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fue una buena fanfic el problema fue la escritura que me llegaba a confundir quién era el que hablaba.
GREAT STORY also please go show love to my dawg Hellal’s they’re new fanfic is about someone reincarnated as jinx in marvel yall should check it out!
Hello, I realy enjoyed reading this story,I'm not a big fan of the ending, but the whole story was really satisfying. I've been looking for a good Jinx x Male OC story since I discovered Arcane and there are not enough good or completed ones likes this one. I sincerely thank you for this quality work and wish you excellent continuation.
This is such an amazing, fabulous, endearing book this has to be continued I’m dying for it. Please let there be more 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃……….
I'm glad it isn't a harem like most stories, since it's very prevalent. Overall, it's a great short story for fun reading
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i love to the no harem and no lolicon so five star all of it and the story is good to i enjoying excited too I'm a Filipino and not good and English 🥰🥰🥲😓❤️💛💛🧡❤️
Ain't no way you like those things BUSTING in your mouth little bro"@RoyalProto"
Loved the story and the characters. One of the only good story’s with a jinx love interest that was good and didn’t get dropped.
The writing is pretty good though the MC is pretty useless from the start *according to the author it is intended so that Powder can turn into Jinx.* I just don't know if the MC would turn from Psycho to a better person or From Psycho to a mass murderer deranged demon lord cliche or something
based soley on the sinopsis i loved you sir author and i am sure your work will be great
Me gusta mucho, aunque este es el primer fanfic de Arcane que leo veo que tiene mucho potencial y espero mucho de el
there are a few chapters that characters have no expression when talking, Sometimes, I get bored when authors write like this: exampleme: "Is this kid really that scary?"friend: : "Yea, this little kid!" me: "Really!?"no expression, don't overdo that but overall, it's a good story.
The overall plot comes of as great especially since he doesn't eat people in front of Vi and the gang since ya know, he's supposed to be a child so 10/10.
just because jinx is the female lead you get 5 stars adult jinx best waifu :$ SpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoiler
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fue una buena fanfic el problema fue la escritura que me llegaba a confundir quién era el que hablaba.
GREAT STORY also please go show love to my dawg Hellal’s they’re new fanfic is about someone reincarnated as jinx in marvel yall should check it out!
Hello, I realy enjoyed reading this story,I'm not a big fan of the ending, but the whole story was really satisfying. I've been looking for a good Jinx x Male OC story since I discovered Arcane and there are not enough good or completed ones likes this one. I sincerely thank you for this quality work and wish you excellent continuation.
This is such an amazing, fabulous, endearing book this has to be continued I’m dying for it. Please let there be more 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃……….
I'm glad it isn't a harem like most stories, since it's very prevalent. Overall, it's a great short story for fun reading
Reveal Spoiler i love to the no harem and no lolicon so five star all of it and the story is good to i enjoying excited too I'm a Filipino and not good and English 🥰🥰🥲😓❤️💛💛🧡❤️
Ain't no way you like those things BUSTING in your mouth little bro"@RoyalProto"
Loved the story and the characters. One of the only good story’s with a jinx love interest that was good and didn’t get dropped.
The writing is pretty good though the MC is pretty useless from the start *according to the author it is intended so that Powder can turn into Jinx.* I just don't know if the MC would turn from Psycho to a better person or From Psycho to a mass murderer deranged demon lord cliche or something
based soley on the sinopsis i loved you sir author and i am sure your work will be great
Me gusta mucho, aunque este es el primer fanfic de Arcane que leo veo que tiene mucho potencial y espero mucho de el
there are a few chapters that characters have no expression when talking, Sometimes, I get bored when authors write like this: exampleme: "Is this kid really that scary?"friend: : "Yea, this little kid!" me: "Really!?"no expression, don't overdo that but overall, it's a good story.
The overall plot comes of as great especially since he doesn't eat people in front of Vi and the gang since ya know, he's supposed to be a child so 10/10.
just because jinx is the female lead you get 5 stars adult jinx best waifu :$ SpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoiler
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the only problem I have is that it has too much dialoguing .