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The rewriting is very good and I know that the author made an effort but I am sorry that the protagonist is unbearable, he is just a dog of the system who likes to humiliate beloved characters only for his ego, how these guys charge me, his life depends on satisfying his fragile ego
Does the novel have some romance? If so, can you tell me at least when it starts so I can have some idea? Psst: I will read the novel anyway, I only ask because I would like to see who the protagonist meets and ends up with.
It's the first time I am abandoning a novel just from the first chapter, no respect for John Wick!? Another garbage Chinese mc just because of the system and power that have been given ( not earned through hard work) treat original characters like trash and think of himself as some sort of god
es buena estoy suscrito al patreon pero me exaspera A MI. un poco cuando hace arcos superar largos de alguna serie secundaria como ahora lo hace con agentes de shield
Great story and concept blending all sorts of cinematic universes into Marvel. however, the main character is extremely unlikeable, unreasonable, bloodthirsty and racist. also, ninja combat prowess is vastly over exaggerated, from the beginning of the story to chapter 400, there is not even a single challenging enemy and the MC is never even close to being in danger. it's also extremely weird reading descriptions of rock Lee gleefully turning enemy combatants into red mist with a single punch
espera mΓ‘s de esta historia la verdad, pero viendo que la trama es muy lenta, lo personaje no se desarrolla de forma constante y que el MC simplemente se harΓ‘ mΓ‘s fuerte sin hacer nada es aburrido, y relacionado al marvel (MCU) se tardo 340 capΓtulo para hacer solo aveger 1, decepcionante la verdad.
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Pretty good, but the system is really horrible. The system is the minus point of this Ff, complicated, pricey and terrible. His only way to recharge his VIP is gathering energy from "Artifacts",like dragonbones etc. His daily login only provides mc with basic item and some currency, including summon scroll and ninjutsu scroll that really rare (1 or 2 per month). And that scroll only gives mc some fragments of chara or ninjutsu, isn't a complete chara. Even the 10 consecutive draw only provides Mc some A tier fragment not a full Chara. MC need a slots to summon his chara that used system gold currency to open it. His system really just a bottomless pit garbage gacha game. IMO, the ninja chara a bit to powerful, maybe because they fight against normal person. If MC is luckier with his system, or the system become more generous and not to complicated, maybe this ff will be better
I just came to ask what is the problem that marvel fanfic authors have with Nick Fury , why is it that all of the time they end up killing him or degrading him in some way?
This is a great book there are some translation mistakes but it can easily be overlooked
Good work translator san. One of the best translated story i have been reading yetπ
Does not feel like a Chinese garbage translation that you would typically expect. In fact the translation is actually really good and there are few instances where the flow and grammar seem noticeable. The story itself seems less marvel then the title would suggest and is more of a cinematic universe with John Wick, Underworld, and I assume probably more. There are some weaker and stronger arcs but overall pretty entertaining. Main complaint would be that the main character is just a stand in for self insert and that a lot of the characters don't act in character at times. If you are able to ignore these things it is pretty good.
Sysnopsis needs a make over. Itβs like those Chinese garbage that does not tell anything about the book. But the fanfic is awesome. Really enjoyed reading this after all the garbage out there that I went through.
Compare to other translated Chinese fic.. this one is certainly better although there are some missing details and some inconsistency..overall I can say it's good so I'll give this 5
overall pretty solid ff tbo it have some weaker arcs. btw its not chinesse garbige
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Mc's development is definetely more unique than the standard. It's not about just fighting but also building an organization using great John Wick crossover. Overall grammer has a few mistakes but otherwise the writing is very good.
it wud be gud if the mc didn't mention what his summonings did before they're summoned. or perhaps, the author sud make an excuse that their memories and powers were sealed up or something... other than that, i like the story very much
other than the annoying habit of calling male character's her instead of he this is not a bad story ide rate it mid range not the best but i have read way worse .... on the whole not a bad little tale to maybe keep you entertained
There are some small grammar errors and words changed at the beginning but they seem to be corrected from chapter 12 onwards but for a translation from Chinese it is very well done. Other than that, the story is good.)
When I read the synopsis I thought it was another Chinese garbage, but it turned out to be a masterpiece in disguise, even though it starts to get bad after chapter 50.
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The storyline is great and makes a lot of fun to read! The translation is also very good. Overall is it a well accomplished translationβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦.
Overall storyline is great and engaging. Lots of fun reading and keep up the good work!
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Good translation, the story is good so far, the crossover of several action movies with Marvel is interesting. Not making it super powerful from the start and building step by step seems fine to me.
good crossover fic. the translation is good, so you have thumbs up from me. idk why you have so low views even after regular updates. ask your regular readers for more reviews.j
This is a fanfic of man named Charles who gets transmigrated to the MARVEL world with a system. This system not only allows him to grow stronger by acquiring the powers from NARUTO world but also summon many characters from that world. What to expect in this fanfic- 1. The marvel world is mixed with some movie worlds such as john wick. 2. Author takes his time building up mc's influence in the marvel world. So, this is not going to be very fast paced but I can assure you that every chapter is enjoyable. 3. You would have to be a little patient as the main scenes from avengers doesn't happen right off the bat instead it takes time. 4. Mc is not a lone wolf and he creates his own organization and power in the world. 5. Mc is strong but not too OP from the start as he gets stronger over time. Don't worry though, he is never going to that weak to the point of having no power to resist and getting bullied everywhere. 6. Lastly, mc isn't some hero type but someone who is ruthless when needs to be. I am not the writer of this fanfic, I am just translating it. But if you have any question, you can ask here. I will try my best to answer.
The rewriting is very good and I know that the author made an effort but I am sorry that the protagonist is unbearable, he is just a dog of the system who likes to humiliate beloved characters only for his ego, how these guys charge me, his life depends on satisfying his fragile ego
Does the novel have some romance? If so, can you tell me at least when it starts so I can have some idea? Psst: I will read the novel anyway, I only ask because I would like to see who the protagonist meets and ends up with.
It's the first time I am abandoning a novel just from the first chapter, no respect for John Wick!? Another garbage Chinese mc just because of the system and power that have been given ( not earned through hard work) treat original characters like trash and think of himself as some sort of god
es buena estoy suscrito al patreon pero me exaspera A MI. un poco cuando hace arcos superar largos de alguna serie secundaria como ahora lo hace con agentes de shield
Great story and concept blending all sorts of cinematic universes into Marvel. however, the main character is extremely unlikeable, unreasonable, bloodthirsty and racist. also, ninja combat prowess is vastly over exaggerated, from the beginning of the story to chapter 400, there is not even a single challenging enemy and the MC is never even close to being in danger. it's also extremely weird reading descriptions of rock Lee gleefully turning enemy combatants into red mist with a single punch
espera mΓ‘s de esta historia la verdad, pero viendo que la trama es muy lenta, lo personaje no se desarrolla de forma constante y que el MC simplemente se harΓ‘ mΓ‘s fuerte sin hacer nada es aburrido, y relacionado al marvel (MCU) se tardo 340 capΓtulo para hacer solo aveger 1, decepcionante la verdad.
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Pretty good, but the system is really horrible. The system is the minus point of this Ff, complicated, pricey and terrible. His only way to recharge his VIP is gathering energy from "Artifacts",like dragonbones etc. His daily login only provides mc with basic item and some currency, including summon scroll and ninjutsu scroll that really rare (1 or 2 per month). And that scroll only gives mc some fragments of chara or ninjutsu, isn't a complete chara. Even the 10 consecutive draw only provides Mc some A tier fragment not a full Chara. MC need a slots to summon his chara that used system gold currency to open it. His system really just a bottomless pit garbage gacha game. IMO, the ninja chara a bit to powerful, maybe because they fight against normal person. If MC is luckier with his system, or the system become more generous and not to complicated, maybe this ff will be better
I just came to ask what is the problem that marvel fanfic authors have with Nick Fury , why is it that all of the time they end up killing him or degrading him in some way?
This is a great book there are some translation mistakes but it can easily be overlooked
Good work translator san. One of the best translated story i have been reading yetπ
Does not feel like a Chinese garbage translation that you would typically expect. In fact the translation is actually really good and there are few instances where the flow and grammar seem noticeable. The story itself seems less marvel then the title would suggest and is more of a cinematic universe with John Wick, Underworld, and I assume probably more. There are some weaker and stronger arcs but overall pretty entertaining. Main complaint would be that the main character is just a stand in for self insert and that a lot of the characters don't act in character at times. If you are able to ignore these things it is pretty good.
Sysnopsis needs a make over. Itβs like those Chinese garbage that does not tell anything about the book. But the fanfic is awesome. Really enjoyed reading this after all the garbage out there that I went through.
Compare to other translated Chinese fic.. this one is certainly better although there are some missing details and some inconsistency..overall I can say it's good so I'll give this 5
overall pretty solid ff tbo it have some weaker arcs. btw its not chinesse garbige
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Mc's development is definetely more unique than the standard. It's not about just fighting but also building an organization using great John Wick crossover. Overall grammer has a few mistakes but otherwise the writing is very good.
it wud be gud if the mc didn't mention what his summonings did before they're summoned. or perhaps, the author sud make an excuse that their memories and powers were sealed up or something... other than that, i like the story very much
other than the annoying habit of calling male character's her instead of he this is not a bad story ide rate it mid range not the best but i have read way worse .... on the whole not a bad little tale to maybe keep you entertained
There are some small grammar errors and words changed at the beginning but they seem to be corrected from chapter 12 onwards but for a translation from Chinese it is very well done. Other than that, the story is good.)
When I read the synopsis I thought it was another Chinese garbage, but it turned out to be a masterpiece in disguise, even though it starts to get bad after chapter 50.
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......................................................................................................................................................................................surprised how fun it was to read it ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The storyline is great and makes a lot of fun to read! The translation is also very good. Overall is it a well accomplished translationβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦.
Overall storyline is great and engaging. Lots of fun reading and keep up the good work!
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Good translation, the story is good so far, the crossover of several action movies with Marvel is interesting. Not making it super powerful from the start and building step by step seems fine to me.
good crossover fic. the translation is good, so you have thumbs up from me. idk why you have so low views even after regular updates. ask your regular readers for more reviews.j
This is a fanfic of man named Charles who gets transmigrated to the MARVEL world with a system. This system not only allows him to grow stronger by acquiring the powers from NARUTO world but also summon many characters from that world. What to expect in this fanfic- 1. The marvel world is mixed with some movie worlds such as john wick. 2. Author takes his time building up mc's influence in the marvel world. So, this is not going to be very fast paced but I can assure you that every chapter is enjoyable. 3. You would have to be a little patient as the main scenes from avengers doesn't happen right off the bat instead it takes time. 4. Mc is not a lone wolf and he creates his own organization and power in the world. 5. Mc is strong but not too OP from the start as he gets stronger over time. Don't worry though, he is never going to that weak to the point of having no power to resist and getting bullied everywhere. 6. Lastly, mc isn't some hero type but someone who is ruthless when needs to be. I am not the writer of this fanfic, I am just translating it. But if you have any question, you can ask here. I will try my best to answer.