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OK, so I don’t do reviews like ever, but this WebNovel needs to be recognized. 1) Imma start with the characters. Every character is very fun and relatable. we all have that “ one friend” who you can see in the characters. The interactions are also very fluid and organic, I wouldn’t be surprised if these convos happened in the real world. 2) Onto the world. so it is set in a futuristic world where earth has advanced like crazy. I won’t spoil too much and let you experience the vibe yourself. 3) OK a big one and might be a turn off for some, The system. To be honest, I don’t mind systems and even ones that add “ punishments”, but like the author has mentioned before the system is more of like a little bonus gift every now and then. Legit remove the system, and the MC is still a gamer who would accomplish his dreams with or without the system the system just speeds up the process. 4) Last but not least romance. OK, so here I am kind of torn the author has said only one girl will be with the MC in the end… and it’s tough cause I really like both love interests I am currently leaning more for Lily but Nina is just to precious as long as she’s happy I’m happy just don’t want a broken heart :( Anyways, I should wrap this up. It’s starting to look like an essay XD. Just give the book a shot if you enjoy content creators at all that streamers or Youtubers, I promise you will like this. My only gripe is there are two little chapters right now, in under one and a half days, I read through all of the privileged chapters up the max teir :/ keep up the awesome work author, here’s to many more chapters to go!
so when will ya update AUTHOR-SAN 😮💨 I am crying in corner waiting for ur updates for 5 days 🥲 have some mercy 🥲
Honestly, I've loved this book so far, I'm just hopeful the updates pick up so I can binge more of it
Kinda meh, update stability and writing quality are good but he goes from bed ridden deathly sick to vr gaming god with absolutely zero explanation, like why can he suddenly wield an axe like kratos or wall run like spider man, vr is meant to be a perfect simulation of your body so if you can move that way do wield that axe like that irl you shouldn’t be able to in the game either.
100+ chapters in and I really like it quite a lot, tho it was boring for a bit but maybe that’s just me going thru some messy stuff irl. HOWEVER, I must admit the story is actually quite interesting. Perhaps not the most exciting thing as it’s a novel about a streamer’s life but hey, I suppose it just quite a more calmer read tho there’s literally chaos in almost all chapters lol. Every is fun and lively in its own way. I’ll definitely continue reading it as it’s actually quite good, 8/10
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chapter one is already fire 🔥 what else if it's the second or more?!?!?!!!! 🤯
AHAHAHAHAH WATCH ME RAISE BLOODSUCKER TO FAN VALE NUMBER ONEEEEEEEEEE HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHH I’m broke no more points
The whole streaming concept makes it more interesting to read, especially noting the viers reactions and comments. overall I love this type of novel, keep it up author!.
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Everything about this novel is top tier except for the incoming nerf. If you can tolerate such things, then it's a great read. The system is not around alot but it's one of those series where the system gives quests and you get punished for falling it. To make matters even worst, the Mc got punished for failing a cooperative quest, and it wasn't even his fault they failed. To make even worst again... his talent got nerf for this failure. His natural talent from his body, and not any actual gift that the system gave was nerf...
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Good story but I hate having to wait to use a fast pass to read it for free lol I don’t like spending money 😂😂😂
I love the characters, the comedy and Breeze’s followers crack me up every time. But the author broke my heart. Team Nina ship sank. They were childhood friends. They can carry conversations, but the author, like 99% of most authors on here decided to friendzone the best girl. 😔 I am so disappointed at that development. Change the single fl tag and just have Max with both Nina and Lily 😭
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There is no such thing as modern Magician, cept for the ones that updated 3 yrs ago! Are those the ones your're recommending?
This is my first time reading a book here and leaving a review, so forgive me if it's not a crazy / explicit review made by some professional, and I'll go quickly through it explaining a few points that I really liked about the book itself along with some that let me down. 1 - The book is really easy to read, and it just flows naturally, not using much complicated phrasing or words allowing for everyone to have a good time without having to be an experienced reader, it pretty much reminds me of classical light novels, which are made to be easy to read while sharing an interesting story. 2 - Talking about the story, I have to say that while the concept itself might not seem really original, including a system, a streamer and someone playing games, I think that the author did a really good job with it and presented various original points that you might see somewhere else if you read too much, but for someone like me, it was really pleasant so far. 3 - About the characters in the novel, there isn't much that I can say about it at the moment, as I haven't reached the 200 chapter mark yet, but I can say that while there aren't many of them, you can pretty much relate to any of them on some points and have your fair share of fun reading their interactions. ( author did a good job including comedy in it ! ) 4 - The pacing of the story, I have nothing to say regarding the numbers of chapters coming out and such, since I haven't reached the last chapter that came out, once again, but instead, I'll talk about the story itself. First, the pacing is strangely accelerated, but sometimes slow, with large events happening faster than in your common novel, and I won't spoil you about it, though you'll probably understand my point after reading it yourself. About the slow part, it's just that sometimes, I feel like it was made to be slightly stretched, maybe to reach a certain number of words to publish the chapters, but honestly, not that bothering at all, just a small remark on my side, and it'll also go back to normal in the next chapter. 5 - There aren't many free chapters, maybe 36 or 38 ? I don't remember it correctly at the time of writing that review, so please excuse me. Anyways, I think it's a shame that it's the case, as I'd wish more people to delve into this story and enjoy it with me, so besides using tickets rewarded every day through daily missions or even paying for coins, there isn't a concrete solution to that problem, but at the same time, it's natural to be paid for one's work and there's nothing I can do about it as the power of communism is stronger than Breeze's will. More seriously, I already spent a bit more than 20€ in that story and I have to say that it was well spent for the content I got out of it, might not please everyone, but it was to my taste so please accept my support ! Overall : It's a really good story that I immediately got into, would definitely recommend it to any kind of reader, experienced or not. The contents vary from comedy to action, without forgetting about discovery/adventure and even a tinge of romance, which should satisfy the tastes of everyone I believe. ( I'm not everyone and it's just my personal opinion though. ) And if you're still unsure about it, just give it a try, I can't promise anything, but I'm almost sure you won't regret it !
1. Overall a great book around 200 chapters in. Love the characters, and the games give a unique opportunity to read wildly different styles of action scenes. 2. The MC’s progression and characterization is fantastic. I won’t say I immediately understood Breeze as a character, but after a dozen or so chapters he becomes totally fleshed out and doesn’t vary wildly at random. 3. You made pandas extinct you monster!
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Not going to lie, this book has me hooked within 15 chapters. Great job Author.
Overall, I want to say it was a great read and I would recommend to most people as long as they aren’t like me. I’ll discuss the pros and cons for people to read in the future. I’ll do the cons first so they are seen. Cons: As the title suggests, this should be a system novel but that’s not quite right. While there is a system, it’s only relevant at the beginning of the story and a couple other moments also close to the beginning. My suggestion would have been to change the title of the book because the system sure isn’t important enough to be the title. It’s also an isekai story but honestly whether I speak of the system or the isekai aspect of this story, the truth is it both cliches wasn’t needed. As a reader that enjoys these types of stories I was disappointed in their ineffective inclusion. On a side note, I don’t like flexy and feel he appears way to often. Pros: Frankly everything else. The story is good, most the characters are good. If this story had a different title, the isekai and system elements removed, but kept the rags to riches rise of an orphan as he used streaming to ascend. I would have scored it much higher. Imagine, a story about an orphan that was bullied, so he learned parkour to outmaneuver his enemies when he was young. He is able to grow until adulthood where he lives in the projects, but through the help of his childhood friend is able to kick off a streaming career that displays his hidden talent. This sounds amazing to me while the current story including the isekai crossover and system comes off as unnecessary which is author seems to agree.
…..Top tier tbh been reading since it was first published and I’m still hooked 200+ chapters later 😌
definitely one of the most unique novels i have read so far. world background is great but it could be better. the character design could be better and the story dovelopment need to be better and not spend like 10chs doing same thing and add better and intresting games please.
I just started reading this. Just done with the first 10 chapters and so far, it's really good.
Haven't read past the free chapters but this far the story is one of the better I've seen in years. exp
interesting story overall, yet at the same time I can clearly see and read the BIG INSPIRATION to the Genius Archer Streamer novel, like the author doesnt even try to hide how INSPIRED he is! however, its an ok read, but it gets dull fast
( ꈍᴗꈍ)(✯ᴗ✯)(☆▽☆)(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧
Such a great story! Keeps the story progressing at a steady pace and has alot of laughs in it as well! highly recommend it if you have time and want to have an actual good read. So author here take my coins and power stones and keep the story going!!! 🪙🪙
Great job done by author in establishing pace and character development.
The most underrated streamer system novel I have read so far. I don't know why this is so underrated but I wish this would get its own comic adaptation sooner or later.
Eh, shameless review from Author! If you're looking for a fun novel with many unhinged viewers in the chat room, then this will be what you're looking for. We will follow Breeze's journey together! Leave comments in the chapter, there will be a chance I will use your comment or name in the chat xD
OK, so I don’t do reviews like ever, but this WebNovel needs to be recognized. 1) Imma start with the characters. Every character is very fun and relatable. we all have that “ one friend” who you can see in the characters. The interactions are also very fluid and organic, I wouldn’t be surprised if these convos happened in the real world. 2) Onto the world. so it is set in a futuristic world where earth has advanced like crazy. I won’t spoil too much and let you experience the vibe yourself. 3) OK a big one and might be a turn off for some, The system. To be honest, I don’t mind systems and even ones that add “ punishments”, but like the author has mentioned before the system is more of like a little bonus gift every now and then. Legit remove the system, and the MC is still a gamer who would accomplish his dreams with or without the system the system just speeds up the process. 4) Last but not least romance. OK, so here I am kind of torn the author has said only one girl will be with the MC in the end… and it’s tough cause I really like both love interests I am currently leaning more for Lily but Nina is just to precious as long as she’s happy I’m happy just don’t want a broken heart :( Anyways, I should wrap this up. It’s starting to look like an essay XD. Just give the book a shot if you enjoy content creators at all that streamers or Youtubers, I promise you will like this. My only gripe is there are two little chapters right now, in under one and a half days, I read through all of the privileged chapters up the max teir :/ keep up the awesome work author, here’s to many more chapters to go!
so when will ya update AUTHOR-SAN 😮💨 I am crying in corner waiting for ur updates for 5 days 🥲 have some mercy 🥲
Honestly, I've loved this book so far, I'm just hopeful the updates pick up so I can binge more of it
Kinda meh, update stability and writing quality are good but he goes from bed ridden deathly sick to vr gaming god with absolutely zero explanation, like why can he suddenly wield an axe like kratos or wall run like spider man, vr is meant to be a perfect simulation of your body so if you can move that way do wield that axe like that irl you shouldn’t be able to in the game either.
100+ chapters in and I really like it quite a lot, tho it was boring for a bit but maybe that’s just me going thru some messy stuff irl. HOWEVER, I must admit the story is actually quite interesting. Perhaps not the most exciting thing as it’s a novel about a streamer’s life but hey, I suppose it just quite a more calmer read tho there’s literally chaos in almost all chapters lol. Every is fun and lively in its own way. I’ll definitely continue reading it as it’s actually quite good, 8/10
Reveal Spoiler chapter one is already fire 🔥 what else if it's the second or more?!?!?!!!! 🤯
AHAHAHAHAH WATCH ME RAISE BLOODSUCKER TO FAN VALE NUMBER ONEEEEEEEEEE HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHH I’m broke no more points
The whole streaming concept makes it more interesting to read, especially noting the viers reactions and comments. overall I love this type of novel, keep it up author!.
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Everything about this novel is top tier except for the incoming nerf. If you can tolerate such things, then it's a great read. The system is not around alot but it's one of those series where the system gives quests and you get punished for falling it. To make matters even worst, the Mc got punished for failing a cooperative quest, and it wasn't even his fault they failed. To make even worst again... his talent got nerf for this failure. His natural talent from his body, and not any actual gift that the system gave was nerf...
Reveal Spoiler Good story but I hate having to wait to use a fast pass to read it for free lol I don’t like spending money 😂😂😂
I love the characters, the comedy and Breeze’s followers crack me up every time. But the author broke my heart. Team Nina ship sank. They were childhood friends. They can carry conversations, but the author, like 99% of most authors on here decided to friendzone the best girl. 😔 I am so disappointed at that development. Change the single fl tag and just have Max with both Nina and Lily 😭
Reveal Spoiler There is no such thing as modern Magician, cept for the ones that updated 3 yrs ago! Are those the ones your're recommending?
This is my first time reading a book here and leaving a review, so forgive me if it's not a crazy / explicit review made by some professional, and I'll go quickly through it explaining a few points that I really liked about the book itself along with some that let me down. 1 - The book is really easy to read, and it just flows naturally, not using much complicated phrasing or words allowing for everyone to have a good time without having to be an experienced reader, it pretty much reminds me of classical light novels, which are made to be easy to read while sharing an interesting story. 2 - Talking about the story, I have to say that while the concept itself might not seem really original, including a system, a streamer and someone playing games, I think that the author did a really good job with it and presented various original points that you might see somewhere else if you read too much, but for someone like me, it was really pleasant so far. 3 - About the characters in the novel, there isn't much that I can say about it at the moment, as I haven't reached the 200 chapter mark yet, but I can say that while there aren't many of them, you can pretty much relate to any of them on some points and have your fair share of fun reading their interactions. ( author did a good job including comedy in it ! ) 4 - The pacing of the story, I have nothing to say regarding the numbers of chapters coming out and such, since I haven't reached the last chapter that came out, once again, but instead, I'll talk about the story itself. First, the pacing is strangely accelerated, but sometimes slow, with large events happening faster than in your common novel, and I won't spoil you about it, though you'll probably understand my point after reading it yourself. About the slow part, it's just that sometimes, I feel like it was made to be slightly stretched, maybe to reach a certain number of words to publish the chapters, but honestly, not that bothering at all, just a small remark on my side, and it'll also go back to normal in the next chapter. 5 - There aren't many free chapters, maybe 36 or 38 ? I don't remember it correctly at the time of writing that review, so please excuse me. Anyways, I think it's a shame that it's the case, as I'd wish more people to delve into this story and enjoy it with me, so besides using tickets rewarded every day through daily missions or even paying for coins, there isn't a concrete solution to that problem, but at the same time, it's natural to be paid for one's work and there's nothing I can do about it as the power of communism is stronger than Breeze's will. More seriously, I already spent a bit more than 20€ in that story and I have to say that it was well spent for the content I got out of it, might not please everyone, but it was to my taste so please accept my support ! Overall : It's a really good story that I immediately got into, would definitely recommend it to any kind of reader, experienced or not. The contents vary from comedy to action, without forgetting about discovery/adventure and even a tinge of romance, which should satisfy the tastes of everyone I believe. ( I'm not everyone and it's just my personal opinion though. ) And if you're still unsure about it, just give it a try, I can't promise anything, but I'm almost sure you won't regret it !
1. Overall a great book around 200 chapters in. Love the characters, and the games give a unique opportunity to read wildly different styles of action scenes. 2. The MC’s progression and characterization is fantastic. I won’t say I immediately understood Breeze as a character, but after a dozen or so chapters he becomes totally fleshed out and doesn’t vary wildly at random. 3. You made pandas extinct you monster!
Reveal Spoiler Not going to lie, this book has me hooked within 15 chapters. Great job Author.
Overall, I want to say it was a great read and I would recommend to most people as long as they aren’t like me. I’ll discuss the pros and cons for people to read in the future. I’ll do the cons first so they are seen. Cons: As the title suggests, this should be a system novel but that’s not quite right. While there is a system, it’s only relevant at the beginning of the story and a couple other moments also close to the beginning. My suggestion would have been to change the title of the book because the system sure isn’t important enough to be the title. It’s also an isekai story but honestly whether I speak of the system or the isekai aspect of this story, the truth is it both cliches wasn’t needed. As a reader that enjoys these types of stories I was disappointed in their ineffective inclusion. On a side note, I don’t like flexy and feel he appears way to often. Pros: Frankly everything else. The story is good, most the characters are good. If this story had a different title, the isekai and system elements removed, but kept the rags to riches rise of an orphan as he used streaming to ascend. I would have scored it much higher. Imagine, a story about an orphan that was bullied, so he learned parkour to outmaneuver his enemies when he was young. He is able to grow until adulthood where he lives in the projects, but through the help of his childhood friend is able to kick off a streaming career that displays his hidden talent. This sounds amazing to me while the current story including the isekai crossover and system comes off as unnecessary which is author seems to agree.
…..Top tier tbh been reading since it was first published and I’m still hooked 200+ chapters later 😌
definitely one of the most unique novels i have read so far. world background is great but it could be better. the character design could be better and the story dovelopment need to be better and not spend like 10chs doing same thing and add better and intresting games please.
I just started reading this. Just done with the first 10 chapters and so far, it's really good.
Haven't read past the free chapters but this far the story is one of the better I've seen in years. exp
interesting story overall, yet at the same time I can clearly see and read the BIG INSPIRATION to the Genius Archer Streamer novel, like the author doesnt even try to hide how INSPIRED he is! however, its an ok read, but it gets dull fast
( ꈍᴗꈍ)(✯ᴗ✯)(☆▽☆)(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧
Such a great story! Keeps the story progressing at a steady pace and has alot of laughs in it as well! highly recommend it if you have time and want to have an actual good read. So author here take my coins and power stones and keep the story going!!! 🪙🪙
Great job done by author in establishing pace and character development.
The most underrated streamer system novel I have read so far. I don't know why this is so underrated but I wish this would get its own comic adaptation sooner or later.
Eh, shameless review from Author! If you're looking for a fun novel with many unhinged viewers in the chat room, then this will be what you're looking for. We will follow Breeze's journey together! Leave comments in the chapter, there will be a chance I will use your comment or name in the chat xD