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Hopefully I do not sound condescending, but I rarely give 5-star to writing quality. But, this story wholeheartedly deserves it.Story development is on pace that I am truly fond of. A lot of times fan fiction writers and sometimes even normal writers- write or pace a story like they are running from demons or something, they jump so high pace so fast that they simply forget about everything other than either their wish superiority or harem. This pace right here is what I aspire to bring in my stories or make it even better 😅.At first, when I read that the soul of the MC is placed inside Dany Rand, and that he will become iron fist or be related to Kun lun, I was not impressed at all. This was because of my preconceived notions and the representation he had either love action wise or in animated series. But so far it is truly delectable 👏🏼.I gave updating stability 4-stars out of spite 😂. The story is becoming so spellbinding that I want to just sit there and binge read without taking a break or lifting my head, and yet, here we are, waiting for the chapter release...Well, world background- it is Marvel. Although, I would say- many authors, even readers take it in stride, when the world is set in some big and known franchise. But I have also read some stories where authors were able to create their own worlds yet it assimilated so seamlessly with the existing, that it just felt.Now, this is a humble request- Author san please for the love of all that is harmonious and Cats, no harem. Please keep it one girl or none at all. Please 🙏🏽🙇🏽
dude you are awesome. you writing a chapter of full 7 k words is just awesome. the story is amazing.
I like the story so far and honestly hope that you keep going until you finish it. My only problem with it so far is just that sometimes it feels like the chapters are info dumps but that probably because they chapters are so long. I’m just not used to long chapters on WebNovel lol. Everything is well written so far, not many issues with punctuation or spelling. I like the characters background and the setup for potential arcs in the future. Hopefully everything keeps going well enough and this story with massive potential doesn’t devolve into some super massive harem fantasy that I find on here all the time. I do have to ask if this is going to be like really slow-burn or are there going to be small time skips to move things along?
I fkin love this. The writing quality is brilliant. But please don't make this a harem or make the MC blast off into space any time soon. Hope to be here for a long ride Author.
This fanfic is one of very few that is very detailed and i love it. Although I hate that mc is a bit weak but i understand need for development and I got problem with the wishes but what can I do anyway keep up author 👍[img=recommend]
Hopefully I do not sound condescending, but I rarely give 5-star to writing quality. But, this story wholeheartedly deserves it.Story development is on pace that I am truly fond of. A lot of times fan fiction writers and sometimes even normal writers- write or pace a story like they are running from demons or something, they jump so high pace so fast that they simply forget about everything other than either their wish superiority or harem. This pace right here is what I aspire to bring in my stories or make it even better 😅.At first, when I read that the soul of the MC is placed inside Dany Rand, and that he will become iron fist or be related to Kun lun, I was not impressed at all. This was because of my preconceived notions and the representation he had either love action wise or in animated series. But so far it is truly delectable 👏🏼.I gave updating stability 4-stars out of spite 😂. The story is becoming so spellbinding that I want to just sit there and binge read without taking a break or lifting my head, and yet, here we are, waiting for the chapter release...Well, world background- it is Marvel. Although, I would say- many authors, even readers take it in stride, when the world is set in some big and known franchise. But I have also read some stories where authors were able to create their own worlds yet it assimilated so seamlessly with the existing, that it just felt.Now, this is a humble request- Author san please for the love of all that is harmonious and Cats, no harem. Please keep it one girl or none at all. Please 🙏🏽🙇🏽
dude you are awesome. you writing a chapter of full 7 k words is just awesome. the story is amazing.
I like the story so far and honestly hope that you keep going until you finish it. My only problem with it so far is just that sometimes it feels like the chapters are info dumps but that probably because they chapters are so long. I’m just not used to long chapters on WebNovel lol. Everything is well written so far, not many issues with punctuation or spelling. I like the characters background and the setup for potential arcs in the future. Hopefully everything keeps going well enough and this story with massive potential doesn’t devolve into some super massive harem fantasy that I find on here all the time. I do have to ask if this is going to be like really slow-burn or are there going to be small time skips to move things along?
I fkin love this. The writing quality is brilliant. But please don't make this a harem or make the MC blast off into space any time soon. Hope to be here for a long ride Author.
This fanfic is one of very few that is very detailed and i love it. Although I hate that mc is a bit weak but i understand need for development and I got problem with the wishes but what can I do anyway keep up author 👍[img=recommend]