Reviews of MoMo: The Silent Virtuoso by Greaslyted - Webnovel

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QuarantineAndAnime

This is a good story but it has something that is a big issue with me but it may not be for others. It is the fact that for some reason to boost his career or to make him a seemingly better person he has to go through something traumatic.

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Kellan
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The story is good but the chapters seem very short, and situations fast paced. There is very little world building to understand the characters place and the environment there within. The story is very nicely written with grammar and detailing the characters expressions and emotions. But it feels hollow due to the quick pace and lack of build up especially present in moments where tension should be held is ended in a chapter. Overall I feel the author has a lot of potential, and so does the story it just heavily lacks world background and build up.

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Aadharshmax_Oop

I rly like the concept and the main character build. But i didnt like that the orphanage sisters where that harsh.. mostly they wont be as they know enough not to make an orphan feel lonely. And you could have also shown how he was brought up in orphanage with more examples to create a background for him. Like when he started the piano what was the song he played etc… i am still in the first few chapters but i loved the start.

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QuarantineAndAnime

This is a good story but it has something that is a big issue with me but it may not be for others. It is the fact that for some reason to boost his career or to make him a seemingly better person he has to go through something traumatic.

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1yr
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Kellan
LV 14 Badge

The story is good but the chapters seem very short, and situations fast paced. There is very little world building to understand the characters place and the environment there within. The story is very nicely written with grammar and detailing the characters expressions and emotions. But it feels hollow due to the quick pace and lack of build up especially present in moments where tension should be held is ended in a chapter. Overall I feel the author has a lot of potential, and so does the story it just heavily lacks world background and build up.

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Aadharshmax_Oop

I rly like the concept and the main character build. But i didnt like that the orphanage sisters where that harsh.. mostly they wont be as they know enough not to make an orphan feel lonely. And you could have also shown how he was brought up in orphanage with more examples to create a background for him. Like when he started the piano what was the song he played etc… i am still in the first few chapters but i loved the start.

1yr
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