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writing quality:2 stars, He can spell the goddeses names right and He can't incorporate any resembles of the actual characters in the fanfic.For example Hestia would never call Bell son, yet here it's used every single time which is very out of character.The only character he got correct was Aiz and that's cause she doesn't talk lol.His spelling is bad and it creates confusion, hephaestus now goes by hephbasoas or some weird bumbo jumbo like that. story development: It's pretty mid.The usual "I go into the dungeon and grind with my system".3 stars cause I could not get far enough for a story development to occur. character design: This is the reason I couldn't get far enough in the fanfic.The main character is 20-21 and he acts like a child.He gets overly mad at being called boy for some odd reason and he also gets mad over being asked about his past.Mind you he doesn't even have a past cause he transmigrated into the body and the memories just intertwined. The character is a bit on the dumb side or things when it comes to emotional control as he let's every small thing pass him off.He went to a dwarf for a weapon he said "Mr.dwarf", the dwarf said "Yes, boy" and all of a sudden the Mc gets mad for being called boy and thinks about using 15 fire balls or whatever. by the way the infinite mana thing has a nerf.Big nerf.so yeah. skipping update stability world background is normal 3 stars.Nothing is off track from cannon so what can I even say?.He doesn't do anything note worthy besides steal a book but he gives it back the day after. over all 2.6 stars. This is not a harem and that's the only upside of this.Although he did have a one night stand with a goddess. Anyway I recommend not to read a waste of time if u hate edgy, emotionally unstable adults.
No Harem in a Harem world just doesnt make sense for me. But I still like the author for his other works. So that's why a 4 star from me. Here is my message to the author for doing this even though I still love him :] CUZ IM COMING FOR YOU
5* for the author/translator for good fanfic with system. I always like reading system fanfic before go to bed and this one is good! thanks! keep up the good work!
it was an amazing story, mc's personality made me laugh too many time 🤣 PEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAK
Not a bad read for a little bit if you don't take it seriously at all. If you want to read an objectively good fanfic this is not it, the MC is immature, the author is inconsistent, and the writing is amateurish.
It’s really good and entertaining can’t wait to read more. I especially love how he’s basically the wizard king template
the best fanfic I've ever read! The main character are very well developing, not to OP yet, i hope he get OP soon. Letsssssss gooooooooooooooooooooooooo
i enjoy it the only problem I've had with it is in earlier chapters the author forgot a couple things like the MC . being able to use a couple spells without a chant when he shouldn't be able to and the MC acting like he's from a cultivation novel but it gets better later
While it's good novel and there's funny moment's main character became a little op. Peak level 3 has stats 5.6 with magic being level 7 is too much because character's golden finger is having Unfinishing mana. Put it simply with golden finger he can defeat a level 7 octar while being peak level 3 . considering octar can defeat some level 8 and the huge difference between level 6 and level 7 . Bell is only has strength peak level 3 while character has strength of ordinary level 8 I think stats should lower 1 level . Outside of this matter it's actually very good novel top 50 novel I read in my life and I read more than 1000 so thank you for it
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The whole story is more or less good. No, it is actually better than average webnovel in the beginning (in my opinion), but there are too many moments that remind you of Chinese novels when you read them.
please don't drop this story is good and it would be a shame if it was dropped
Of all the Danmachi fanfics I've read, it's definitely one of my favorites. In my opinion, the balance between seriousness and fun has been achieved. This way, I was able to read it in one go.
Eu até que tenho gostado bastante da fic bem divertido o ritmo não é nem rápido Nem lento é uma história que eu espero que não acabe tão cedo realmente espero que não seja abandonado Continue com bom trabalho e obrigado.[img=recommend]
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great story, just ran into it the other day. im definitely considering joining the pat reon after seeing the other quality stories this author has.
Considering how many chapters here, the consistency is good the grammar is decent. The writing style is progressing really well . Expecting great things from this Author. Good work !
The story has a great premise you would think the mc is way to over powered based on the title bit he really isn’t.
excellent travail, je remercie l auteur de cette histoire pour me procuré autant de plaisir a la lecture de son histoire, le rythme des sorties est régulier histoire évolue a une bonne allure sans pour autant manqué de détails intéressant. l écriture est plus que correct en sachant que je traduit tout via google traduction , je comprends très bien l histoire alors que bien souvent les histoire n ont plus vraiment de sens , c est dire le travail de l auteur. vraiment MERCI
A very good story, the quality of writing and character development is far above average on the platform, I hope you don't give up on the story and keep up the good work
I started reading the book two days ago Ate ch47 It's amazing He is op and at the same time not He has to work hard for his powers not just train for 6 months or 1 Year to bi#h slap everyone ANNND the love interest The green hear beautiful elf ( Go read story ) My only problem is he joined the Hestia's familia but I get why he had to join So meh Keep up the work and your other works's(One pice) AND if you do new story Arthur do a My three beautiful wives are vampires story
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writing quality:2 stars, He can spell the goddeses names right and He can't incorporate any resembles of the actual characters in the fanfic.For example Hestia would never call Bell son, yet here it's used every single time which is very out of character.The only character he got correct was Aiz and that's cause she doesn't talk lol.His spelling is bad and it creates confusion, hephaestus now goes by hephbasoas or some weird bumbo jumbo like that. story development: It's pretty mid.The usual "I go into the dungeon and grind with my system".3 stars cause I could not get far enough for a story development to occur. character design: This is the reason I couldn't get far enough in the fanfic.The main character is 20-21 and he acts like a child.He gets overly mad at being called boy for some odd reason and he also gets mad over being asked about his past.Mind you he doesn't even have a past cause he transmigrated into the body and the memories just intertwined. The character is a bit on the dumb side or things when it comes to emotional control as he let's every small thing pass him off.He went to a dwarf for a weapon he said "Mr.dwarf", the dwarf said "Yes, boy" and all of a sudden the Mc gets mad for being called boy and thinks about using 15 fire balls or whatever. by the way the infinite mana thing has a nerf.Big nerf.so yeah. skipping update stability world background is normal 3 stars.Nothing is off track from cannon so what can I even say?.He doesn't do anything note worthy besides steal a book but he gives it back the day after. over all 2.6 stars. This is not a harem and that's the only upside of this.Although he did have a one night stand with a goddess. Anyway I recommend not to read a waste of time if u hate edgy, emotionally unstable adults.
No Harem in a Harem world just doesnt make sense for me. But I still like the author for his other works. So that's why a 4 star from me. Here is my message to the author for doing this even though I still love him :] CUZ IM COMING FOR YOU
5* for the author/translator for good fanfic with system. I always like reading system fanfic before go to bed and this one is good! thanks! keep up the good work!
it was an amazing story, mc's personality made me laugh too many time 🤣 PEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAKPEAK
Not a bad read for a little bit if you don't take it seriously at all. If you want to read an objectively good fanfic this is not it, the MC is immature, the author is inconsistent, and the writing is amateurish.
It’s really good and entertaining can’t wait to read more. I especially love how he’s basically the wizard king template
the best fanfic I've ever read! The main character are very well developing, not to OP yet, i hope he get OP soon. Letsssssss gooooooooooooooooooooooooo
i enjoy it the only problem I've had with it is in earlier chapters the author forgot a couple things like the MC . being able to use a couple spells without a chant when he shouldn't be able to and the MC acting like he's from a cultivation novel but it gets better later
While it's good novel and there's funny moment's main character became a little op. Peak level 3 has stats 5.6 with magic being level 7 is too much because character's golden finger is having Unfinishing mana. Put it simply with golden finger he can defeat a level 7 octar while being peak level 3 . considering octar can defeat some level 8 and the huge difference between level 6 and level 7 . Bell is only has strength peak level 3 while character has strength of ordinary level 8 I think stats should lower 1 level . Outside of this matter it's actually very good novel top 50 novel I read in my life and I read more than 1000 so thank you for it
Reveal Spoiler The whole story is more or less good. No, it is actually better than average webnovel in the beginning (in my opinion), but there are too many moments that remind you of Chinese novels when you read them.
please don't drop this story is good and it would be a shame if it was dropped
Of all the Danmachi fanfics I've read, it's definitely one of my favorites. In my opinion, the balance between seriousness and fun has been achieved. This way, I was able to read it in one go.
Eu até que tenho gostado bastante da fic bem divertido o ritmo não é nem rápido Nem lento é uma história que eu espero que não acabe tão cedo realmente espero que não seja abandonado Continue com bom trabalho e obrigado.[img=recommend]
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great story, just ran into it the other day. im definitely considering joining the pat reon after seeing the other quality stories this author has.
Considering how many chapters here, the consistency is good the grammar is decent. The writing style is progressing really well . Expecting great things from this Author. Good work !
The story has a great premise you would think the mc is way to over powered based on the title bit he really isn’t.
excellent travail, je remercie l auteur de cette histoire pour me procuré autant de plaisir a la lecture de son histoire, le rythme des sorties est régulier histoire évolue a une bonne allure sans pour autant manqué de détails intéressant. l écriture est plus que correct en sachant que je traduit tout via google traduction , je comprends très bien l histoire alors que bien souvent les histoire n ont plus vraiment de sens , c est dire le travail de l auteur. vraiment MERCI
A very good story, the quality of writing and character development is far above average on the platform, I hope you don't give up on the story and keep up the good work
I started reading the book two days ago Ate ch47 It's amazing He is op and at the same time not He has to work hard for his powers not just train for 6 months or 1 Year to bi#h slap everyone ANNND the love interest The green hear beautiful elf ( Go read story ) My only problem is he joined the Hestia's familia but I get why he had to join So meh Keep up the work and your other works's(One pice) AND if you do new story Arthur do a My three beautiful wives are vampires story
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