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It is a simple work but very pleasant to read thanks to its good writing and fluidity. moreover, the fact of giving a system to someone other than the MC gives a feeling of novelty. I recommend this work to anyone who appreciates apocalyptic themes and the relationships between characters.
I must say that even though I have never been into post-apocalyptic sci-fy, this novel really just flows. The language is simple but captivating. The descriptions are just enough to give off the exact feeling that the author intended. There is almost no filler paragraphs. I'm really enjoying it.
I am not familiar with the genre, but what I can surly say that I Like the book.The plotline of the book is really intriguing. and cover of the book is beautiful
Definitely a different change of pace for who gets the system in the story. But I do have a thing for sci-fi stories and don't think I have any regrets about reading this novel so far. It can stay in my library and I'd recommend giving it a shot! it's been worth the time. [img=update]
The book isint perfect but its been a while since I had a good scifi read not sure If Its gina be Kingdom building but I sure do hope so
The concept of giving a system for the female lead Instead of the MC feels fresh and Innovative at least for me this Is the first book where I've seen this being done, the nanites might be a bit too good for the MC but from what I've read the author seems to be putting some limitations on them and Its explained In the chapters sure the book Isnt perfect but It scratches the scratch for those who are craving for some sci-fi.
For fellow sci-fi fans, this book Is definitely for you, so far only supersoldiers In power armor have been Introduced among various monsters with zombies and mutants but hopefully the Author will start Introducing mechs and maybe spaceships In the future.
Author here so personally I think currently my book is worth 3.6 stars, writing quality before posting I go through the chap with Grammarly and personally read It again after posting so there are one or two grammatical mistakes per chap, stability updates so far I have been updating 1 chap per day steadily at the exact same time not counting the bonus chaps for reviews so for this I'm shamelessly giving myself 5 stars, story development although I think It's developing pretty good Im still giving myself 4 stars because I know that I can write It better but my lack of skill as a writer prevents me from doing that, next character design I think I put In a lot of thought In designing the main characters but because I don't focus on secondary ones that much IM giving myself 3 stars, lastly world background Its only worth 3 stars because the world backgrounds concept Isnt unique Im, not the first one to write a book where the MC keeps jumping from the future to the past. Anyways If you have any questions or suggestions regarding the story level them here.
The story is really different from what we usually read, and it's really captivating from the starting chapters. The way ML & FL act, behave, and talk is very charming & funny. I'm sure if you are a Sci-Fi and System Lover - You will Find this Story Very Interesting. I Will Just Say Writing Quality and World BG is Good enough. Overall Give it a Try - You Will Love it!
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The writing quality is decent it can use bit of cleaning up, but is still very clear. The story has a fast development but it's clear enough you don't get lost. As for the world there is lot to be filled in, but the description is god enough that you can understand what is going on. Overall a decent book just need more flare.
I like it , great job , keep going! Reccomend it to everyone , who like this book genre!
It is a simple work but very pleasant to read thanks to its good writing and fluidity. moreover, the fact of giving a system to someone other than the MC gives a feeling of novelty. I recommend this work to anyone who appreciates apocalyptic themes and the relationships between characters.
I must say that even though I have never been into post-apocalyptic sci-fy, this novel really just flows. The language is simple but captivating. The descriptions are just enough to give off the exact feeling that the author intended. There is almost no filler paragraphs. I'm really enjoying it.
I am not familiar with the genre, but what I can surly say that I Like the book.The plotline of the book is really intriguing. and cover of the book is beautiful
Definitely a different change of pace for who gets the system in the story. But I do have a thing for sci-fi stories and don't think I have any regrets about reading this novel so far. It can stay in my library and I'd recommend giving it a shot! it's been worth the time. [img=update]
The book isint perfect but its been a while since I had a good scifi read not sure If Its gina be Kingdom building but I sure do hope so
The concept of giving a system for the female lead Instead of the MC feels fresh and Innovative at least for me this Is the first book where I've seen this being done, the nanites might be a bit too good for the MC but from what I've read the author seems to be putting some limitations on them and Its explained In the chapters sure the book Isnt perfect but It scratches the scratch for those who are craving for some sci-fi.
For fellow sci-fi fans, this book Is definitely for you, so far only supersoldiers In power armor have been Introduced among various monsters with zombies and mutants but hopefully the Author will start Introducing mechs and maybe spaceships In the future.
Author here so personally I think currently my book is worth 3.6 stars, writing quality before posting I go through the chap with Grammarly and personally read It again after posting so there are one or two grammatical mistakes per chap, stability updates so far I have been updating 1 chap per day steadily at the exact same time not counting the bonus chaps for reviews so for this I'm shamelessly giving myself 5 stars, story development although I think It's developing pretty good Im still giving myself 4 stars because I know that I can write It better but my lack of skill as a writer prevents me from doing that, next character design I think I put In a lot of thought In designing the main characters but because I don't focus on secondary ones that much IM giving myself 3 stars, lastly world background Its only worth 3 stars because the world backgrounds concept Isnt unique Im, not the first one to write a book where the MC keeps jumping from the future to the past. Anyways If you have any questions or suggestions regarding the story level them here.
The story is really different from what we usually read, and it's really captivating from the starting chapters. The way ML & FL act, behave, and talk is very charming & funny. I'm sure if you are a Sci-Fi and System Lover - You will Find this Story Very Interesting. I Will Just Say Writing Quality and World BG is Good enough. Overall Give it a Try - You Will Love it!
Reveal Spoiler The writing quality is decent it can use bit of cleaning up, but is still very clear. The story has a fast development but it's clear enough you don't get lost. As for the world there is lot to be filled in, but the description is god enough that you can understand what is going on. Overall a decent book just need more flare.
I like it , great job , keep going! Reccomend it to everyone , who like this book genre!