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the story could be great. but a kid who has been abused and bullied and taken advantage of is too trusting. i mean just after meeting hikari and her elder hes trusting them with way too much info. he should be scared of everyone since he shouldnt know who to trust.
Not only is the main character a coward, but also the main character does not know how to use any of these resources. His family line is trying to kill him off and he keeps running back to the same people that are trying to kill them off. would you run to people that tried to kill you not once but multiple times and keep going back to them even though you have a place safe and sound that you could relax at, on top of that, may the author writes that the strong can do whatever they want, and even when he gets someone stronger than his whole entire family, he still can’t do anything I went all the way up to I had to start paying and realized, not once did anything in the story change the whole time you were dealing with the family problems and now actually dealing with the actual story it seems like the story is mostly about the main character and his family and how they treat him at this point I want him to be killed doesn’t help that he has anear perfect regeneration ability so he doesn’t die even though they succeeded in kill him once
the story could be great. but a kid who has been abused and bullied and taken advantage of is too trusting. i mean just after meeting hikari and her elder hes trusting them with way too much info. he should be scared of everyone since he shouldnt know who to trust.
Not only is the main character a coward, but also the main character does not know how to use any of these resources. His family line is trying to kill him off and he keeps running back to the same people that are trying to kill them off. would you run to people that tried to kill you not once but multiple times and keep going back to them even though you have a place safe and sound that you could relax at, on top of that, may the author writes that the strong can do whatever they want, and even when he gets someone stronger than his whole entire family, he still can’t do anything I went all the way up to I had to start paying and realized, not once did anything in the story change the whole time you were dealing with the family problems and now actually dealing with the actual story it seems like the story is mostly about the main character and his family and how they treat him at this point I want him to be killed doesn’t help that he has anear perfect regeneration ability so he doesn’t die even though they succeeded in kill him once