.. The idea is actually good but if the Ai is more like "great sage" from tensura who analyze the surrounding and then make conclusion to guide the mc it's much better because it gives the reader a better look of how different this harry is,reader can see what type of Harry we can see in this fanfic by seeing how he decides things without too much help from an Ai.. we can also see character development in this like when he make a mistake..the Ai and Harry can develop together

LV 5

Zaelum

As always pretty good read. But if I have to be nitpicky, author, can you make this one a little bit longer than normal?. Just to make us be able to immerse in the world, I really love Harry Potter!.

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Flaiver

I like the novel. But I came to read about Harry Potter and techno-magic, and what I got was a novel about family problems. It was interesting at the beginning but already chapter 13 and the plot is not moving forward. Just to be honest, I don’t care about Pitunya, she’s not an intern to me at all as a person. I hope that this psychology session will end soon and the story about techno-magic will begin.

LV 15

HeavenlyIko

Author the stories is good but, is it technology system? cause I don't see it, and if it is......it's taking forever no???

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Orc

You did a bit of touch here and there and specially liked the lily and thief James well done ... hopefully it build up a bond with snap 🫰 sad but great guy

LV 13

AlwaysHasBeen

I haven't read the story yet, but considiring it's description is pretty interesting and the author's other works. I guess waiting for more chapters is worth it and here's a random meme for you to take.

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Demikus

It sounds interesting but development of the novel is very slow. It seems like author will describe every day, every lesson in this story, so after 50-60 chapters boy will be finally sort in Gryffindor.

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XCouchPotatoX

overall, it's good. it's just the pace is too slow for me. 100+ in and we're still at Christmas break of first year. first 50 being pre-hogwarts. while I love me a good HP fanfic, 60-70+ chapters(just guesstimating) for each year feels a bit too much for me.

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kid_broly_745

it is an amazing story that fills out characters from the original Series such as Harry's aunt or even adding characters that make the story better in its own way reviewed at ch 55

LV 14

hyorinmaru

Slow-paced story. 52 chapters in, and Harry just now sent his acceptance letter. I have no problem with that, but not everyone likes a slow pace. Not fast, but moving nonetheless.

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darknightofAnime

Super duper super duper super duper super duper super super super super

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Jetboy76

This looks like it will be a great novel I’m wondering what style of Dumbledore you will go with the kind funny weird and powerful style or the evil and powerful one? It’s very important because it would change how the MC responds to things?

LV 14

ramon14680

I like it. It’s a story about Harry that gets a technology system with an ai that guides him. The writing quality is good. I can’t see any grammatical or vocabular errors. The only negative thing I have to say is that I think you are overdoing it with the ai Nigel. Every four paragraphs there is Nigel giving advice with a metaphor or a reference. And I like that but you do it a bit too much. I don’t need half a chapter of the AI saying that the mind is like a puzzle or that manipulation is all about subtlety. So I recommend doing it just a bit less.

LV 4

GamerFTW

10/10 story but will u fast track the Hogwarts arc since for me personally due to the amount of fanfic there is anything related to the 7 years at Hogwarts is repetitive and a bit dull tho i can see that u are a really good author that's put passion and dedication into your works

LV 4

GamerFTW

this is an absolute gem I Love its one of the best FF I Found and i like how the story is going so far. and i like what ur doing with petunia i always felt she was hurt by what happened with Lily questions are u gonna add Different magic systems for different races and Times because to me i personally believe the Wizard magic is A amalgamation of different magic systems that have been lost or forgotten?

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michael_whiteley

I enjoyed reading this story so far. Thank you, author kun

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Kakashi_3194

Love it a good take on the Harry Potter world

LV 14

AvidReader962

I would have to say that the story as well written, the characters are multi faceted, and have depth, and the world is growing to be interesting, and makes me look forward to how things will develop. This version of Harry is certainly intelligent, and makes the best of the situation he finds himself in, and the system he gains is incredibly useful, with a very British dry humor system, AI to come along with it. Although it might be slightly slow at times, I will say that I do think the story is definitely worth your time to give a try, and I think most people would enjoy it.