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An FF with an interesting premise, but its execution leaves room for improvement. While the story itself has potential, but it's held back by typos and weird sentence structures that make it hard to read smoothly. Still, it's not unreadable, but those little slip-ups can take you out of the story.
An FF with an interesting premise, but its execution leaves room for improvement. While the story itself has potential, but it's held back by typos and weird sentence structures that make it hard to read smoothly. Still, it's not unreadable, but those little slip-ups can take you out of the story.