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The grammar I great and the characters are developed at a good pace. Although it is fast paced in some areas, its quite good on an overall score. I recommend it for anyone who loves action based novels, it's surely a must read
Love the story. And I must say this. The first thing that caught my eye was the cover. It's just so beautiful and and eye catching. Anyone can tell by just reading the synopsis that it's a very good story. This is bound to be a hit. And I see The author is quite close to having a million read. My best wishes to the author.
Hi. When I say this is one of the best stories I have read so far. I am very impressed about the story, the scenes you described with such details. Reading what the storyline was about i already was hooked. Keep up the good work.
Very well written, clear characters, and most likely a seasoned writer/author who knows how to draw you in. It’s easy to see the settings and immerse yourself in this world. Something you should read if you have a chance.
What a breath of fresh air this master piece is! The author does a great job in using descriptive language, it's as if I'm actually watching the events unfold instead of just reading, please keep writing, I look forward to more chapters
to be honest I have not read all the chapter but when i read the first chapter it was truly amazing.
I really like the way the plot of the story is going .The story line and the author's writing skills has grown rapidly anyway kudos to chiyo kobayashi the author [img=recommend]
This is a gem of a book! Impeccable narration, brilliant penmanship, alluring synopsis and the mystery, everything blends perfectly to present an enthralling story! I am glad to have stumbled upon it! Can’t wait to read more!
now Kai Has been through tough times and the way you put him out there is something I really emulate, something I think I'll try on one of my characters in the new book I'm working on. Over all it's a great book, five stars from me😊
I started by reading the sypnosis and it caught my attention by the first paragraph. 8 then went on to read the first chapters and was completely hooked by the first chapter. The grammar is perfect and the charecter used in this story are completely captivating and interesting. There are so many words I can use to express this story but it is absolutely amazing. Keep up the great work
This is a really nice storyline with an interesting world. the grammar is great, the power scaling is simply unique and I love the fight scenes. Good job, Author.
Hi Author! I really mean it when I say that this is one of the best fantasy novels of the modern era. The pacing is just right for me. Your writing style and character and world building quality is amazing. The plot twists are always impeccable, and I love how you're not afraid to do unthinkable things to your characters. Keep writing, man. Don't you stop![img=update]
Its something new for me actually but I am liking it. its pretty good and unique, filled wth mysteries dt I want to unveil. will keep on reading to see how Kai will embrace his new self🥰
Hi Author! Thanks for introducing me to this exciting story! The break from reality had a certain impact on my feelings hihi.🥹 I'm really enjoying it!
The prose needs work, I mean it gets the job done but its done so in a very mundane and monotone way that I was turned off for a little bit. The pacing is unengaging and lacking direction, I sometimes wonder where the story and characters are heading. Speaking of characters, this is where The Divine Core shines a little bit along with the story which is pretty unique in its own right. Overall, this is a decent story that barely holds on and simply let down by its lackluster execution.
The story itself is quite solid across the board. Decent prose and writing ability from the author, and generally just a solid read all around.
This was GOOD! Good MC development, the world is interesting, and I immediately added it to my Library! The world of the MC shattered like glass... He lost his friend and family... and I felt it! Keep up the hard work, Author! It's worth it!!! :D
Hey author, I gotta say, I'm really digging your story! Super enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work! Best of luck to the author – keep those words flowing!
I'll be honest. I don't read novels of this genre but I wanted to trying something new and picked it up. This is an interesting novel with extremely intriguing characters. The main character's past, his existence is a mystery that I am eager to uncover. This writing quality is really nice and I enjoyed reading the first eight chapters. Keep up the good work, author!
I'd say the book does a great job at starting off the reader excited, however, the way the scenes jump is a bit disorienting, but nonetheless good descriptions.
Hi there,I just wanted to drop a quick comment to let you know how much I'm enjoying your novel. The first few chapters have been fantastic, and I'm already hooked! Please keep going and continue this amazing story. I can't wait to see where it leads next!Best wishes,[The_Mrsix]
Hello Author, I guess this will be a hit. The synopsis was luring us to read more. As a fan who likes to read in this genre, finding new works is a never-ending saga. So of course, I am gonna keep this in my library and keep reading this.Let's see what will happen in the future.
A good book with interesting plot. Author has a way of making us visualize the fighting scenes. Looking up for more chapters.
The writing is really good, the characters are decent. There are only 5 chaps currently but a pretty good novel so far.
It is an interesting take on the daemons. The first five chapters did a good job introducing the main character. Will like to read more chapters in the coming days.
Talk about an anime specialist. This novel gives a wonderful anime vibe, like non I have ever seen. The descriptions of the author and his wonderful narratives will keep you trapped. Trust me just dive in, you'll thank me later
The grammar I great and the characters are developed at a good pace. Although it is fast paced in some areas, its quite good on an overall score. I recommend it for anyone who loves action based novels, it's surely a must read
Love the story. And I must say this. The first thing that caught my eye was the cover. It's just so beautiful and and eye catching. Anyone can tell by just reading the synopsis that it's a very good story. This is bound to be a hit. And I see The author is quite close to having a million read. My best wishes to the author.
Hi. When I say this is one of the best stories I have read so far. I am very impressed about the story, the scenes you described with such details. Reading what the storyline was about i already was hooked. Keep up the good work.
Very well written, clear characters, and most likely a seasoned writer/author who knows how to draw you in. It’s easy to see the settings and immerse yourself in this world. Something you should read if you have a chance.
What a breath of fresh air this master piece is! The author does a great job in using descriptive language, it's as if I'm actually watching the events unfold instead of just reading, please keep writing, I look forward to more chapters
to be honest I have not read all the chapter but when i read the first chapter it was truly amazing.
I really like the way the plot of the story is going .The story line and the author's writing skills has grown rapidly anyway kudos to chiyo kobayashi the author [img=recommend]
This is a gem of a book! Impeccable narration, brilliant penmanship, alluring synopsis and the mystery, everything blends perfectly to present an enthralling story! I am glad to have stumbled upon it! Can’t wait to read more!
now Kai Has been through tough times and the way you put him out there is something I really emulate, something I think I'll try on one of my characters in the new book I'm working on. Over all it's a great book, five stars from me😊
I started by reading the sypnosis and it caught my attention by the first paragraph. 8 then went on to read the first chapters and was completely hooked by the first chapter. The grammar is perfect and the charecter used in this story are completely captivating and interesting. There are so many words I can use to express this story but it is absolutely amazing. Keep up the great work
This is a really nice storyline with an interesting world. the grammar is great, the power scaling is simply unique and I love the fight scenes. Good job, Author.
Hi Author! I really mean it when I say that this is one of the best fantasy novels of the modern era. The pacing is just right for me. Your writing style and character and world building quality is amazing. The plot twists are always impeccable, and I love how you're not afraid to do unthinkable things to your characters. Keep writing, man. Don't you stop![img=update]
Its something new for me actually but I am liking it. its pretty good and unique, filled wth mysteries dt I want to unveil. will keep on reading to see how Kai will embrace his new self🥰
Hi Author! Thanks for introducing me to this exciting story! The break from reality had a certain impact on my feelings hihi.🥹 I'm really enjoying it!
The prose needs work, I mean it gets the job done but its done so in a very mundane and monotone way that I was turned off for a little bit. The pacing is unengaging and lacking direction, I sometimes wonder where the story and characters are heading. Speaking of characters, this is where The Divine Core shines a little bit along with the story which is pretty unique in its own right. Overall, this is a decent story that barely holds on and simply let down by its lackluster execution.
The story itself is quite solid across the board. Decent prose and writing ability from the author, and generally just a solid read all around.
This was GOOD! Good MC development, the world is interesting, and I immediately added it to my Library! The world of the MC shattered like glass... He lost his friend and family... and I felt it! Keep up the hard work, Author! It's worth it!!! :D
Hey author, I gotta say, I'm really digging your story! Super enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work! Best of luck to the author – keep those words flowing!
I'll be honest. I don't read novels of this genre but I wanted to trying something new and picked it up. This is an interesting novel with extremely intriguing characters. The main character's past, his existence is a mystery that I am eager to uncover. This writing quality is really nice and I enjoyed reading the first eight chapters. Keep up the good work, author!
I'd say the book does a great job at starting off the reader excited, however, the way the scenes jump is a bit disorienting, but nonetheless good descriptions.
Hi there,I just wanted to drop a quick comment to let you know how much I'm enjoying your novel. The first few chapters have been fantastic, and I'm already hooked! Please keep going and continue this amazing story. I can't wait to see where it leads next!Best wishes,[The_Mrsix]
Hello Author, I guess this will be a hit. The synopsis was luring us to read more. As a fan who likes to read in this genre, finding new works is a never-ending saga. So of course, I am gonna keep this in my library and keep reading this.Let's see what will happen in the future.
A good book with interesting plot. Author has a way of making us visualize the fighting scenes. Looking up for more chapters.
The writing is really good, the characters are decent. There are only 5 chaps currently but a pretty good novel so far.
It is an interesting take on the daemons. The first five chapters did a good job introducing the main character. Will like to read more chapters in the coming days.
Talk about an anime specialist. This novel gives a wonderful anime vibe, like non I have ever seen. The descriptions of the author and his wonderful narratives will keep you trapped. Trust me just dive in, you'll thank me later