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don't bother. another forced Hinata romance where Naruto magically falls for her at first sight when that literally never happened in the og.There's a reason a majority of these fanfics which forces Hinata and Naruto together, never go more than a few translated chapters, readers are over the whole forced bs.
Save yourself some time.Even canon naruto was better and more talented in a way.no fun strong au MC or something similar.also a lot of whining and hiding for taking "revenge" even though it seems it wont be really happening.
Good writing bro, please continue this novel it's very interesting.💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍
Lots of talk and aspiration in the beginning only to turn into a complete disappointment. The author of the raw obviously didn't put much effort into it. Things don't make sense and are half-assed or shoe-horned. The translator also messed up in many places. I didn't bother reading past the forbidden scroll incident.
don't bother. another forced Hinata romance where Naruto magically falls for her at first sight when that literally never happened in the og.There's a reason a majority of these fanfics which forces Hinata and Naruto together, never go more than a few translated chapters, readers are over the whole forced bs.
Save yourself some time.Even canon naruto was better and more talented in a way.no fun strong au MC or something similar.also a lot of whining and hiding for taking "revenge" even though it seems it wont be really happening.
Good writing bro, please continue this novel it's very interesting.💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍👍👍👍
Lots of talk and aspiration in the beginning only to turn into a complete disappointment. The author of the raw obviously didn't put much effort into it. Things don't make sense and are half-assed or shoe-horned. The translator also messed up in many places. I didn't bother reading past the forbidden scroll incident.