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NEW PROJECT!!! --- If you like this fanfiction, you will definitely like our other fanfiction, so feel free to visit our profile to read our new fanfiction: [Fate/Magus Path] In Fuyuki City, as an average man, Roy lives a calm and stable life every day that even Kira Yoshikage would envy. Adhering to the principle of staying a step ahead of disaster and running fast enough to avoid trouble, he leads a safe life in this dangerous world. However, his life trajectory begins to deviate drastically after being drawn into the massive magical ritual of the Holy Grail War. The Avenger known as the King of the Cavern extends a hand to him, and the Magus of Flowers offers applause for his story; the excitement of the tale is just beginning to unfold. The King of Knights, the King of Heroes, the King of Conqueror... stories continue to develop as he encounters countless heroes and writes new chapters of his life. Since being ordinary can no longer be guaranteed, it's time to start writing his own story. "The ending of the story will be decided by me."
Can’t wait till the updates have caught up with where I left off on pattern, it’s a shame I haven’t been able to ccontinug lately due to my lack of cash
Good fanfic story, although the title is kinda misleading and the harem is abit much but that’s kinda a standard is almost all fanfics. The different worlds is a little much but It a good way to make things interesting. Keep up the great translation.
I read this story (the original) a while ago, I got to the part where he travels to DC, I hope you remove the poison correctly.
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Somebody spoil it for me. Just this tiny detail will do. Does he get strong or is he just a bf of wonderwoman
Спасибо за вашу работу и необычное смешение историй. Буду ждать продолжения. Желаю творческих успехов и удачи в ваших начинаниях. Пусть фантазия не покидает вас как можно дольше.
Not great, not terrible plotwise... I love John Wickso the crossover is welcomed, and the translation quality is high for 5 Stars for me for this
I really like the story so far. Some people don’t like the hotel part but it was a smart choice to add it in my opinion.
It's Chinese Marvel self insert combined with a few other movies like John Wick. The pieces fit decently, but the contradictions are glaring. It's a fun read. Just don't worry about the details too much.
Можно было бы уже что-то изменить из оригинальной истории и сделать что-то более последовательное, но практически все похоже, и те дыры или отношение главного героя наименее терпимы.
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Starts out good but after chapter 1 it suddenly went too Cringe where he is suddenly a SECRET assassin and got the venom symbiote... His sudden backstory reveal was just too much...
Дол за информацию и спутал в приложении коммерческое предложение школы школы шушукге уегег года год назад пробег на сайте и в приложении высылаю вам информацию гкшвпнукеекк и спутал в приложении высылаю в ваш город у моря погоды в ваш адрес и материалов в ваш адрес электронной
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Full of potential, I hope you won't drop this. Thanks for translate this fic! -------------------------------------------------------------
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Full of potential, I hope you won't drop this. Not much to review at the moment, but I'll put this in the library and watch. But, I have to say, I'm curious now and I hope at least the chapters per day will increase and you stay consistent.
You alr know I had to bless my boy up with that good review just because of that good grammar keep it up
This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.
NEW PROJECT!!! --- If you like this fanfiction, you will definitely like our other fanfiction, so feel free to visit our profile to read our new fanfiction: [Fate/Magus Path] In Fuyuki City, as an average man, Roy lives a calm and stable life every day that even Kira Yoshikage would envy. Adhering to the principle of staying a step ahead of disaster and running fast enough to avoid trouble, he leads a safe life in this dangerous world. However, his life trajectory begins to deviate drastically after being drawn into the massive magical ritual of the Holy Grail War. The Avenger known as the King of the Cavern extends a hand to him, and the Magus of Flowers offers applause for his story; the excitement of the tale is just beginning to unfold. The King of Knights, the King of Heroes, the King of Conqueror... stories continue to develop as he encounters countless heroes and writes new chapters of his life. Since being ordinary can no longer be guaranteed, it's time to start writing his own story. "The ending of the story will be decided by me."
Can’t wait till the updates have caught up with where I left off on pattern, it’s a shame I haven’t been able to ccontinug lately due to my lack of cash
Good fanfic story, although the title is kinda misleading and the harem is abit much but that’s kinda a standard is almost all fanfics. The different worlds is a little much but It a good way to make things interesting. Keep up the great translation.
I read this story (the original) a while ago, I got to the part where he travels to DC, I hope you remove the poison correctly.
Reveal Spoiler Somebody spoil it for me. Just this tiny detail will do. Does he get strong or is he just a bf of wonderwoman
Спасибо за вашу работу и необычное смешение историй. Буду ждать продолжения. Желаю творческих успехов и удачи в ваших начинаниях. Пусть фантазия не покидает вас как можно дольше.
Not great, not terrible plotwise... I love John Wickso the crossover is welcomed, and the translation quality is high for 5 Stars for me for this
I really like the story so far. Some people don’t like the hotel part but it was a smart choice to add it in my opinion.
It's Chinese Marvel self insert combined with a few other movies like John Wick. The pieces fit decently, but the contradictions are glaring. It's a fun read. Just don't worry about the details too much.
Можно было бы уже что-то изменить из оригинальной истории и сделать что-то более последовательное, но практически все похоже, и те дыры или отношение главного героя наименее терпимы.
Reveal Spoiler Starts out good but after chapter 1 it suddenly went too Cringe where he is suddenly a SECRET assassin and got the venom symbiote... His sudden backstory reveal was just too much...
Дол за информацию и спутал в приложении коммерческое предложение школы школы шушукге уегег года год назад пробег на сайте и в приложении высылаю вам информацию гкшвпнукеекк и спутал в приложении высылаю в ваш город у моря погоды в ваш адрес и материалов в ваш адрес электронной
Reveal Spoiler Full of potential, I hope you won't drop this. Thanks for translate this fic! -------------------------------------------------------------
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Full of potential, I hope you won't drop this. Not much to review at the moment, but I'll put this in the library and watch. But, I have to say, I'm curious now and I hope at least the chapters per day will increase and you stay consistent.
You alr know I had to bless my boy up with that good review just because of that good grammar keep it up
This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.