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Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
What's the point of making harem if it doesn't make sense. After all of that we only get plain characters. It's just a bad writing. The story is good, but it could've been a lot better without harem. What's even worse is that all his girls are pedo, might say something about the author.
esto, es maravilloso es fantástico, pero por que los capítulos son tan cortos quiero más por favor me encanta como desarrollas la historia y la escena de Robin es muy graciosa
4.2/5 . Very frequent updates which is good. The story is interesting, I haven't really seen a genderbent Mihawk in a serious fic that wasnt just fap material. Overpowered characters are something of a guilty pleasure for me to read, because most fics with them have 0 character design and or plot progression. Degeneracy is a plus.
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Was interested but when I read the character index where mc is 15 with 5 billion bounty and how many wifes he has plus the titles and devil fruits which conveniently are op and reading a few chapters, I gave up
-The grammar is amazing, barely any error and the sentences are well structured, its one of this fics strongest points. ---- -Updates: Very often, also one of this fic's strongest points. ---- -Story: It was amazing until around chapter 25, but then the priority went from getting "stronger" into taking care of his favorite characters at the cost of his own freedom basically, he bound himself to an area just to get three women into his harem. Basically, an adult in a child body since he was three, yet he is basically having sexual exploits with his "adoptive" mother since the age of 7. I ended up stopping to read this fic after chapter 54, due to the fact the flawed logic to write a forced lemon got out of hand: Three young girls that has been under captivity for years, being exposed to horrors in slavery, no doubt sexual in nature, all of a sudden wants to "do it" with the 10 year old mc?" Nah. ---- -Character Design: Mihawk and the MC was something very fresh, the MC developed a concept of haki then all of a sudden it turns out every important figure that has died in the past conveniently had it... Like Gol D Roger, Joy boy, and I would assume the world government by now. It was a very good idea, but destroying everything that made the MC unique was... not a good idea. ---- -World Background: Its the one piece world, it's an amazing world overall, so there's not really much to say there. ---- Overall, it was a great read, but when it became a harem collection generator I decided to stop reading, either way the author writes very solid fics and I felt myself grow as a fresh author myself after reading his works. Keep it up author! :)
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The MC (10) engages in sexual acts with his adoptive mother (who is 25+) and Hancock and her sisters, who at this point would also be around 10.
Amazing work there, a great story. The only thing I don't like about it is how everyone can have 4th haki like it's free food. It would be a 4.2/5 stars for me but seeing all these useless and braindead 1 star reviews I'll give a 5/5 star sympathy review.
It's a good story, nothing to criticize till now. I'm not sure about chapters ahead, but I will recommend giving this a try.
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Hahahaha I found another wonderful OP Fanfic, such wonderful day, it seems that this week is my lucky week,I found 2 awesome FF at same time.Ihope it never drops
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------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ooo the horror. this is what happens whens fans love a character too much. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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This is a great idea for a fanfic. I like the chemistry between Mihawk and MC, so a job well done. I would like it if you write down the timeline every time there’s a timeskip. All in all, a promising idea, good execution and soon-to-be excellent fanfic. Thank you for your work!
Umas das melhores fanfics de One Piece na Webnovel, se não a melhor. Pode ler sem medo, tu não irás se arrepender~ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I'm loving the story development and quality of writing. Also loving the pace of writing. Just keep up the good work author. Very hard to find an interesting novel these days. Even more difficult to find a good Fan fic like this one. Amazinggggggg ✨🔥
Sandro Alves de Oliveira, this is the name of the Brazilian who invented a motorcycle engine powered by water, this creation had national repercussions, was shown on TV and so on. shortly after he disappears, without explanation, no one knows what happened to him...
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So far I'm enjoying the fic, it's too early for further reviews but I'm tentatively giving it 5 stars and I'll do a better review in the future.
seems pretty good as of first chapter. I would recommend changing mihawks name to a more feminine one because it can get confusing on which gender she is because mihawk is associated with a male.
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
What's the point of making harem if it doesn't make sense. After all of that we only get plain characters. It's just a bad writing. The story is good, but it could've been a lot better without harem. What's even worse is that all his girls are pedo, might say something about the author.
esto, es maravilloso es fantástico, pero por que los capítulos son tan cortos quiero más por favor me encanta como desarrollas la historia y la escena de Robin es muy graciosa
4.2/5 . Very frequent updates which is good. The story is interesting, I haven't really seen a genderbent Mihawk in a serious fic that wasnt just fap material. Overpowered characters are something of a guilty pleasure for me to read, because most fics with them have 0 character design and or plot progression. Degeneracy is a plus.
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very good ....,.................................................,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,,,,.,..,,.,,.,.,,..,,.,,.,.,,,.,.,.,.,.,,..,,.,.,..,.,,.,.,.,,,,,,..,.,....,,.,..,.
Was interested but when I read the character index where mc is 15 with 5 billion bounty and how many wifes he has plus the titles and devil fruits which conveniently are op and reading a few chapters, I gave up
-The grammar is amazing, barely any error and the sentences are well structured, its one of this fics strongest points. ---- -Updates: Very often, also one of this fic's strongest points. ---- -Story: It was amazing until around chapter 25, but then the priority went from getting "stronger" into taking care of his favorite characters at the cost of his own freedom basically, he bound himself to an area just to get three women into his harem. Basically, an adult in a child body since he was three, yet he is basically having sexual exploits with his "adoptive" mother since the age of 7. I ended up stopping to read this fic after chapter 54, due to the fact the flawed logic to write a forced lemon got out of hand: Three young girls that has been under captivity for years, being exposed to horrors in slavery, no doubt sexual in nature, all of a sudden wants to "do it" with the 10 year old mc?" Nah. ---- -Character Design: Mihawk and the MC was something very fresh, the MC developed a concept of haki then all of a sudden it turns out every important figure that has died in the past conveniently had it... Like Gol D Roger, Joy boy, and I would assume the world government by now. It was a very good idea, but destroying everything that made the MC unique was... not a good idea. ---- -World Background: Its the one piece world, it's an amazing world overall, so there's not really much to say there. ---- Overall, it was a great read, but when it became a harem collection generator I decided to stop reading, either way the author writes very solid fics and I felt myself grow as a fresh author myself after reading his works. Keep it up author! :)
The best................................................................................................................................................
The MC (10) engages in sexual acts with his adoptive mother (who is 25+) and Hancock and her sisters, who at this point would also be around 10.
Amazing work there, a great story. The only thing I don't like about it is how everyone can have 4th haki like it's free food. It would be a 4.2/5 stars for me but seeing all these useless and braindead 1 star reviews I'll give a 5/5 star sympathy review.
It's a good story, nothing to criticize till now. I'm not sure about chapters ahead, but I will recommend giving this a try.
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Hahahaha I found another wonderful OP Fanfic, such wonderful day, it seems that this week is my lucky week,I found 2 awesome FF at same time.Ihope it never drops
Interesting plot. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ooo the horror. this is what happens whens fans love a character too much. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Butuh lebih banyak bab!!!Butuh lebih banyak bab!!!Butuh lebih bab!!!Butuh lebih banyak bab!!!Butuh lebih banyak bab!!!Butuh lebih bab!!!Butuh lebih banyak bab!!!Butuh lebih banyak bab!!!Butuh lebih bab!!!
This is a great idea for a fanfic. I like the chemistry between Mihawk and MC, so a job well done. I would like it if you write down the timeline every time there’s a timeskip. All in all, a promising idea, good execution and soon-to-be excellent fanfic. Thank you for your work!
Umas das melhores fanfics de One Piece na Webnovel, se não a melhor. Pode ler sem medo, tu não irás se arrepender~ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I'm loving the story development and quality of writing. Also loving the pace of writing. Just keep up the good work author. Very hard to find an interesting novel these days. Even more difficult to find a good Fan fic like this one. Amazinggggggg ✨🔥
Sandro Alves de Oliveira, this is the name of the Brazilian who invented a motorcycle engine powered by water, this creation had national repercussions, was shown on TV and so on. shortly after he disappears, without explanation, no one knows what happened to him...
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So far I'm enjoying the fic, it's too early for further reviews but I'm tentatively giving it 5 stars and I'll do a better review in the future.
seems pretty good as of first chapter. I would recommend changing mihawks name to a more feminine one because it can get confusing on which gender she is because mihawk is associated with a male.
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