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This story is annoying in a way it’s hard to describe, I don’t like the main character I don’t like the oc characters and I really don’t like the decision made with the main cast. It read as if it was trying to sound smart if you can get what I mean maybe it’s just me that felt that. I didn’t like this story at all but instead of it pulling me in and making me excited for the next chapter I guess I got annoyed and frustrated with each sentences. give it shot maybe you’ll like it but it’s a lost cause for me
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I hate it :) 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞.............................................. .........
This is an excellently written story and the premise is great. but there hasn't been an update in 3 months which is massively painful because Ive never cared about Harry Potter but this story is making me interested
The overall is good but I noticed that you are only focusing on friendship of mc with Harry and Hermione its like you making Ron a background character and going in depth in to his character but the story is good 👍
ngl recently i imagine a cross over of JJK and Harry and mc being Geto as in Japan magic school headmaster.Didn't thought I've gonna see this.hmm hope for more updates.
Honestly, this is a chef's kiss. Never read such good book like this in ages.
i hope you don't drop this , i loved it up until now. My only concern is how the pacing will go.👍
Lets share this piece with others ...........................................d.o.t.s...o.n.l.y................................................................
With this treasure, I summon Eight-handled sword divergent sila divine general mahoraga!......................................................................................
okay I'll admit this is actually a pretty good fic I don't normally do reviews so I'll just say it's worth the read and who he is and who he interacts with he ain't no psycho MC actually got some brains but it's not like super smart and he's also not a psycho so that's a plus
The writing in this ff is one of the most beautiful things I’ve seen and everything that’s happening mwah chefs kiss now take my stone
I‘m actually really enjoying this story so far. It’s plot is interesting as well as its story development at times but one thing that really draws me in is its way with words and how it describes different events. As a author that got into writing to improve my skills Im really taking inspiration from this when it comes to my own works. My only problem with it is it’s almost overwhelming amount of metaphors and descriptions really break the immersion, cause while these descriptions really help to visualise, too much just breaks the stroy flow and gets repetitive. That along with the fact that they’re some moments that can be skipped can be frustratining
It's a pretty generic start. The story starts to pick up around chapter 5. The story shines when it comes to the writing quality—definitely top-notch.
Great idea and great beginig to be! The first time that I see a sukuna ff, I love the ideas you're trying to incorporate and can't wait for more! Thx.
Author i have read till chapter 10 ,the idea the concept are all good but you are forcing vocabulary on each line of the chapter ,use simple english and at some instances add complex vocabulary it rather goes well and it does not make reading a hassle because when i see your paragraphs and complex vocabulary i just read the crux and move on ,its just not enjoyable ,i mean look at warhammer they too use vocabulary but its not a hassle so maybe just improve your writing style for the readers ,Remember the reader is the one who reads and dont make reading a hassle ,your style of writing is just a info dump remember the story is not about complex vocabulary its about making the readers feel enjoyable.
This story is annoying in a way it’s hard to describe, I don’t like the main character I don’t like the oc characters and I really don’t like the decision made with the main cast. It read as if it was trying to sound smart if you can get what I mean maybe it’s just me that felt that. I didn’t like this story at all but instead of it pulling me in and making me excited for the next chapter I guess I got annoyed and frustrated with each sentences. give it shot maybe you’ll like it but it’s a lost cause for me
Reveal Spoiler Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠
I hate it :) 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞.............................................. .........
This is an excellently written story and the premise is great. but there hasn't been an update in 3 months which is massively painful because Ive never cared about Harry Potter but this story is making me interested
The overall is good but I noticed that you are only focusing on friendship of mc with Harry and Hermione its like you making Ron a background character and going in depth in to his character but the story is good 👍
ngl recently i imagine a cross over of JJK and Harry and mc being Geto as in Japan magic school headmaster.Didn't thought I've gonna see this.hmm hope for more updates.
Honestly, this is a chef's kiss. Never read such good book like this in ages.
i hope you don't drop this , i loved it up until now. My only concern is how the pacing will go.👍
Lets share this piece with others ...........................................d.o.t.s...o.n.l.y................................................................
With this treasure, I summon Eight-handled sword divergent sila divine general mahoraga!......................................................................................
okay I'll admit this is actually a pretty good fic I don't normally do reviews so I'll just say it's worth the read and who he is and who he interacts with he ain't no psycho MC actually got some brains but it's not like super smart and he's also not a psycho so that's a plus
The writing in this ff is one of the most beautiful things I’ve seen and everything that’s happening mwah chefs kiss now take my stone
I‘m actually really enjoying this story so far. It’s plot is interesting as well as its story development at times but one thing that really draws me in is its way with words and how it describes different events. As a author that got into writing to improve my skills Im really taking inspiration from this when it comes to my own works. My only problem with it is it’s almost overwhelming amount of metaphors and descriptions really break the immersion, cause while these descriptions really help to visualise, too much just breaks the stroy flow and gets repetitive. That along with the fact that they’re some moments that can be skipped can be frustratining
It's a pretty generic start. The story starts to pick up around chapter 5. The story shines when it comes to the writing quality—definitely top-notch.
Great idea and great beginig to be! The first time that I see a sukuna ff, I love the ideas you're trying to incorporate and can't wait for more! Thx.
Author i have read till chapter 10 ,the idea the concept are all good but you are forcing vocabulary on each line of the chapter ,use simple english and at some instances add complex vocabulary it rather goes well and it does not make reading a hassle because when i see your paragraphs and complex vocabulary i just read the crux and move on ,its just not enjoyable ,i mean look at warhammer they too use vocabulary but its not a hassle so maybe just improve your writing style for the readers ,Remember the reader is the one who reads and dont make reading a hassle ,your style of writing is just a info dump remember the story is not about complex vocabulary its about making the readers feel enjoyable.