67Reviews
4.59
- Writing Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
I’m be honest a villain but it’s a good redemption of what if Harry Potter had a family and was not the boy who lived
Leí hasta el capitulo 360. Como lector objetivo, puedo decir que la trama de esta historia es perfecta, los antecedentes mundiales están muy bien hechos, la personalidad y desarrollo del MC están bien implementadas, así como la relación con otros personajes y el desarrollo de estos personajes secundarios. El desarrollo de la historia también está bien construido. Me gustan las historias donde Dumbledore no es el típico villano manipulador. Ahora hablando personalmente, si no hubiera sabido desde la sinopsis que era NO HAREM, me habría ilusionado mucho mientras leía la historia, el MC estaba constantemente rodeado de chicas y seguía construyendo su relación con ellas solo para que se quedara con una al final, odio ver triángulos amorosos en un fanfic y este va encaminado a eso, si es así prefiero que sea harem. Si no pensabas hacer harem, deberías haber agregado algún otro hombre entre los amigos cercanos del MC. La historia tiene el desarrollo perfecto para que el MC se quede con al menos 3 chicas. Fuera de eso no encontré ningún defecto en la historia.
Reveal Spoiler
This is a nice HP story. Thanks, author for updating regularly. I hope you will finish this story. This is a nice HP story. Thanks, author for updating regularly.
Hasta el momento en el que voy, está bastante bien la historia, tienen buen desarrollo los personajes, el prota no esta mal.
a good flashback when harry was fighting in the alternative universe then neviel as fighter and seamus as megumin the explosion wizard then be creative on other characters combat styles. I would love to read that
Can I request a flashback scenes when harry was fighting strong demons in the previous alternate timeline from some chapters. also scenes of how his comrades dies and how the war goes even if not too detailed.
La calidad de traducción puede mejorar, aún hay algunos diálogos que confunden pero a pesar de ello el desarrollo dea historia y de los personajes es increíble, me encanta como la relación del protagonista cono los demas personas avanzan si ser forzado, aunque vuelvo a resaltar que la traducción hace que se un poco dificil entender los momentos en los que se relacionan. Igualmente me encanta❤️
Reveal Spoiler
genial espero el siguiente con ansias y que si le den un cierre a esta historia
Personally, I like it a lot and it is one of the best Harry Potter stories I have found. I only hope that it does have an ending and they don't leave it halfway like many I have seen.
who is the love interest??????? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Based on reading 133 chapters, the idea is great, a lot of interesting ideas and possibilities are seen, but: 1. The story lacks a driving force, it doesn't attract me to read the next chapter 2. progression is slow, nothing much happens in most chapters. I dare say a lot of these chapters can be deleted without lowering the quality of writing. 3. The main character, even though been through 2 wars and understand the power of preparation and gathering allies, does not pursue gaining favors and allies at all. He could at least increase his magical knowledge or anything that resembles a war veteran who understands that you don't waste time in anything war related. Generally an OK story, but not my cup of tea. I'll drop at ch133. thank you author
one of the best stories on the web novel but I Want to know is there going to be romance between lyra and harry?
Loved it so far. I binged the last 50 chapters. Love it. Will now wait for 50 more chapters before reading. No. Loved it so far. I binged the last 50 chapters. Love it. Will now wait for 50 more chapters before reading.
i am enjoyed reading this [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
WQ: 4/5 US: 5/5 SD: 4/5 CD: 4/5 WB: 4/5 Overall: 4.2/5 I expected to drop this fic in 5 chapters but was mildly surprised when it turned out to be a banger. Read all 263 chapters in the span of 2 days.
It's a decent enough read. Can't give it more stars because: 1) It nerfs other characters to make MC seem great. 2) Nerfed transfiguration to oblivion. In this fic no one can transfigure something without direct physical contact. 3) Many many illogical points.
Reveal Spoiler
Just a review.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--
Ignore all the people saying it's bad because he hides all of his abilities. He only does that for a bit. Overall, it was pretty good. The story and plot developments were pretty interesting, although I admit the latest arc hasn't been my absolute favorite. Overall, I would recommend.
its vary good. the characters are well written and the premise is vary unique and interesting. i am not to far in to the book so far but so far so good :)
Good Story if anybody likes OP harry Potter type stuff. Hi personally MC decision to keep his powers. A secret is a good way to drive to plot and is reasonable when licking of that not everybody is as capable as him.
such good writing and updates regularly, I hope this will continue until the ending. thank you for the gift author
Hasta el momento es una buena historia, lo único que podría mejorar el autor sería que dejara que el MC fuera tan cauteloso, ya que él mismo en ese AU no es el niño de la profecía y no le afectaría que destacara tanto, al mismo tiempo siendo tan cauteloso afecte el desarrollo de la historia siendo un poco más lento y con momentos que no son tan redundantes
a good story, few plotholes, passable grammar and spelling, generally a very interesting story.
A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design.
Generally a really good read, but sometimes people seem to act out of character. e.g Why does Harry agree to the duel with Draco when it is said that he doesnt care about hhis reputation ad the only gain is "maybe he will stop bothering me", or why is ron in his circle of friends if mc is mature and the only thing ron does is beeing stupid and annoying everyone, he doesnt even tell ron when he is (W)ron(g).
Reveal Spoiler
Pretty average. Not bad ( perhaps ), but not good in any way either. I don't want to repeat what others already pointed out. There's not much to this ffn. If u don't feel like reading this after 20 chapters, trust me, it doesn't get better.
I’m be honest a villain but it’s a good redemption of what if Harry Potter had a family and was not the boy who lived
Leí hasta el capitulo 360. Como lector objetivo, puedo decir que la trama de esta historia es perfecta, los antecedentes mundiales están muy bien hechos, la personalidad y desarrollo del MC están bien implementadas, así como la relación con otros personajes y el desarrollo de estos personajes secundarios. El desarrollo de la historia también está bien construido. Me gustan las historias donde Dumbledore no es el típico villano manipulador. Ahora hablando personalmente, si no hubiera sabido desde la sinopsis que era NO HAREM, me habría ilusionado mucho mientras leía la historia, el MC estaba constantemente rodeado de chicas y seguía construyendo su relación con ellas solo para que se quedara con una al final, odio ver triángulos amorosos en un fanfic y este va encaminado a eso, si es así prefiero que sea harem. Si no pensabas hacer harem, deberías haber agregado algún otro hombre entre los amigos cercanos del MC. La historia tiene el desarrollo perfecto para que el MC se quede con al menos 3 chicas. Fuera de eso no encontré ningún defecto en la historia.
Reveal Spoiler This is a nice HP story. Thanks, author for updating regularly. I hope you will finish this story. This is a nice HP story. Thanks, author for updating regularly.
Hasta el momento en el que voy, está bastante bien la historia, tienen buen desarrollo los personajes, el prota no esta mal.
a good flashback when harry was fighting in the alternative universe then neviel as fighter and seamus as megumin the explosion wizard then be creative on other characters combat styles. I would love to read that
Can I request a flashback scenes when harry was fighting strong demons in the previous alternate timeline from some chapters. also scenes of how his comrades dies and how the war goes even if not too detailed.
La calidad de traducción puede mejorar, aún hay algunos diálogos que confunden pero a pesar de ello el desarrollo dea historia y de los personajes es increíble, me encanta como la relación del protagonista cono los demas personas avanzan si ser forzado, aunque vuelvo a resaltar que la traducción hace que se un poco dificil entender los momentos en los que se relacionan. Igualmente me encanta❤️
Reveal Spoiler genial espero el siguiente con ansias y que si le den un cierre a esta historia
Personally, I like it a lot and it is one of the best Harry Potter stories I have found. I only hope that it does have an ending and they don't leave it halfway like many I have seen.
who is the love interest??????? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Based on reading 133 chapters, the idea is great, a lot of interesting ideas and possibilities are seen, but: 1. The story lacks a driving force, it doesn't attract me to read the next chapter 2. progression is slow, nothing much happens in most chapters. I dare say a lot of these chapters can be deleted without lowering the quality of writing. 3. The main character, even though been through 2 wars and understand the power of preparation and gathering allies, does not pursue gaining favors and allies at all. He could at least increase his magical knowledge or anything that resembles a war veteran who understands that you don't waste time in anything war related. Generally an OK story, but not my cup of tea. I'll drop at ch133. thank you author
one of the best stories on the web novel but I Want to know is there going to be romance between lyra and harry?
Loved it so far. I binged the last 50 chapters. Love it. Will now wait for 50 more chapters before reading. No. Loved it so far. I binged the last 50 chapters. Love it. Will now wait for 50 more chapters before reading.
i am enjoyed reading this [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
WQ: 4/5 US: 5/5 SD: 4/5 CD: 4/5 WB: 4/5 Overall: 4.2/5 I expected to drop this fic in 5 chapters but was mildly surprised when it turned out to be a banger. Read all 263 chapters in the span of 2 days.
It's a decent enough read. Can't give it more stars because: 1) It nerfs other characters to make MC seem great. 2) Nerfed transfiguration to oblivion. In this fic no one can transfigure something without direct physical contact. 3) Many many illogical points.
Reveal Spoiler Just a review.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--.-..-.---. ..--...-.-.-.--
Ignore all the people saying it's bad because he hides all of his abilities. He only does that for a bit. Overall, it was pretty good. The story and plot developments were pretty interesting, although I admit the latest arc hasn't been my absolute favorite. Overall, I would recommend.
its vary good. the characters are well written and the premise is vary unique and interesting. i am not to far in to the book so far but so far so good :)
Good Story if anybody likes OP harry Potter type stuff. Hi personally MC decision to keep his powers. A secret is a good way to drive to plot and is reasonable when licking of that not everybody is as capable as him.
such good writing and updates regularly, I hope this will continue until the ending. thank you for the gift author
Hasta el momento es una buena historia, lo único que podría mejorar el autor sería que dejara que el MC fuera tan cauteloso, ya que él mismo en ese AU no es el niño de la profecía y no le afectaría que destacara tanto, al mismo tiempo siendo tan cauteloso afecte el desarrollo de la historia siendo un poco más lento y con momentos que no son tan redundantes
a good story, few plotholes, passable grammar and spelling, generally a very interesting story.
A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design. A unique hp story with a good Background and Character Design.
Generally a really good read, but sometimes people seem to act out of character. e.g Why does Harry agree to the duel with Draco when it is said that he doesnt care about hhis reputation ad the only gain is "maybe he will stop bothering me", or why is ron in his circle of friends if mc is mature and the only thing ron does is beeing stupid and annoying everyone, he doesnt even tell ron when he is (W)ron(g).
Reveal Spoiler
Pretty average. Not bad ( perhaps ), but not good in any way either. I don't want to repeat what others already pointed out. There's not much to this ffn. If u don't feel like reading this after 20 chapters, trust me, it doesn't get better.