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Please more sir please me and my bf read this and ive reread it 6 times hoping for uodate pls sir, it is actually a very interesting and developed story. I didnt enjoy it at first but i absolutely love the way you write, ahhhh
Genuinely please update this, it has a lot of untapped potential. such a good read
A Flash Thompson fanfic where Flash becomes The Flash. Good story. Keep it up.
How about doing a Superboy story? There aren't many and the ones that are are either bad or abandoned ...........................................................................................................
Author you have improved beyond recognition.. i like this fanfic.. No Harem, The Flash , Author Fking know origin story , medium level of flowery stuff(so tolerable and still fun)... would update this review after 30 chapters (this review is after 10th chapter was uploaded)
Amazing almost no grammar problems You kept the character personality as close to the comics and cant wait for more chapter Really hope you dont drop barely any good speedsters/the flash ff
...Blud why'd you stop the other fanfic? Blud... This one better last and not be castrated else I'll cut yours.
Please more sir please me and my bf read this and ive reread it 6 times hoping for uodate pls sir, it is actually a very interesting and developed story. I didnt enjoy it at first but i absolutely love the way you write, ahhhh
Genuinely please update this, it has a lot of untapped potential. such a good read
A Flash Thompson fanfic where Flash becomes The Flash. Good story. Keep it up.
How about doing a Superboy story? There aren't many and the ones that are are either bad or abandoned ...........................................................................................................
Author you have improved beyond recognition.. i like this fanfic.. No Harem, The Flash , Author Fking know origin story , medium level of flowery stuff(so tolerable and still fun)... would update this review after 30 chapters (this review is after 10th chapter was uploaded)
Amazing almost no grammar problems You kept the character personality as close to the comics and cant wait for more chapter Really hope you dont drop barely any good speedsters/the flash ff
...Blud why'd you stop the other fanfic? Blud... This one better last and not be castrated else I'll cut yours.
this have one of the biggest potential please come back and update