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I have read many dxd fanfictions but only seen different content.If you ask me your story is good. It sad that it is discontinued.
The author has not posted in sever months, so the story is most likely dead. the story was decent, some parts were difficult to understand due to a potential language barrier.
Ok at first I love this story, it had the character development for the mc. It had amazing side and supporting characters. But after awhile it kinda got annoying and don’t get me started on the writing quality but after getting to chapter 49 I have fallen in love with the story again. I love how the mc took on a father figure role for riser and his team. He still stupidly OP but at the same time he’s not throwing his power around and acting like a complete psychopath. Sure some of the characters I feel like are just filler but as the story continues I believe the the author adds filler chapters so they can take a break. Regardless of that I hope you continue the story because i really want to see how they all react to not only his power but also hiw far he has come as a person, when they believed he would simply die at a young age because he doesn’t have their family’s traits. So author of this story if you read this then please add more updates to it because at this point i need to see how it ends. I love this story and I don’t want it to just end here.
bro are you going to continue this story please 😭 answer 🙏🙏🙏 I'm i'm incing of waiting to the next chapter
aunque hubo momentos donde la historia podría dar más!!! estoy satisfecho de esta gran historia y como está tomando el rumbo sobró las cosas, aunque hay momentos en los que deja mucha emoción pero eso está bien , gracias por esta grandiosa historia !!!
Really enjoyable story. while the power levels do get a bit out of hand it is still isn't as bad as dxd cannon due to the extra 200 years. Love the changes to some of the characters.
love the books...seeing Issei and the bunch getting slapped always the best,, every FF that i read always issei is the MC,,getting to read ff like this always the best
No le doy un 5 por la falta de desarrollo de muchos personajes, pero la historia principal esta bien ( mi recomendación es que desarrolle un poco mas los personajes secundarios con flashbacks o historias de fondo de estos como a la nobleza del mc )
this fan fiction is good, not the best but it's a great story!! I'm enjoying it
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Decent story with nice development a bit of a powerwank but the description mentioned that so it's okay. The review box should have a character counter.
Love the story cuz it is different from others cuz almost all of dxd ff is Pokemon catching but he maintains the love interest slowly but can you post character pic plz
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I always enjoy a good revenge fanfic especially since this revenge fiction is unique in its own way instead of the typical training in using the verse's magic and then stomping on everyone. This fiction actually develops the character properly so that he has his own unique skills
When is our ‘‘revenge’’ going to start at cause this point I can’t take it and want to read how the Gremory family realizing there mistake.
love this story so far hope for more content soon [img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=update]
Мне нравится, хороший сюжет, интересно посмотреть на взаимодействие персонажей. Главный герой не собирает девушек как покемонов. И не похоже что его единственная цель это стать самым сильным для того чтобы... Просто чтобы быть самым сильным. Он что-то создаёт, развивает свой пантентон, набирает людей, пока что не упирается своей крутость. Так что жду будущих взаимодействий с главными героями и его семьёй, а также реакции их реакции на всё это.
Average ff light romance with happy lucky undertone no originality .......................................................................................................................................................................
The storyline had the potential to be engaging if the author hadn't spent so much time criticizing the Gremory family. It feels like a significant waste, especially since the plot follows a familiar fanfic trope of the main character being reborn as a Gremory without clan traits and enduring abuse. Despite the protagonist being stated as intelligent, it doesn't come across convincingly. Writing a genuinely intelligent character requires a high level of intelligence, and unfortunately, the author doesn't reflect this. The story's pacing is problematic, and the overall grammar and writing quality could be improved. There's a lack of focus on the world-building aspect of the DxD universe, with many chapters dominated by the protagonist's ramblings. At this point, the novel comes across as mediocre at best and, at worst, as subpar trash.
Great work!...im into a fanfic which have its own story in that world rather than existing just for canon characters.
The start of the story sets up what should be a revenge story.Revenge of the forgotten is the title but I'm not seeing any revenge or emotions leading towards revenge. The main character acts like a teenager who did not live a second life. He might have been sheltered in his first life to the point he is a child mentally.Even as he ages I am still seeing lack of brain cells.The world development is going in a unique way I haven't seen. It leads me to wonder how it's going to be useful content wise.Hope you continue the story and finish and grow as an author. But I would not be surprised if this is dropped before 100 chapters.
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Reveal Spoiler I have read many dxd fanfictions but only seen different content.If you ask me your story is good. It sad that it is discontinued.
The author has not posted in sever months, so the story is most likely dead. the story was decent, some parts were difficult to understand due to a potential language barrier.
Ok at first I love this story, it had the character development for the mc. It had amazing side and supporting characters. But after awhile it kinda got annoying and don’t get me started on the writing quality but after getting to chapter 49 I have fallen in love with the story again. I love how the mc took on a father figure role for riser and his team. He still stupidly OP but at the same time he’s not throwing his power around and acting like a complete psychopath. Sure some of the characters I feel like are just filler but as the story continues I believe the the author adds filler chapters so they can take a break. Regardless of that I hope you continue the story because i really want to see how they all react to not only his power but also hiw far he has come as a person, when they believed he would simply die at a young age because he doesn’t have their family’s traits. So author of this story if you read this then please add more updates to it because at this point i need to see how it ends. I love this story and I don’t want it to just end here.
bro are you going to continue this story please 😭 answer 🙏🙏🙏 I'm i'm incing of waiting to the next chapter
aunque hubo momentos donde la historia podría dar más!!! estoy satisfecho de esta gran historia y como está tomando el rumbo sobró las cosas, aunque hay momentos en los que deja mucha emoción pero eso está bien , gracias por esta grandiosa historia !!!
Really enjoyable story. while the power levels do get a bit out of hand it is still isn't as bad as dxd cannon due to the extra 200 years. Love the changes to some of the characters.
love the books...seeing Issei and the bunch getting slapped always the best,, every FF that i read always issei is the MC,,getting to read ff like this always the best
No le doy un 5 por la falta de desarrollo de muchos personajes, pero la historia principal esta bien ( mi recomendación es que desarrolle un poco mas los personajes secundarios con flashbacks o historias de fondo de estos como a la nobleza del mc )
this fan fiction is good, not the best but it's a great story!! I'm enjoying it
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Decent story with nice development a bit of a powerwank but the description mentioned that so it's okay. The review box should have a character counter.
Love the story cuz it is different from others cuz almost all of dxd ff is Pokemon catching but he maintains the love interest slowly but can you post character pic plz
One of the worst things on this platform about DxD [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I always enjoy a good revenge fanfic especially since this revenge fiction is unique in its own way instead of the typical training in using the verse's magic and then stomping on everyone. This fiction actually develops the character properly so that he has his own unique skills
When is our ‘‘revenge’’ going to start at cause this point I can’t take it and want to read how the Gremory family realizing there mistake.
love this story so far hope for more content soon [img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=update]
Мне нравится, хороший сюжет, интересно посмотреть на взаимодействие персонажей. Главный герой не собирает девушек как покемонов. И не похоже что его единственная цель это стать самым сильным для того чтобы... Просто чтобы быть самым сильным. Он что-то создаёт, развивает свой пантентон, набирает людей, пока что не упирается своей крутость. Так что жду будущих взаимодействий с главными героями и его семьёй, а также реакции их реакции на всё это.
Average ff light romance with happy lucky undertone no originality .......................................................................................................................................................................
The storyline had the potential to be engaging if the author hadn't spent so much time criticizing the Gremory family. It feels like a significant waste, especially since the plot follows a familiar fanfic trope of the main character being reborn as a Gremory without clan traits and enduring abuse. Despite the protagonist being stated as intelligent, it doesn't come across convincingly. Writing a genuinely intelligent character requires a high level of intelligence, and unfortunately, the author doesn't reflect this. The story's pacing is problematic, and the overall grammar and writing quality could be improved. There's a lack of focus on the world-building aspect of the DxD universe, with many chapters dominated by the protagonist's ramblings. At this point, the novel comes across as mediocre at best and, at worst, as subpar trash.
Great work!...im into a fanfic which have its own story in that world rather than existing just for canon characters.
The start of the story sets up what should be a revenge story.Revenge of the forgotten is the title but I'm not seeing any revenge or emotions leading towards revenge. The main character acts like a teenager who did not live a second life. He might have been sheltered in his first life to the point he is a child mentally.Even as he ages I am still seeing lack of brain cells.The world development is going in a unique way I haven't seen. It leads me to wonder how it's going to be useful content wise.Hope you continue the story and finish and grow as an author. But I would not be surprised if this is dropped before 100 chapters.
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