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Story started very strong, ignore the others complaining about “nerfed abilities” because it is important for driving the beginning of the plot and the MC is very powerful (comparable to the avengers when he meets them). Unfortunately, around chapter ~20ish the author gave up and let’s ChatGPT write the story, all the chapters afterwards are total brainrot. I assume this is to more easily sell chapters but idk it’s a bummer. Still giving 4 stars because I enjoyed the beginning a lot, I’ll just pretend this was dropped after 20 and move on.
MC was nerfed so loudly this cringe sound yeeted me from reading. Cutting quite versatile abilities to "press F to win" button on discount was very disappointing. Overall it looked like author watched Naruto instead of learning words like "gravity" or "energy". Writing was quite good through.
I tried my best to push through but the author gave mc much stunted growth, hard cap on his abilities and protagonists bad luck with no good luck. I stopped in the middle of the third chapter cause I just couldn’t continue when the first 2 chapters were pretty much just describing how nerfed the mc is, don’t get me wrong I liked where his powers were going and i don’t like mc’s that are too op as I feel it ruins the story but come on you got to give him something while he just smiles like a masochist.
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I will leave it here for now, as I like the way the fanfiction is progressing.
No offense but I don't see this going far you could've used the Deva path as a medium to give him full gravity manipulation then you can limit the others but now you've limited his growth by alot Not saying he should be op straight up immediately but at least we would know that along the line he'll grow more powerful
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This won't get far a couple of weeks this ff will be dead I hope someone reads this before it gets deleted
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Harém? I haven't even read it yet but I'll give it 5 stars to support it!! 👍 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Hello everyone, it's the author here. I hope you're all doing well and keeping on smiling. I had to publish the fanfiction on a new account because my last account wasn't working properly. Additionally, I haven't been able to upload new chapters for the past few days due to being sick. However, I have recovered now and will resume regularly uploading chapters. I apologize for any inconvenience and I hope you'll give it a read.
Story started very strong, ignore the others complaining about “nerfed abilities” because it is important for driving the beginning of the plot and the MC is very powerful (comparable to the avengers when he meets them). Unfortunately, around chapter ~20ish the author gave up and let’s ChatGPT write the story, all the chapters afterwards are total brainrot. I assume this is to more easily sell chapters but idk it’s a bummer. Still giving 4 stars because I enjoyed the beginning a lot, I’ll just pretend this was dropped after 20 and move on.
MC was nerfed so loudly this cringe sound yeeted me from reading. Cutting quite versatile abilities to "press F to win" button on discount was very disappointing. Overall it looked like author watched Naruto instead of learning words like "gravity" or "energy". Writing was quite good through.
I tried my best to push through but the author gave mc much stunted growth, hard cap on his abilities and protagonists bad luck with no good luck. I stopped in the middle of the third chapter cause I just couldn’t continue when the first 2 chapters were pretty much just describing how nerfed the mc is, don’t get me wrong I liked where his powers were going and i don’t like mc’s that are too op as I feel it ruins the story but come on you got to give him something while he just smiles like a masochist.
Reveal Spoiler I will leave it here for now, as I like the way the fanfiction is progressing.
No offense but I don't see this going far you could've used the Deva path as a medium to give him full gravity manipulation then you can limit the others but now you've limited his growth by alot Not saying he should be op straight up immediately but at least we would know that along the line he'll grow more powerful
xaxxaxxaxaxxaxxaxxaxaxaxxaxaxaxaxxaxaxaxaxaxxxxaxaxaxaxaxxaxxaxaxaxaxxaxaaxaaaaxaaxaaxxaaxaxxaxaxaaxaxaxaxxaxaxaaxaxaxxaaxaxxaaxxaxaaaxxaxaxaxaaxaxaxaxaxaxaxaxaxaxaxxa fantastic
This won't get far a couple of weeks this ff will be dead I hope someone reads this before it gets deleted
Reveal Spoiler Harém? I haven't even read it yet but I'll give it 5 stars to support it!! 👍 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Hello everyone, it's the author here. I hope you're all doing well and keeping on smiling. I had to publish the fanfiction on a new account because my last account wasn't working properly. Additionally, I haven't been able to upload new chapters for the past few days due to being sick. However, I have recovered now and will resume regularly uploading chapters. I apologize for any inconvenience and I hope you'll give it a read.