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Honestly, this ff deserves more attention, I hope the author doesn't get ged and keeps posting, If he was more active stability update wise it'd be great, but o well, Keep up the good work!
I am the shameless author here to perform the ritual of the shameless by rating my book 5 stars but everyone wait a minute I am not shameless if it's a ritual right, so I am just great author performing a ritual
Really interesting first 5 chapters, hope the author wont drop. If the story continues I'll make a new review, but for the first 5 chapter I thisnks this is appropriat
possibly good premise for a story but. the dialog is absolutely garbage. the MC is trying to be funny but he either makes no sense. sounds like a robot. or says completely cringe inappropriate things. it hurts to read.
Honestly, this ff deserves more attention, I hope the author doesn't get ged and keeps posting, If he was more active stability update wise it'd be great, but o well, Keep up the good work!
I am the shameless author here to perform the ritual of the shameless by rating my book 5 stars but everyone wait a minute I am not shameless if it's a ritual right, so I am just great author performing a ritual
Really interesting first 5 chapters, hope the author wont drop. If the story continues I'll make a new review, but for the first 5 chapter I thisnks this is appropriat
possibly good premise for a story but. the dialog is absolutely garbage. the MC is trying to be funny but he either makes no sense. sounds like a robot. or says completely cringe inappropriate things. it hurts to read.