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Read around 30 chapters. MC is ok. The plot seems. Side characters are strange...very very strange. System is too op and like the other novels of this genre it doesn't make any sense. There is no balance between system and the world. I won't explain anymore. It's like having rice with dozens of different types of curries.
hope you see this review. I have some crazy ideas. and I would like to tell you about that if you're interested
Interesting start..i like the author follow of words, it makes it easier to follow, I like the mc a lot..i will read this book
I find this book to be fascinating it is some what cliché is entertaining because the system is different than others. It draws you in somehow.
The world seems interesting enough, and there is a solid through-line of depth and worldbuilding consistency.My issue arises in that by chapter 30, there are no obvious problems that can't be solved inherently. To an obsured level of wish-fufillment. The system takes this to something akin to a Slice of Life novel with no real sense of pacing or scale.
Starting was great but then the MC suddenly wants to Improve the technology of the Whole World (which i honestly don't know why)........Is he being a Saint or what?? And then he just goes around doing all the mundane things and wasting time, seriously at this point it feels like the author doesn't know what the story should be, so just let him revolutionize the whole world...This guy couldn't even complete 3 simple missions so far.
This story is entertaining enough for me to battle the terrible comments system to post a review. I enjoy overpowered system novels quite a bit, and this one has enough blend of silly and serious to keep me interested. I’ve noticed a small amount of spelling or grammatical errors but that’s ok, I see plenty of them in published paper books too. Nothing exceptionally groundbreaking, but a fun read and solid 4/5 so far.
🔥🔥It is a good one you forget to keep track of time while reading.Only problem:Background of the world is not clear and "some time" MC's ability is shown out of the box but he is not using it to the fullest.But again it is too early to say anything (I've read till only 30 chapter might comment in future )
im really enjoying this book maybe in the future chapers he can cultivate and have opponents and travel in space and find other civilisations aswell as buy the milky way galy and hunt monsters and creatures and sell there parts for a galactic currency so many things can happen with this book
This is a pretty good novel, unlike other Chinese novels where there's a whole lot of nationalism and racism. Overall I recommend you give this a try
overall it's goodi just hope that this novel can continue till the end mc personally should be developed I think 👍☺️I hope you keep your good work
Enjoyable to read, much better than most wealth system/urban systems in terms of plot. The pacing is all over the place though. He’s already basically taken over the world, but then we spend multiple chapters on mundane things like going to school and a tiny cosmetics company? Just makes it hard to care about those plot points. Not the biggest fan of MC’s overly controlling nature either. All the drama with his lawyer/assistant feels a bit forced. Maybe it’s to give room for future character development, though, so I’m trying to give it the benefit of the doubt. Also, maybe it’s a personal opinion but a whole chapter covering the other party’s reaction to an event that we know would be shocking to them isn’t interesting *at all.*
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I like the novel, and I honestly really like the fast pacing ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Hey,i like your work,its interesting with the way system is designed and the room left for further development is a good idea with the addition of mixing some gene serum and cultivation but the way the story is going is so plain compare to the start,but the plot is interesting.I'm also looking forward to new development for the mc himself as he is so introvert like,'man he has two girls who can do like anything for him yet he is not interested'...
This is a very nice novel to read. I'm just hoping he'll get to live and enjoy his life to the fullest not because it's prompted by the system like going to jiangbei or something but because he wanted to enjoy his newfound wealth, strength, and life.
love the book so far, chapter 30, wish the updating could be faster(2 chaps a day🤔) other than that great read👍
I picked this novel up after I read the authors other book All of Creation, which I really didn’t enjoy. The author suggested I try his other novels and I found this one which I have come to like. After 40 chapters, im still reading on. For the most, the updating is rather good, I tend to read chapters after about 4 or so accumulate to get a good chunk, the downside is I sometimes have to flip back a chapter or two to recall events. I feel the only downside is that everything seems way to easy at the moment, rewards seem to be raining down all the time and all of them are pretty good. I believe to offset this is to throw a few lemons in the mix so it is always a surprise and not the expected. Ezmode begins to lose flavour after abit, but in this case I do like the genre of Urban and systems and it is keeping me rather amused to read further and to throw stones and coin to unlock further chapters. Oh another thing I am in two minds about is his desire to always be in control. Mind you it isnt a bad thing at all, only being in control allows one to develop more, however with relationships, there should be a balance. An example was his attitude to continually draw the system lottery just to get another AI, just to put his first AI in her place, I felt this was rather childish and petulant. Still it is early days and perhaps the MC will grow in maturity further. Overall this book is worth taking a look at and to add to the readers library.
A good story as of chapter 39. It seems to lack transitions from chapter to chapter so if you don’t remember the story well then you may have to go back to review previous chapters to understand what is going on. The updating has been mostly consistent with the author only missing a day here and there, usually you will get 1 chapter each day though and if not the following day they have released 2 to 3 chapters. I’ve been enjoying the read so far, I would suggest the author try writing 2 chapters every day even if you’re not posting them, you can schedule them to post in advance and build up a stockpile of chapters so that if you miss a day of writing you don’t have a day where nothing gets released.. this could also help with releasing bonus chapters in the future as it wouldn’t put a strain on you trying to write even more chapters to get the bonus chapters out.
I've read a lot of these but this is something new at first I thought that everything 100x or 1000x is imbalance but I liked the plot thank you very much for translating
Read around 30 chapters. MC is ok. The plot seems. Side characters are strange...very very strange. System is too op and like the other novels of this genre it doesn't make any sense. There is no balance between system and the world. I won't explain anymore. It's like having rice with dozens of different types of curries.
hope you see this review. I have some crazy ideas. and I would like to tell you about that if you're interested
Interesting start..i like the author follow of words, it makes it easier to follow, I like the mc a lot..i will read this book
I find this book to be fascinating it is some what cliché is entertaining because the system is different than others. It draws you in somehow.
The world seems interesting enough, and there is a solid through-line of depth and worldbuilding consistency.My issue arises in that by chapter 30, there are no obvious problems that can't be solved inherently. To an obsured level of wish-fufillment. The system takes this to something akin to a Slice of Life novel with no real sense of pacing or scale.
Starting was great but then the MC suddenly wants to Improve the technology of the Whole World (which i honestly don't know why)........Is he being a Saint or what?? And then he just goes around doing all the mundane things and wasting time, seriously at this point it feels like the author doesn't know what the story should be, so just let him revolutionize the whole world...This guy couldn't even complete 3 simple missions so far.
This story is entertaining enough for me to battle the terrible comments system to post a review. I enjoy overpowered system novels quite a bit, and this one has enough blend of silly and serious to keep me interested. I’ve noticed a small amount of spelling or grammatical errors but that’s ok, I see plenty of them in published paper books too. Nothing exceptionally groundbreaking, but a fun read and solid 4/5 so far.
🔥🔥It is a good one you forget to keep track of time while reading.Only problem:Background of the world is not clear and "some time" MC's ability is shown out of the box but he is not using it to the fullest.But again it is too early to say anything (I've read till only 30 chapter might comment in future )
im really enjoying this book maybe in the future chapers he can cultivate and have opponents and travel in space and find other civilisations aswell as buy the milky way galy and hunt monsters and creatures and sell there parts for a galactic currency so many things can happen with this book
This is a pretty good novel, unlike other Chinese novels where there's a whole lot of nationalism and racism. Overall I recommend you give this a try
overall it's goodi just hope that this novel can continue till the end mc personally should be developed I think 👍☺️I hope you keep your good work
Enjoyable to read, much better than most wealth system/urban systems in terms of plot. The pacing is all over the place though. He’s already basically taken over the world, but then we spend multiple chapters on mundane things like going to school and a tiny cosmetics company? Just makes it hard to care about those plot points. Not the biggest fan of MC’s overly controlling nature either. All the drama with his lawyer/assistant feels a bit forced. Maybe it’s to give room for future character development, though, so I’m trying to give it the benefit of the doubt. Also, maybe it’s a personal opinion but a whole chapter covering the other party’s reaction to an event that we know would be shocking to them isn’t interesting *at all.*
Reveal Spoiler I like the novel, and I honestly really like the fast pacing ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Hey,i like your work,its interesting with the way system is designed and the room left for further development is a good idea with the addition of mixing some gene serum and cultivation but the way the story is going is so plain compare to the start,but the plot is interesting.I'm also looking forward to new development for the mc himself as he is so introvert like,'man he has two girls who can do like anything for him yet he is not interested'...
This is a very nice novel to read. I'm just hoping he'll get to live and enjoy his life to the fullest not because it's prompted by the system like going to jiangbei or something but because he wanted to enjoy his newfound wealth, strength, and life.
love the book so far, chapter 30, wish the updating could be faster(2 chaps a day🤔) other than that great read👍
I picked this novel up after I read the authors other book All of Creation, which I really didn’t enjoy. The author suggested I try his other novels and I found this one which I have come to like. After 40 chapters, im still reading on. For the most, the updating is rather good, I tend to read chapters after about 4 or so accumulate to get a good chunk, the downside is I sometimes have to flip back a chapter or two to recall events. I feel the only downside is that everything seems way to easy at the moment, rewards seem to be raining down all the time and all of them are pretty good. I believe to offset this is to throw a few lemons in the mix so it is always a surprise and not the expected. Ezmode begins to lose flavour after abit, but in this case I do like the genre of Urban and systems and it is keeping me rather amused to read further and to throw stones and coin to unlock further chapters. Oh another thing I am in two minds about is his desire to always be in control. Mind you it isnt a bad thing at all, only being in control allows one to develop more, however with relationships, there should be a balance. An example was his attitude to continually draw the system lottery just to get another AI, just to put his first AI in her place, I felt this was rather childish and petulant. Still it is early days and perhaps the MC will grow in maturity further. Overall this book is worth taking a look at and to add to the readers library.
A good story as of chapter 39. It seems to lack transitions from chapter to chapter so if you don’t remember the story well then you may have to go back to review previous chapters to understand what is going on. The updating has been mostly consistent with the author only missing a day here and there, usually you will get 1 chapter each day though and if not the following day they have released 2 to 3 chapters. I’ve been enjoying the read so far, I would suggest the author try writing 2 chapters every day even if you’re not posting them, you can schedule them to post in advance and build up a stockpile of chapters so that if you miss a day of writing you don’t have a day where nothing gets released.. this could also help with releasing bonus chapters in the future as it wouldn’t put a strain on you trying to write even more chapters to get the bonus chapters out.
I've read a lot of these but this is something new at first I thought that everything 100x or 1000x is imbalance but I liked the plot thank you very much for translating