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This is good cant wait for more hope you send him back to one punch man world EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE E E E E e e e e e e
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Author here! I am obligated to review my own novel so I'll just put a 3 stars yet still! I hope you enjoy my novel, I have a lot of plans and I already researches the One punch man world. I just hope that people would support my endeavor in writing this because I am writing my very first novel, I accept constructive criticism and I will respect everyone's understanding of the world. I even listened to some theories so I would advice anyone who reads this that you might be spoiled if you haven't read the latest chapter in the manga. Just please don't be mad at me when I do mistakes, it's a learning process for me and I want this fanfic to be acceptable. No harem, I have already foreshadowed who his partner is in this world. Also, there won't be any changes on the canon plot except that some people know his identity due to the reason that he had met them. That is all, thank you for understanding, I will sleep now and have a great day!
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Worst fanfic I’ve ever read 😂 At most, maybe one thing each chapter is logical; everything else doesn’t make a single bit of sense. Also, having your MC who was previously an old man with a lot of life experience call someone mommy as soon as he’s born is actually so gross and unreadable. And last but not least, it felt like I was reading MTL on crack with your horrible grammar. If you’re native to English, please get a tutor or go to the hospital and get a test or something done for autism, but if you’re a foreigner, just stick to your own language if you’re the type to settle for this monstrosity of an English form.
This is good cant wait for more hope you send him back to one punch man world EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE E E E E e e e e e e
Reveal Spoiler Author here! I am obligated to review my own novel so I'll just put a 3 stars yet still! I hope you enjoy my novel, I have a lot of plans and I already researches the One punch man world. I just hope that people would support my endeavor in writing this because I am writing my very first novel, I accept constructive criticism and I will respect everyone's understanding of the world. I even listened to some theories so I would advice anyone who reads this that you might be spoiled if you haven't read the latest chapter in the manga. Just please don't be mad at me when I do mistakes, it's a learning process for me and I want this fanfic to be acceptable. No harem, I have already foreshadowed who his partner is in this world. Also, there won't be any changes on the canon plot except that some people know his identity due to the reason that he had met them. That is all, thank you for understanding, I will sleep now and have a great day!
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Worst fanfic I’ve ever read 😂 At most, maybe one thing each chapter is logical; everything else doesn’t make a single bit of sense. Also, having your MC who was previously an old man with a lot of life experience call someone mommy as soon as he’s born is actually so gross and unreadable. And last but not least, it felt like I was reading MTL on crack with your horrible grammar. If you’re native to English, please get a tutor or go to the hospital and get a test or something done for autism, but if you’re a foreigner, just stick to your own language if you’re the type to settle for this monstrosity of an English form.