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It is definitely interesting. It starts off great and i hope it stays that way. The vocab is also great with meaningful messages and emotional storytelling. I can't wait for the next chapter🔥🤑
Shameless author's review here, I'll use this review as a QnA!!! But I'll write some common questions that people might ask: Q: The start sounds like your typical shonen. What gives??!!?!?!?!? A: I know it sounds like your typical novel or shonen at the start, but trust me, there will be A LOT going on in the later chapters. Some systems may not truly be "original", but in my eyes, it's good enough to have a fun read. Actually, this may be original enough, because no one else has made this kind of system before, but the vibe is definitely inspired. Q: WHY DO YOU ONLY POST 1 CHAPTER A DAY OR EVERY 2 DAYS??? A: I'm actually pretty busy right now. But there are SOME times where I can write 2 or maybe even 3 chapters a day to compensate, who knows. Q:Why is the MC some typical SHONEN PROTAGONIST IN THE START?!?!?! A: Again, trust me in this one. Think of it as a blank canvas. As the story progresses, it will be painted with beautiful colors and drawings. Q: How far have you thought ahead when you've written the first chapter A: Pretty far, actually. I thought ahead around 100 chapters from the first chapter, but I only need to write it for it to come true.That's all guys. I appreciate you guys for reading it! You may add it to your collection if you like it a lot, or you can support me in other ways!
It is definitely interesting. It starts off great and i hope it stays that way. The vocab is also great with meaningful messages and emotional storytelling. I can't wait for the next chapter🔥🤑
Shameless author's review here, I'll use this review as a QnA!!! But I'll write some common questions that people might ask: Q: The start sounds like your typical shonen. What gives??!!?!?!?!? A: I know it sounds like your typical novel or shonen at the start, but trust me, there will be A LOT going on in the later chapters. Some systems may not truly be "original", but in my eyes, it's good enough to have a fun read. Actually, this may be original enough, because no one else has made this kind of system before, but the vibe is definitely inspired. Q: WHY DO YOU ONLY POST 1 CHAPTER A DAY OR EVERY 2 DAYS??? A: I'm actually pretty busy right now. But there are SOME times where I can write 2 or maybe even 3 chapters a day to compensate, who knows. Q:Why is the MC some typical SHONEN PROTAGONIST IN THE START?!?!?! A: Again, trust me in this one. Think of it as a blank canvas. As the story progresses, it will be painted with beautiful colors and drawings. Q: How far have you thought ahead when you've written the first chapter A: Pretty far, actually. I thought ahead around 100 chapters from the first chapter, but I only need to write it for it to come true.That's all guys. I appreciate you guys for reading it! You may add it to your collection if you like it a lot, or you can support me in other ways!