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It's good. The grammar is pulling the story down, though. It destroys the flow of the story, making us more conscious of your mistakes. Like for example, it destroys the atmosphere you're trying to create.
it's ok if you want to read to pass time it's not that great it's not bad etheir it just bland he is just saitama with little bit of emotion.
I hope the wifu will be Tatsumaki not the usual fubki, of course non would refuse extra food😉
C juste moi ou il manque quelque chose. T'es chapitre à chaque fois j'ai l'impression qu'il manque quelque chose [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I was excited for it, but the Mc is just a Saitama with the plot knowledge and a system, he just watch TV all day and act like he doesn't care about anything. The worst for me is that he just forget about his system all the time. Every character that he copy he could get 1% stronger, but for some reason, in 13 chapters he had just copied 3 characters, besides meeting more than 10 that he could have copied... Idk, if the author doesn't want to make the Mc op, at least make a time limitation for the system and don't just ignore characters that the Mc can copy
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In my opinion, it's kind of meh. But I don't really like comedy romances. So romance isn't bad, it's just not my style.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
summary everything was great expect for few mistake.PERSONALLY first and second chapter were hard to read but after the story become better and better
"Cool, yeah. Cool, very." It seems like a short and informal message expressing agreement or approval.
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Man it's good story and I liked it and romantic is good like full moon night near Lake no words need the silence gives the beauty to it and mc op and he is not arrogant i hope you restart it no need to change anything just continue from where you stopped so the journey that may start again thanks for the work
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It's good. The grammar is pulling the story down, though. It destroys the flow of the story, making us more conscious of your mistakes. Like for example, it destroys the atmosphere you're trying to create.
it's ok if you want to read to pass time it's not that great it's not bad etheir it just bland he is just saitama with little bit of emotion.
I hope the wifu will be Tatsumaki not the usual fubki, of course non would refuse extra food😉
C juste moi ou il manque quelque chose. T'es chapitre à chaque fois j'ai l'impression qu'il manque quelque chose [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I was excited for it, but the Mc is just a Saitama with the plot knowledge and a system, he just watch TV all day and act like he doesn't care about anything. The worst for me is that he just forget about his system all the time. Every character that he copy he could get 1% stronger, but for some reason, in 13 chapters he had just copied 3 characters, besides meeting more than 10 that he could have copied... Idk, if the author doesn't want to make the Mc op, at least make a time limitation for the system and don't just ignore characters that the Mc can copy
Les humains non pas de power [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
In my opinion, it's kind of meh. But I don't really like comedy romances. So romance isn't bad, it's just not my style.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
summary everything was great expect for few mistake.PERSONALLY first and second chapter were hard to read but after the story become better and better
"Cool, yeah. Cool, very." It seems like a short and informal message expressing agreement or approval.
Reveal Spoiler
Man it's good story and I liked it and romantic is good like full moon night near Lake no words need the silence gives the beauty to it and mc op and he is not arrogant i hope you restart it no need to change anything just continue from where you stopped so the journey that may start again thanks for the work