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Write a reviewIt's a good fanfic so far, of course if it has good editors, it would be much better but it's still readble.I hope the mc will face some set backs because he's mostly slapping some other people down.It need some adjustment in battle powerBecause the mc should easily fight people above his realm but he uses everything just to fight someone at same level, even though he wins easily its still annoying a lil.And please explain more clearly about new skill he gets and if they are original or from novels since it gets irritating
Its hard to find a good martial universe fanfic, it gets annoying when they keep praising mc while all he does is stay in newbie town forever and cultivate while i don't mind that but the praise and daily life and interaction is so bland and tasteless even the topic they talk about are mostly cringe af 3 stars writing quality as its readable for a translated novel1 stars story is meh1 stars for character 2 stars for update4 stars for World background its martial universe so it gets high stars automatically for mr
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................................................................. other than a few translation errors, it's pretty good i like this novel .................................................................
Haven't read it yet but I have a problem with the concept of this novel, BBTH and Martial Universe take place in the same verse, the mcs of both novel have meet each other eventually, so there is gonna be two Flame Emperors in the same verse
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Reveal SpoilerIt's a good fanfic so far, of course if it has good editors, it would be much better but it's still readble.I hope the mc will face some set backs because he's mostly slapping some other people down.It need some adjustment in battle powerBecause the mc should easily fight people above his realm but he uses everything just to fight someone at same level, even though he wins easily its still annoying a lil.And please explain more clearly about new skill he gets and if they are original or from novels since it gets irritating
Its hard to find a good martial universe fanfic, it gets annoying when they keep praising mc while all he does is stay in newbie town forever and cultivate while i don't mind that but the praise and daily life and interaction is so bland and tasteless even the topic they talk about are mostly cringe af 3 stars writing quality as its readable for a translated novel1 stars story is meh1 stars for character 2 stars for update4 stars for World background its martial universe so it gets high stars automatically for mr
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................................................................. other than a few translation errors, it's pretty good i like this novel .................................................................
Haven't read it yet but I have a problem with the concept of this novel, BBTH and Martial Universe take place in the same verse, the mcs of both novel have meet each other eventually, so there is gonna be two Flame Emperors in the same verse
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i like this novel: : i l o v e Y O U B R O XAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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