Reviews of My System Is Pay To Win by NakamuraGT - Webnovel

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4.77

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Sigelkight

Great book Linda left on a cliff hanger tho

3mth
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Lazy_M3

Finally it's back after a month or so of no update

10mth
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Mattark
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The development of the story is just so rushed at some points, it feels like someone is randomly pressing fast-forward then play.

11mth
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JinHnDRxX123

This is actually not too bad, although it's a bit cliche at times. The gacha system and the development of it isn't too bad. It actually has some sense, even if it isn't my type of story.

1yr
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DaoUWantMe

If you are giving this story than less 5 then you are bonkers out of your head! Tell me another story this well done! I fight you for that since I feel strongly for these characters and their reality!

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1yr
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MiserableTies

Imma be real here! Reading thirty pages and nothing wasted! If anyone is hating on this its cause they be jelly as heck! I know we can curse here man, but jesus I would if I could cause there is nothing out of place here! Whack that this gem is on here!

1yr
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ThrillerSeeker

Ya know no one told me for such a cool story while being fun was also gonna make me cry! Ninja be cutting onion in here for real! I can't even imagine it felt for Jett as he suffered such a fate while in such a fight like at!

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1yr
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ThePurpleLump

Thrilling! Absolutely thrilling! The author is amazing at exercising amazing pages that just keep you begging for more! I didn't expect me to get so caught up in the page! You get so engaged in what is going on that you can't seem to put it down!

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1yr
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Scarlet_Feather

These first few chapters have been very interesting.Gatcha games are one of my favorite genre of games, so to see a system based off that is very appealing. His initial summons line up with how Gatcha games usually are so that's a plus too. The is writing is also very smooth. These chapters so far have been really good, so that is what I'm basing this review off of. I’m really looking forward to the future of the story.

1yr
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pingvinchik

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festival_night_89

ill do my best to support the work please continue the novel

1yr
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Moawar

Okay, pretty impressive I thought that the whole Isekai genre was getting a tad bit saturated, but this is actually a neat take on it, its a shame that it doesn't have a lot of chapters, but hey, I guess I can wait.

1yr
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SwagnosticDaoist

As far as I've read the story's setting, character design and writing quality are top notch. It doesn't feel like something that you would pick up just to put down later on. The only thing I'm regretting is the fact that I found this so early, because now I have to wait patiently for updates.

1yr
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SaviorOfTheSwamp

I am pretty impressed how much attention this is getting already and is not wasted attention since its a good book! Gunter drinking a dwarf under the table has been my favorite thing ever! I am glad I found this!

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1yr
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Memory0fU

After seeing so many amazing reviews and giving it a go I decided I need to speak up. I am really happy to have found an exciting gacha story that isn't trying to be edgy. It's just being great with its randomness I guess you can say that xD This one gives you a lot to go on~

1yr
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GojoGojoGojoGojoGo

Ahhh Gacha! The center of the world right now with popular games like Genshin Impact and so many other titles out there this one is fitting itself in the isekai/game genre and doing fantastic with it and I am loving every single second it has to offer.

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1yr
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SaltBaeD

People look so much for things with meaning that they forget you can have fun too! I see a lot of just relaxing with a good book and this one is absolutely perfect for it! The mc isn't emo or anything! Just legit fun~

1yr
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BeatoBeato

I was invited to check this story out from a friend and they were right! It is a great story and worthy of praise it is getting from me. I am more than happy to read more pages when they come around to me, but def give it a huge score for being fun.

1yr
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CenterAxisofLight

You know why everyone is giving this book a five? Because it makes sense! How you ask? Because the characters are well done, they all unfold in an interesting manner above most stories here that try so darn hard when this book proves it has the skills needed to make a simple and fun tale of a boy and his familiars! 10/10/10

1yr
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DefunctDayZ

[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update] This has been a fun ride in term of stories, I was fully engaged in the world around me as all the characters were fun!

1yr
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DiscountDazai001

Gunter is one the funniest bro's this side of WN xD Jesus this was a good read! Please author keep updating! I didn't expect such a thing here!

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1yr
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ManifestedBones

When you need something very fun and coming out of like a depressing anime maybe? Gacha is really well done in terms of exciting books on WN and would like to see more well put together pieces like this. I am glad I found this one!

1yr
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SayofChains88

Absolutely amazing first twelve pages we got here. Nothing wasted or over done just perfect between interactions going on with Gunter, Edith and Jett himself. He is very a refreshing hero to me as he traverses his new reality and his expectations as he gains and loses wealth. Gunter is one of the most fun characters I come across as well as Edith's elegance which is helpful to balancing out the crew while Jett learns about his roles. One thing I found really interesting is how we learn about *Reverse King* Every skill shown has come in handy to Jett as he journeyed to the current Orc Boss in which saved his life. I love how the story knows when to be serious and how to world continues to challenge Jett. I want to keep on this mc's journey and growth as he takes this trip to discover himself. There is so many surprises that I am excited to see what happens next!

1yr
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Sigelkight

Great book Linda left on a cliff hanger tho

3mth
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Lazy_M3

Finally it's back after a month or so of no update

10mth
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Mattark
LV 14 Badge

The development of the story is just so rushed at some points, it feels like someone is randomly pressing fast-forward then play.

11mth
View 0 Replies
JinHnDRxX123

This is actually not too bad, although it's a bit cliche at times. The gacha system and the development of it isn't too bad. It actually has some sense, even if it isn't my type of story.

1yr
View 1 Replies
DaoUWantMe

If you are giving this story than less 5 then you are bonkers out of your head! Tell me another story this well done! I fight you for that since I feel strongly for these characters and their reality!

img
1yr
View 0 Replies
MiserableTies

Imma be real here! Reading thirty pages and nothing wasted! If anyone is hating on this its cause they be jelly as heck! I know we can curse here man, but jesus I would if I could cause there is nothing out of place here! Whack that this gem is on here!

1yr
View 0 Replies
ThrillerSeeker

Ya know no one told me for such a cool story while being fun was also gonna make me cry! Ninja be cutting onion in here for real! I can't even imagine it felt for Jett as he suffered such a fate while in such a fight like at!

img
1yr
View 0 Replies
ThePurpleLump

Thrilling! Absolutely thrilling! The author is amazing at exercising amazing pages that just keep you begging for more! I didn't expect me to get so caught up in the page! You get so engaged in what is going on that you can't seem to put it down!

img
1yr
View 0 Replies
Scarlet_Feather

These first few chapters have been very interesting.Gatcha games are one of my favorite genre of games, so to see a system based off that is very appealing. His initial summons line up with how Gatcha games usually are so that's a plus too. The is writing is also very smooth. These chapters so far have been really good, so that is what I'm basing this review off of. I’m really looking forward to the future of the story.

1yr
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pingvinchik

Xxxxxxxx xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe

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1yr
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festival_night_89

ill do my best to support the work please continue the novel

1yr
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Moawar

Okay, pretty impressive I thought that the whole Isekai genre was getting a tad bit saturated, but this is actually a neat take on it, its a shame that it doesn't have a lot of chapters, but hey, I guess I can wait.

1yr
View 0 Replies
SwagnosticDaoist

As far as I've read the story's setting, character design and writing quality are top notch. It doesn't feel like something that you would pick up just to put down later on. The only thing I'm regretting is the fact that I found this so early, because now I have to wait patiently for updates.

1yr
View 0 Replies
SaviorOfTheSwamp

I am pretty impressed how much attention this is getting already and is not wasted attention since its a good book! Gunter drinking a dwarf under the table has been my favorite thing ever! I am glad I found this!

img
1yr
View 0 Replies
Memory0fU

After seeing so many amazing reviews and giving it a go I decided I need to speak up. I am really happy to have found an exciting gacha story that isn't trying to be edgy. It's just being great with its randomness I guess you can say that xD This one gives you a lot to go on~

1yr
View 1 Replies
GojoGojoGojoGojoGo

Ahhh Gacha! The center of the world right now with popular games like Genshin Impact and so many other titles out there this one is fitting itself in the isekai/game genre and doing fantastic with it and I am loving every single second it has to offer.

img
1yr
View 0 Replies
SaltBaeD

People look so much for things with meaning that they forget you can have fun too! I see a lot of just relaxing with a good book and this one is absolutely perfect for it! The mc isn't emo or anything! Just legit fun~

1yr
View 0 Replies
BeatoBeato

I was invited to check this story out from a friend and they were right! It is a great story and worthy of praise it is getting from me. I am more than happy to read more pages when they come around to me, but def give it a huge score for being fun.

1yr
View 0 Replies
CenterAxisofLight

You know why everyone is giving this book a five? Because it makes sense! How you ask? Because the characters are well done, they all unfold in an interesting manner above most stories here that try so darn hard when this book proves it has the skills needed to make a simple and fun tale of a boy and his familiars! 10/10/10

1yr
View 0 Replies
DefunctDayZ

[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update] This has been a fun ride in term of stories, I was fully engaged in the world around me as all the characters were fun!

1yr
View 0 Replies
DiscountDazai001

Gunter is one the funniest bro's this side of WN xD Jesus this was a good read! Please author keep updating! I didn't expect such a thing here!

img
1yr
View 0 Replies
ManifestedBones

When you need something very fun and coming out of like a depressing anime maybe? Gacha is really well done in terms of exciting books on WN and would like to see more well put together pieces like this. I am glad I found this one!

1yr
View 0 Replies
SayofChains88

Absolutely amazing first twelve pages we got here. Nothing wasted or over done just perfect between interactions going on with Gunter, Edith and Jett himself. He is very a refreshing hero to me as he traverses his new reality and his expectations as he gains and loses wealth. Gunter is one of the most fun characters I come across as well as Edith's elegance which is helpful to balancing out the crew while Jett learns about his roles. One thing I found really interesting is how we learn about *Reverse King* Every skill shown has come in handy to Jett as he journeyed to the current Orc Boss in which saved his life. I love how the story knows when to be serious and how to world continues to challenge Jett. I want to keep on this mc's journey and growth as he takes this trip to discover himself. There is so many surprises that I am excited to see what happens next!

1yr
View 0 Replies