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A woman from our world is reborn as a Fallen Angel Gamer in a Marvel/Crossover AU. Will she grind her way to the top, or get a game over? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I really like this MC, her personality, the characters and the whole story in general. Keep going!
ma note parlera pour moi, en étant simple j adore cette histoire, les chapitre sortent très régulièrement, l histoire a une bonne courbe d évolution, les personnages son attachant et bien développé , 100/100 merci j espère en lire plus ( french)
La historia iba super bien es una de mis historias favoritas por que me gusta como lleva las cosas aunque que layla no tenga imaginación para moldear la luz es algo estúpido y ahora que empezó a meter los ojos arruina historias de naruto hace que ya no quiera seguir por que con tantas magias y poderes que existen pues lo va a terminar arruinando
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this story is just bad, it gets boring after 20 chapters and is terrible at plot progression. Seriously .. it’s all over the place, every chapter something new is happening and not in a good way.
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Esta historia me encanta como maneja ambos mundo además de ser uno de los pocos que usan a los ángeles caídos como raza de la protagonista............................... muy buena historia
O único problema que encontrei nessa Fanfic maravilhosa(trocadilho não intencional) é que os capítulos são muito curtos, por favor faça-os mais longos!!!
Hello, is it possible to translate your work on other resources into another language? By crediting you as the author, of course. [img=рекомендую]
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Pues no se que decir más haya de que me encanta como va esta historia 100/10 y para rellenar .............................................. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .c. . c. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Great overall and I liked it so far and looking forward to more but author needs improvement regarding his understanding of the power system in dxd. i believe it goes from2 wings - low4 wings - mid6 wings - high8 wings - ultimate10 wings - Satan12 wings -Rizevim or Sirzech level Satan or super devil
It was good, but Yuri was quite forced, it probably would have been better if there had simply been no romance or at least it had been Het... Not that I have anything against Yuri per se, but in this fanfic it was quite forced....
I just finished reading all of the currently available chapters and I have to say this book definitely managed to capture my interest to the point I finished reading everything in the span of a few hours.Good Work 👍 You now have the Approval of the Great Herrscher of Sentience!!
A fun read, Definitely AU. Some characters have certain discrepancies that make it apparent its not a super serious read, more light hearted. Definitely recommend atleast giving it a shot.
Its such a refreshing take on a Gamer Fic with a MC that chose to be a Fallen Angel with lots of World Building that just Fits and She is smart about her Choices wher to Invest her Points to get the Max benefit from her Race
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some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
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Easy to read, enjoyable and interesting. Can't wait for more! Hope it keeps updating regurarly and getting interesting as it has so far ....
Good story with a unique start. I especially liked that the mc embraced her new identity and how her being an angel effects others reactions. However the author needs to explain the nerfs and buffs the main character and villains are getting. There are a lot of times me and other readers were confused for a lot of the fights because the mc would beat up villains a few chapters before with no effort only to struggle against someone they shouldn’t. For example either Voldemort was buffed and we weren’t told or there is some confusion on the authors part when it comes to DXD angels or HP wizards and their power levels and how they would face against each other, never-mind an angel with a gamer system. Now this could be explained by the author in a few ways one such way would be to reason that hp wizards are stronger because they had to face other wizards and marvel threats that normal HP wizards wouldn’t, However this story lacks that and would be much better with it. Still for a webnovel fanfic this is good quality with no grammer mistakes and a female mc, that is rare. I just wish the author would explain or respond to the confusion of the readers (also ps hope you dont make this mc yuri only as most other stories do it because they are genderbender fics and it would be refreshing to see a non yuri exclusive female mc)
I think it is neat story, the world building of combining Dxd and Marvel is rather interesting.The system is not overpowered. And it always interesting to see an angel MC. But the story suffers a bit from "letting villains get away" syndrome and an attempt at equalizing different power systems, which can grate on some people's nerves.But all things considered I like it.
loved it, looking forward to more.....................................................................................................................
Favorite novel I encountered. The MCU and PJ Universe is one of my favorite universes I have been watching & reading. Glad the author added Percy Jackson later in because the newcomers might need to process the power levels of the beginner stuff first…
A woman from our world is reborn as a Fallen Angel Gamer in a Marvel/Crossover AU. Will she grind her way to the top, or get a game over? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I really like this MC, her personality, the characters and the whole story in general. Keep going!
ma note parlera pour moi, en étant simple j adore cette histoire, les chapitre sortent très régulièrement, l histoire a une bonne courbe d évolution, les personnages son attachant et bien développé , 100/100 merci j espère en lire plus ( french)
La historia iba super bien es una de mis historias favoritas por que me gusta como lleva las cosas aunque que layla no tenga imaginación para moldear la luz es algo estúpido y ahora que empezó a meter los ojos arruina historias de naruto hace que ya no quiera seguir por que con tantas magias y poderes que existen pues lo va a terminar arruinando
Reveal Spoiler this story is just bad, it gets boring after 20 chapters and is terrible at plot progression. Seriously .. it’s all over the place, every chapter something new is happening and not in a good way.
..............................x............................x..................d..............................d.....................................................................................................................................................................x............................x..................d..............................d.......................................................................................................................................
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Esta historia me encanta como maneja ambos mundo además de ser uno de los pocos que usan a los ángeles caídos como raza de la protagonista............................... muy buena historia
O único problema que encontrei nessa Fanfic maravilhosa(trocadilho não intencional) é que os capítulos são muito curtos, por favor faça-os mais longos!!!
Hello, is it possible to translate your work on other resources into another language? By crediting you as the author, of course. [img=рекомендую]
Girl x Girl = Eternal Virgins?!?Girl x Girl = Eternal Virgins?!?Girl x Girl = Eternal Virgins?!?Girl x Girl = Eternal Virgins?!?Girl x Girl = Eternal Virgins?!?Girl x Girl = Eternal Virgins?!?Girl x Girl = Eternal Virgins?!?Girl x Girl = Eternal Virgins?!?
Pues no se que decir más haya de que me encanta como va esta historia 100/10 y para rellenar .............................................. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .c. . c. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Great overall and I liked it so far and looking forward to more but author needs improvement regarding his understanding of the power system in dxd. i believe it goes from2 wings - low4 wings - mid6 wings - high8 wings - ultimate10 wings - Satan12 wings -Rizevim or Sirzech level Satan or super devil
It was good, but Yuri was quite forced, it probably would have been better if there had simply been no romance or at least it had been Het... Not that I have anything against Yuri per se, but in this fanfic it was quite forced....
I just finished reading all of the currently available chapters and I have to say this book definitely managed to capture my interest to the point I finished reading everything in the span of a few hours.Good Work 👍 You now have the Approval of the Great Herrscher of Sentience!!
A fun read, Definitely AU. Some characters have certain discrepancies that make it apparent its not a super serious read, more light hearted. Definitely recommend atleast giving it a shot.
Its such a refreshing take on a Gamer Fic with a MC that chose to be a Fallen Angel with lots of World Building that just Fits and She is smart about her Choices wher to Invest her Points to get the Max benefit from her Race
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🥺☺️🥺☺️☺️☺️🥺🥺☺️🥺😳🥺☺️☺️☺️☺️🥺🥺☺️☺️☺️🥺🥵☺️☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🥺☺️🥺☺️☺️☺️🥺🥺☺️🥺😳🥺☺️☺️☺️☺️🥺🥺☺️☺️☺️🥺🥵☺️☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🥺☺️🥺☺️☺️☺️🥺🥺☺️🥺😳🥺☺️☺️☺️☺️🥺🥺☺️☺️☺️🥺🥵☺️☺️☺️☺️
some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
Reveal Spoiler Easy to read, enjoyable and interesting. Can't wait for more! Hope it keeps updating regurarly and getting interesting as it has so far ....
Good story with a unique start. I especially liked that the mc embraced her new identity and how her being an angel effects others reactions. However the author needs to explain the nerfs and buffs the main character and villains are getting. There are a lot of times me and other readers were confused for a lot of the fights because the mc would beat up villains a few chapters before with no effort only to struggle against someone they shouldn’t. For example either Voldemort was buffed and we weren’t told or there is some confusion on the authors part when it comes to DXD angels or HP wizards and their power levels and how they would face against each other, never-mind an angel with a gamer system. Now this could be explained by the author in a few ways one such way would be to reason that hp wizards are stronger because they had to face other wizards and marvel threats that normal HP wizards wouldn’t, However this story lacks that and would be much better with it. Still for a webnovel fanfic this is good quality with no grammer mistakes and a female mc, that is rare. I just wish the author would explain or respond to the confusion of the readers (also ps hope you dont make this mc yuri only as most other stories do it because they are genderbender fics and it would be refreshing to see a non yuri exclusive female mc)
I think it is neat story, the world building of combining Dxd and Marvel is rather interesting.The system is not overpowered. And it always interesting to see an angel MC. But the story suffers a bit from "letting villains get away" syndrome and an attempt at equalizing different power systems, which can grate on some people's nerves.But all things considered I like it.
loved it, looking forward to more.....................................................................................................................
Favorite novel I encountered. The MCU and PJ Universe is one of my favorite universes I have been watching & reading. Glad the author added Percy Jackson later in because the newcomers might need to process the power levels of the beginner stuff first…