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The problem with murder is that everyone is a hypocrite, first of all no one has the right to demand that someone kill another person if they don't want to, second it's a law, if you don't like it, get political and change the law, don't worry. complain like a spoiled brat thirdly there are places where it's legal but the rest of the world doesn't imitate them for a reason don't you think? and fourthly there are people who are allowed to kill but nobody wants to go this way as it takes away the fun of believe they are god
It's good overall, in the beginning it's kind of confusing and irritating but once you get into it you'll get hooked. Like getting a burger in some back alley dinner, it may seem stupid and sketchy but it's soooooo good. Give it a try!
Read till end of volume 1 in 1 day due to how hooked i got to this fafic, the reason the mc has his op powers is well thought out, the system thing is kinda weird bcz it felt useless the entire time except in those 2 scanning moments so u basically forget it even exists. The characters didn't feel 2D even though he barely interacted with people that aren't his family/close ones so i hope to see more interactions in next volume with the rest of the dc characters. Early part felt kinda boring (slice of life-ish) but it slowly ramps up and the plot twists are good. Overall it's really enjoyable. P.S for people that didn't notice, this is a harem and soo far there are 2 ppl confirmed and 3 unconfirmed LI until later volumes.
I feel like your writing still doesn’t work well for books. I’m not saying your writing is bad, but feels more like a script/storyboard to a tv show (the whole alien scene as an example).
The grammar and writing style are impeccable .I like the suspense and the characters overall too . Keep going ! Love it !
Nice as always.. but its just too short and i finished it in just half a day.. imma wait for now so i can bingeeee, ciaooo 👌
Too much edge tbh. The tone of the chapters and characters sometimes don't match with each other.
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On one hand, superheroes, always a fan when people take that genre and tries their own take on it, but on the other hand...I'm not sure where I would stand on this whole harem, no-harem debate, but hey I trust you know what you're doing
I just read the first chapter, and the plot was actually simple. But, it was executed properly. The dialogues were good, but what stands out we're the details on each paragraphs .
Dropped on chapter 32 for reasons.. good writing and characters but certain situation about to happen that i find disgusting… If you can tolerate it then enjoy.
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That's some good story I have read in a while. Good MC, proper background, no rush writing, good grammar, stable updates.👍👍👍👍👍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
+5 for quality chapters. It's a great improvement over the author's other works. Main protagonist is well written from what I have read so far. Good read so far. And despite some OP quirks, MC still has weaknesses which we don't see very often. It makes the power balanced.
A perfect start and a likable main character. No complaint about that. The story line is unique and interesting. Not many chs, but yeah, that's some quality writing there. Give it a try if you are into slow burn with proper development.
Story development- Good startup Grammar- Good Character- Feels lively World background- DC [I don't think I need to say more] Although not many chs, enjoyed the story so far. A bit slowburn, but I like it.
A proper start and build-up. Writing is as good as always just like your other multiverse fiction. There is proper depths to the character, MC and his girl. And the mystery behind those shadowy messengers and that small Xenomorph. Man, it's too interesting.
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Awesome start. I might have shed a tear or two at the starting ch. I am glad MC didn't die of some truckkun. And it's been a long time since I read any Xenomorph related fanfic. I am sure this one is going to be as good as your other two multiverse fictions. Waiting eagerly to read the next chs.
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Not many chapters, but as always, the writing is really good. PLUS. Xenomorphs vs Justice League. Can't wait to see which direction this fic goes. Keep up the good work.
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Starting was really good, as the author didn't rush and took things step by step. And it takes place in DCU, which is one of my fav. The thing is people are torn apart by harem or no-harem. Even the harem lovers are having second thoughts. Keep it up.
Here I am with the usual 5 star review. If you have any questions regarding this fic, feel free to ask here. Any typos, let me know and I will fix them.
The problem with murder is that everyone is a hypocrite, first of all no one has the right to demand that someone kill another person if they don't want to, second it's a law, if you don't like it, get political and change the law, don't worry. complain like a spoiled brat thirdly there are places where it's legal but the rest of the world doesn't imitate them for a reason don't you think? and fourthly there are people who are allowed to kill but nobody wants to go this way as it takes away the fun of believe they are god
It's good overall, in the beginning it's kind of confusing and irritating but once you get into it you'll get hooked. Like getting a burger in some back alley dinner, it may seem stupid and sketchy but it's soooooo good. Give it a try!
Read till end of volume 1 in 1 day due to how hooked i got to this fafic, the reason the mc has his op powers is well thought out, the system thing is kinda weird bcz it felt useless the entire time except in those 2 scanning moments so u basically forget it even exists. The characters didn't feel 2D even though he barely interacted with people that aren't his family/close ones so i hope to see more interactions in next volume with the rest of the dc characters. Early part felt kinda boring (slice of life-ish) but it slowly ramps up and the plot twists are good. Overall it's really enjoyable. P.S for people that didn't notice, this is a harem and soo far there are 2 ppl confirmed and 3 unconfirmed LI until later volumes.
I feel like your writing still doesn’t work well for books. I’m not saying your writing is bad, but feels more like a script/storyboard to a tv show (the whole alien scene as an example).
The grammar and writing style are impeccable .I like the suspense and the characters overall too . Keep going ! Love it !
Nice as always.. but its just too short and i finished it in just half a day.. imma wait for now so i can bingeeee, ciaooo 👌
Too much edge tbh. The tone of the chapters and characters sometimes don't match with each other.
🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩Love the novel, just read it. I promise you will not be wasting your time
On one hand, superheroes, always a fan when people take that genre and tries their own take on it, but on the other hand...I'm not sure where I would stand on this whole harem, no-harem debate, but hey I trust you know what you're doing
I just read the first chapter, and the plot was actually simple. But, it was executed properly. The dialogues were good, but what stands out we're the details on each paragraphs .
Dropped on chapter 32 for reasons.. good writing and characters but certain situation about to happen that i find disgusting… If you can tolerate it then enjoy.
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That's some good story I have read in a while. Good MC, proper background, no rush writing, good grammar, stable updates.👍👍👍👍👍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
+5 for quality chapters. It's a great improvement over the author's other works. Main protagonist is well written from what I have read so far. Good read so far. And despite some OP quirks, MC still has weaknesses which we don't see very often. It makes the power balanced.
A perfect start and a likable main character. No complaint about that. The story line is unique and interesting. Not many chs, but yeah, that's some quality writing there. Give it a try if you are into slow burn with proper development.
Story development- Good startup Grammar- Good Character- Feels lively World background- DC [I don't think I need to say more] Although not many chs, enjoyed the story so far. A bit slowburn, but I like it.
A proper start and build-up. Writing is as good as always just like your other multiverse fiction. There is proper depths to the character, MC and his girl. And the mystery behind those shadowy messengers and that small Xenomorph. Man, it's too interesting.
Reveal Spoiler Awesome start. I might have shed a tear or two at the starting ch. I am glad MC didn't die of some truckkun. And it's been a long time since I read any Xenomorph related fanfic. I am sure this one is going to be as good as your other two multiverse fictions. Waiting eagerly to read the next chs.
Reveal Spoiler Not many chapters, but as always, the writing is really good. PLUS. Xenomorphs vs Justice League. Can't wait to see which direction this fic goes. Keep up the good work.
Reveal Spoiler Starting was really good, as the author didn't rush and took things step by step. And it takes place in DCU, which is one of my fav. The thing is people are torn apart by harem or no-harem. Even the harem lovers are having second thoughts. Keep it up.
Here I am with the usual 5 star review. If you have any questions regarding this fic, feel free to ask here. Any typos, let me know and I will fix them.