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I really love how you wrote the detailed character designs. I really love the Exadactylus arc, and how well the combat in the story was well written. I also love Meyeri and Kairos bittersweet written here. Continue writing author!
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The book is simple and easy to read, doesn't host big words and other jargon that would otherwise ruin the experience. Grammatical errors are prevalent, but their frequency lessens as you read on. the writing style is unique, writing in the present tense makes it feel as if the events are happening in real time. The story trajectory is also interesting, overall worth the five stars. Keep up the updates author
I know the author and a Five Star is a must! I have read 11 chaps and here what I think so far.Writing Quality: First time I read the first chapters the writing style was a bit awkward and full grammatical errors. It's understandable since the author is fresh and this is his first book. Gradually, the writing style and his new style of storytelling reeled me in.Story Development: The pacing is slow but valid since its all about the old generation and the current generation. For starters its afresh development.Character Design: Do I need to say it? A purple witch and shing hair boy is already good. Their character design is definitely superb plus the old party!Update: Its a bit slow, totally understandable since the author has a life to run.World background: It will be totally massive as Elves and magic are present and I believe it will grow more larger.Overall, I love the storytelling and the cgaracter! Hoping for more chaps to come!
Author's review here!If you want to read a book that has Fantasy, Magic, Action, Bittersweet Romance, Science-Fiction, and Slapstick Comedy. This is not a CHINESE cultivation novel or rip off from any other novel out there! I put a lot of thought into writing this novel and would really love to get some review and feedback from readers. But please be gentle LOL (I'm a newbie). I'm planning to reach more than 200 chapters on this one. I'll be working on making a good story plot that would not let the readers down.
I really love how you wrote the detailed character designs. I really love the Exadactylus arc, and how well the combat in the story was well written. I also love Meyeri and Kairos bittersweet written here. Continue writing author!
Reveal Spoiler The book is simple and easy to read, doesn't host big words and other jargon that would otherwise ruin the experience. Grammatical errors are prevalent, but their frequency lessens as you read on. the writing style is unique, writing in the present tense makes it feel as if the events are happening in real time. The story trajectory is also interesting, overall worth the five stars. Keep up the updates author
I know the author and a Five Star is a must! I have read 11 chaps and here what I think so far.Writing Quality: First time I read the first chapters the writing style was a bit awkward and full grammatical errors. It's understandable since the author is fresh and this is his first book. Gradually, the writing style and his new style of storytelling reeled me in.Story Development: The pacing is slow but valid since its all about the old generation and the current generation. For starters its afresh development.Character Design: Do I need to say it? A purple witch and shing hair boy is already good. Their character design is definitely superb plus the old party!Update: Its a bit slow, totally understandable since the author has a life to run.World background: It will be totally massive as Elves and magic are present and I believe it will grow more larger.Overall, I love the storytelling and the cgaracter! Hoping for more chaps to come!
Author's review here!If you want to read a book that has Fantasy, Magic, Action, Bittersweet Romance, Science-Fiction, and Slapstick Comedy. This is not a CHINESE cultivation novel or rip off from any other novel out there! I put a lot of thought into writing this novel and would really love to get some review and feedback from readers. But please be gentle LOL (I'm a newbie). I'm planning to reach more than 200 chapters on this one. I'll be working on making a good story plot that would not let the readers down.