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I would give this story five stars! Is this like, falling in love with your own Doppelganger? 😅This is the first time I've read a story like this, my fingers unconsciously kept scrolling down, and I said 'aaw' when there were no more chapters.The grammar is so beautifully written, I'm glad a story this good won't force my brain to work twice as much because of the messed up grammar. Keep it up, Author! 🤗
Not many chapter so far but keep it up! The story begins by depicting a helpless girl being bullied which reflects a common modern problem. It gets more exciting later on but for now theres too lil chapters lol. anyways give it a try!
Wow, the novel is so great XD the writing style, the comedic banter between each of the characters, and the plot, all of them are really great and interesting 💕 good job author!
20th review yay, but seriously, great read! an interesting premise, with very very layered characters in the mix! give this a read and you won't be disappointed! keep up the good work and catch this while it's hot!
What a way to start the story! It was a little confusing at the start, and repetitive, but a great read nonetheless! There were a few mistakes here and there, but nothing that could greatly hamper your reading experience. This is definitely a book worth reading~! 😎👍 Great work, Author! And more chapters~!
as expected from my fav FL writeranother banger, loved the concept and plot it's really unique and interesting, I loved how the start was only 4 chapters are out so far and I'm literally addicted to it can't wait for moreeee! keep updating threyaaaaa
My Fav WPC Entry of this Time So Far, I hope this wins!story is unique unlike those dumb CEO romance novels out there, I am loving it keep updating please!
Looks like I just found a great Gem, this author is Soo good with words!! I loved every single para of this book, there are only 4 chaps! and I really really want more of em!please please keep updating I'm loving it!!!
I like how it made me confused at first but then It all made sense on the last chapter. Looking forward to read the next update! 🤣
Okay so it's only been three chapters and I'm already loving the whole concept of this story. I'm excited to see where this is going and how the two will interact when Olivia gets out of the well. Overall, great story Threya. I shall continue reading
More updates!, I can't stop reading this interesting story. Nice plot. I can't wait to see Oliver's payback.
Hello I am done reading your story. I am not a huge fan of alternate universe theme and genre but this is exception. The intense drama from 1st chapter and the unexpected plot and storyline. Worth to read, no more than a worth to read.
[Tip/Review] It only has 3 chapters, so its hard to grasp the story and the development. However, there are some points that would be good to watch over and review it later. Writing Quality: It has some problem with some sentences and how they're structured. For this, I would recommend you to check over some book known for their dialogue quality, like The Name of the Wind. Don't need to read it all, most likely the first pages to get a gist of it. Story Development: It lacks a structural flow to follow up. Its important to have one, because its the thing that holds the reader and creates connections with the story's character. I would suggest to study some tv-show, of its made. Character Design: It lacks inner-though and description of themselves in the scenes. Its important to write and give some emphasis for this, because it will make easier for the reader to grow some feelings for the characters, be it anger (the bullies), empathy (the mc), curiosity and so on. All in all, keep up the good work :)
Whoa! The plot is really interesting and caught my eyes! It’s well written and enjoyable, at the same time creates empathy within the reader for our FL! Waiting eagerly for more, a round of applause for the author 👏
The plot of the story is really interesting and intriguing... Waiting for more updates...
3 Chapters into this WPC entry and it's been amazing so far and it's already a plus that this Author has a good track record. So you can bet we will be getting a lot of updates soon.
Such a good read! I only started reading it but it's really interesting. Hope to finish reading it soon.I love the plot and the idea of how she gets transported to a new universe. I 💯 recommend soooo good!
I wish to be there protecting the FL ....send me the location ! ...I think is gonna be a weak to strong theme . Is gonna be interesting to see Olivia grow and what kind of twists the author is having prepared for us ...I am waiting for more updates ! Keep up author ! The writing style is easy to understand , it has details balanced well with interesting dialogues . Well done !
I was pleasantly surprised to find that the book is quite smooth and exceptionally well-written. Your ability to create a captivating narrative made me feel comfortable while reading, even though it's not my favorite genre. Your talent as an author is evident. Keep persevering and producing more remarkable works!
Wow🥰 this is awesome❤️💙 I'm loving this already, especially for a start, I honestly can't wait to read the rest of the story. Way to go sweetie🥰🥰
Two chapters are less but it wasn't enough to stop me from writing an early review! The writing style is really good and more than that is the story itself! You will be hooked and will want to read more! Highly recommended! So Author, open you machine and start typing!
I would give this story five stars! Is this like, falling in love with your own Doppelganger? 😅This is the first time I've read a story like this, my fingers unconsciously kept scrolling down, and I said 'aaw' when there were no more chapters.The grammar is so beautifully written, I'm glad a story this good won't force my brain to work twice as much because of the messed up grammar. Keep it up, Author! 🤗
Not many chapter so far but keep it up! The story begins by depicting a helpless girl being bullied which reflects a common modern problem. It gets more exciting later on but for now theres too lil chapters lol. anyways give it a try!
Wow, the novel is so great XD the writing style, the comedic banter between each of the characters, and the plot, all of them are really great and interesting 💕 good job author!
20th review yay, but seriously, great read! an interesting premise, with very very layered characters in the mix! give this a read and you won't be disappointed! keep up the good work and catch this while it's hot!
What a way to start the story! It was a little confusing at the start, and repetitive, but a great read nonetheless! There were a few mistakes here and there, but nothing that could greatly hamper your reading experience. This is definitely a book worth reading~! 😎👍 Great work, Author! And more chapters~!
as expected from my fav FL writeranother banger, loved the concept and plot it's really unique and interesting, I loved how the start was only 4 chapters are out so far and I'm literally addicted to it can't wait for moreeee! keep updating threyaaaaa
My Fav WPC Entry of this Time So Far, I hope this wins!story is unique unlike those dumb CEO romance novels out there, I am loving it keep updating please!
Looks like I just found a great Gem, this author is Soo good with words!! I loved every single para of this book, there are only 4 chaps! and I really really want more of em!please please keep updating I'm loving it!!!
I like how it made me confused at first but then It all made sense on the last chapter. Looking forward to read the next update! 🤣
Okay so it's only been three chapters and I'm already loving the whole concept of this story. I'm excited to see where this is going and how the two will interact when Olivia gets out of the well. Overall, great story Threya. I shall continue reading
More updates!, I can't stop reading this interesting story. Nice plot. I can't wait to see Oliver's payback.
Hello I am done reading your story. I am not a huge fan of alternate universe theme and genre but this is exception. The intense drama from 1st chapter and the unexpected plot and storyline. Worth to read, no more than a worth to read.
[Tip/Review] It only has 3 chapters, so its hard to grasp the story and the development. However, there are some points that would be good to watch over and review it later. Writing Quality: It has some problem with some sentences and how they're structured. For this, I would recommend you to check over some book known for their dialogue quality, like The Name of the Wind. Don't need to read it all, most likely the first pages to get a gist of it. Story Development: It lacks a structural flow to follow up. Its important to have one, because its the thing that holds the reader and creates connections with the story's character. I would suggest to study some tv-show, of its made. Character Design: It lacks inner-though and description of themselves in the scenes. Its important to write and give some emphasis for this, because it will make easier for the reader to grow some feelings for the characters, be it anger (the bullies), empathy (the mc), curiosity and so on. All in all, keep up the good work :)
Whoa! The plot is really interesting and caught my eyes! It’s well written and enjoyable, at the same time creates empathy within the reader for our FL! Waiting eagerly for more, a round of applause for the author 👏
The plot of the story is really interesting and intriguing... Waiting for more updates...
3 Chapters into this WPC entry and it's been amazing so far and it's already a plus that this Author has a good track record. So you can bet we will be getting a lot of updates soon.
Such a good read! I only started reading it but it's really interesting. Hope to finish reading it soon.I love the plot and the idea of how she gets transported to a new universe. I 💯 recommend soooo good!
I wish to be there protecting the FL ....send me the location ! ...I think is gonna be a weak to strong theme . Is gonna be interesting to see Olivia grow and what kind of twists the author is having prepared for us ...I am waiting for more updates ! Keep up author ! The writing style is easy to understand , it has details balanced well with interesting dialogues . Well done !
I was pleasantly surprised to find that the book is quite smooth and exceptionally well-written. Your ability to create a captivating narrative made me feel comfortable while reading, even though it's not my favorite genre. Your talent as an author is evident. Keep persevering and producing more remarkable works!
Wow🥰 this is awesome❤️💙 I'm loving this already, especially for a start, I honestly can't wait to read the rest of the story. Way to go sweetie🥰🥰
Two chapters are less but it wasn't enough to stop me from writing an early review! The writing style is really good and more than that is the story itself! You will be hooked and will want to read more! Highly recommended! So Author, open you machine and start typing!