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Ah mr.Author if money makes you concentrate more on the story you can unfree the story and i would gladly pay to read more i really like where this story is going and frankly i'm worried that you will take another long radio silence stance concerning this story Oh and for those who came here for a review it's pretty interesting story the best part about this story is that the MC doesn't have to do everything himself because he has people who he gets through the system That means he has his own personal army and even better there is no harem sigh sadly few stories if any have these tags his knights and house servants take care of things and for those of you who care about character development it's pretty good and author doesn't jump between POVs too much It's mostly on MC only when the knights go out on expeditions does it shift His past is also pretty interesting also while the knights are out trading and exploring they aren't robots they they make their own decisions and investigations.
A very nice take on kingdom building, interesting characters, and very detailed and well written. The story flows well it is very heavy on the slice of life, which is appreciated. Since it is a kingdom story with knights, i do look forward to seeing some more combat here and there. There does appear to be hints of a bigger plot and some intrigue. I am curious to see how the MC's family is doing or seeing them reunited at some point and more of the world as well. Would recommend this story and am eager to see where it goes!
I will support you author all my vote will come to this so that you will not drop this, I hope that the quality of the novel Will not drop.
iIwant the authors word that he won't drop this novel before iIl invest in reading it. I'll change my rating after iIget that confirmation
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I really liked this novel and waiting for update everyday that one day author will awake and not dropped this novel
This is a really good story that I would have been happy to pay to read. However, the updates are inconsistent to the point that you don't know if the story has been dropped by the author.
it's really good atleast the main character is not a villan who always says kill and loot and good positive side and if it didn't stop in middle it will be good work I think
Captivating plot, rich characters, and an engaging reading experience must-read that keeps you hooked from start to finish highly recommended keep up the good work Author🫰🏻🫶🏻
This book is very good from what I can see you have taken your time to write this. I would to see your take in early development and kingdom building.
The Story is well written and I have to say that I really like Eldric. He is not the ever same main character who becomes extremely strong over night but has to work for it and see other advanc before him and is simply happy about it. All in all the story is great and you are a fool if you not try it ad least once. You can stop if you don’t like it.
Ah mr.Author if money makes you concentrate more on the story you can unfree the story and i would gladly pay to read more i really like where this story is going and frankly i'm worried that you will take another long radio silence stance concerning this story Oh and for those who came here for a review it's pretty interesting story the best part about this story is that the MC doesn't have to do everything himself because he has people who he gets through the system That means he has his own personal army and even better there is no harem sigh sadly few stories if any have these tags his knights and house servants take care of things and for those of you who care about character development it's pretty good and author doesn't jump between POVs too much It's mostly on MC only when the knights go out on expeditions does it shift His past is also pretty interesting also while the knights are out trading and exploring they aren't robots they they make their own decisions and investigations.
A very nice take on kingdom building, interesting characters, and very detailed and well written. The story flows well it is very heavy on the slice of life, which is appreciated. Since it is a kingdom story with knights, i do look forward to seeing some more combat here and there. There does appear to be hints of a bigger plot and some intrigue. I am curious to see how the MC's family is doing or seeing them reunited at some point and more of the world as well. Would recommend this story and am eager to see where it goes!
I will support you author all my vote will come to this so that you will not drop this, I hope that the quality of the novel Will not drop.
iIwant the authors word that he won't drop this novel before iIl invest in reading it. I'll change my rating after iIget that confirmation
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really liked this novel and waiting for update everyday that one day author will awake and not dropped this novel
This is a really good story that I would have been happy to pay to read. However, the updates are inconsistent to the point that you don't know if the story has been dropped by the author.
it's really good atleast the main character is not a villan who always says kill and loot and good positive side and if it didn't stop in middle it will be good work I think
Captivating plot, rich characters, and an engaging reading experience must-read that keeps you hooked from start to finish highly recommended keep up the good work Author🫰🏻🫶🏻
This book is very good from what I can see you have taken your time to write this. I would to see your take in early development and kingdom building.
The Story is well written and I have to say that I really like Eldric. He is not the ever same main character who becomes extremely strong over night but has to work for it and see other advanc before him and is simply happy about it. All in all the story is great and you are a fool if you not try it ad least once. You can stop if you don’t like it.