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While I haven't been on WN that long, this story feels like it has a great deal of potential especially for its genre. Writing wise I think it would benefit from a proofread, not bad enough to take away from the story, but it is noticable in some places. Character dDesign / Introduction of those characters as of Ch. 18, can be improved mostly just setting up the character description before the introduction. But the story is developing at a decent pace, the updates are substantial, world building is better than most of the stories I've read in this genre. I look forward to catching up and seeing how the author grows.
It's nice to see another great author from Nigeria. Please check out my novel and give me some tips were I'm lacking. Please.
To all the men and ladies of culture, welcome to my book. I won't dive deep into details so read and see for yourself, and if you have any questions ask me under this review and I will be more than happy to answer.
Hi guys it's the author here😊 there is an event taking place on the 28 of December where I would have to mass-release some chapters and my readers gift me at least 1000 coins worth of gifts so the book can win, so I just wanted to ask you guys for your assistance so we can win, you can also see it as sending Christmas gifts to your favorite author, thank you all in advance 🙏🙏😊😊
While I haven't been on WN that long, this story feels like it has a great deal of potential especially for its genre. Writing wise I think it would benefit from a proofread, not bad enough to take away from the story, but it is noticable in some places. Character dDesign / Introduction of those characters as of Ch. 18, can be improved mostly just setting up the character description before the introduction. But the story is developing at a decent pace, the updates are substantial, world building is better than most of the stories I've read in this genre. I look forward to catching up and seeing how the author grows.
It's nice to see another great author from Nigeria. Please check out my novel and give me some tips were I'm lacking. Please.
To all the men and ladies of culture, welcome to my book. I won't dive deep into details so read and see for yourself, and if you have any questions ask me under this review and I will be more than happy to answer.
Hi guys it's the author here😊 there is an event taking place on the 28 of December where I would have to mass-release some chapters and my readers gift me at least 1000 coins worth of gifts so the book can win, so I just wanted to ask you guys for your assistance so we can win, you can also see it as sending Christmas gifts to your favorite author, thank you all in advance 🙏🙏😊😊