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24.08.2024 Hello everyone, I'm here to give you some news. As you know, I stopped the story by deciding to edit it. And since the day I stopped it, I have been working on rewriting and collecting chapters. But a few days ago an unfortunate event happened. My computer broke down and all the chapters I had written so far were deleted. Normally I would also keep my chapters on my USB drive, but I had to format it because it was infected with a virus. When my computer broke down right after the chapters on my USB drive were gone, all those chapters were deleted. Honestly, I'm despondent. I'm talking about almost eight months of chapter accumulation. So I regret that I will not be able to release the chapters on the date I promised you, so I have no other option but to create a new release date. I want to rewrite the episodes and accumulate episodes, so I've moved the new release date to next March. I apologize for breaking my promise and ask for your understanding.
Usually I don’t go out of my way to write reviews but it absolutely needs to be written in this case. This novel does not suffer from a language barrier issue but rather a complete lack of planning, inability to weave information into the story line (which leads to rather lazy info dumps), and just terrible cliche characters. Does not deserve it high rating when its clear how little effort was put in.
The novel starts of with a typical trope of transmigration into a game and being better than the MCs with elite families as enemies and whatnot. However, the entire book turns over its head becoming a banger after Raven Rivera. Only critique is the poor use of pronouns and grammer which makes the story a bit confusing but it's still good despite this obvious shortcoming!! Read it if you can persist with it's flaws
For the moment the story is interesting, base, I think you have noticed on universes of known Novel, but always interesting if well use the characters except the mc are not developed for the moment the family of the MC, I do not wish an arc of excuse, the Cale Henituse-based MC can’t be bad of course, I’ll follow it to see if the flaws will disappear or intensify. (i wait to see author be better.)
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Really boring and nothing new to read. It was very sad that I wasted my time.
just asking cuz i dont really get why people do this. dont you think its more interesting to have the mc excel at what everyone else does? theres so many of these novels that use a magic system or something and then just give the mc some weird concept power like darkness or void just to make them special. its almost like writing a harry potter fanfiction and making the mc use jutsus from naruto. it feels weird and impossible to measure the mc with other people. the trope of mc appearing weak to everyone because he is outside of their system is so overused im seriously confused why authors do it so often. its at the point where the general story map is exactly the same in all of these novels that are derivatives of the authors pov..
Honestly, this novel has so many flaws but I still persevered because I liked the mc's powers ( one of the flaws is in his power ) the mc's personality is so inconsistent. He was shown to be someone indifferent, someone who doesnt care about others but suddenly turns into a compassionate guy who is overly friendly... definitely will be disappointed if your here for some cool mc ( he is a coward. ) his powers.. ugh.. they are nerfed so bad- anyway, if your a reader who doesn't care much about mc's personality go ahead.
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keep it up i really enjoyed reading this novel i had great time reading it.
a story definitely worth reading, my only critique being the poor use of pronouns(he/she/him/her),in rest 10/10[img=recommend]
good start I love the main character his lonely side and his personality to want to get stronger PS (he had the harem category was you removed will the romance go little by little or we focus on the mc or he will have a harem but much later)
I found this novel when i was searching for a good novel to read and i enjoy it, well its all i have to say and you have my support
The best book I have ever read, I request all readers to read this book and be hooked by it. That's all.
I really love this novel....and the mc power is similar to gojo as well....and I really wanted to read a novel with an mc with similar powers a long time ago,and it seems it got granted as well...author I am truly grateful for this and I hope you succeed in completing this novel as well....for anyone who reads similar Webnovels like these I strongly recommend this one...I have a very good feeling about this novel
By the way, even if I give the novel a high rating, I don't think it deserves this much. Anyway, hello everyone. I hope you are living a good and happy life. If you're curious about the course of the novel, I've shared the reasons at the end of chapter 246. From there, you can see the detailed information. If you ask me why I'm sharing it from there, it would be difficult for my old readers to see the announcement I wrote in the first chapter. So I wished they could see it from there without spending money on the announcement chapter.
24.08.2024 Hello everyone, I'm here to give you some news. As you know, I stopped the story by deciding to edit it. And since the day I stopped it, I have been working on rewriting and collecting chapters. But a few days ago an unfortunate event happened. My computer broke down and all the chapters I had written so far were deleted. Normally I would also keep my chapters on my USB drive, but I had to format it because it was infected with a virus. When my computer broke down right after the chapters on my USB drive were gone, all those chapters were deleted. Honestly, I'm despondent. I'm talking about almost eight months of chapter accumulation. So I regret that I will not be able to release the chapters on the date I promised you, so I have no other option but to create a new release date. I want to rewrite the episodes and accumulate episodes, so I've moved the new release date to next March. I apologize for breaking my promise and ask for your understanding.
Usually I don’t go out of my way to write reviews but it absolutely needs to be written in this case. This novel does not suffer from a language barrier issue but rather a complete lack of planning, inability to weave information into the story line (which leads to rather lazy info dumps), and just terrible cliche characters. Does not deserve it high rating when its clear how little effort was put in.
The novel starts of with a typical trope of transmigration into a game and being better than the MCs with elite families as enemies and whatnot. However, the entire book turns over its head becoming a banger after Raven Rivera. Only critique is the poor use of pronouns and grammer which makes the story a bit confusing but it's still good despite this obvious shortcoming!! Read it if you can persist with it's flaws
For the moment the story is interesting, base, I think you have noticed on universes of known Novel, but always interesting if well use the characters except the mc are not developed for the moment the family of the MC, I do not wish an arc of excuse, the Cale Henituse-based MC can’t be bad of course, I’ll follow it to see if the flaws will disappear or intensify. (i wait to see author be better.)
Reveal Spoiler Really boring and nothing new to read. It was very sad that I wasted my time.
just asking cuz i dont really get why people do this. dont you think its more interesting to have the mc excel at what everyone else does? theres so many of these novels that use a magic system or something and then just give the mc some weird concept power like darkness or void just to make them special. its almost like writing a harry potter fanfiction and making the mc use jutsus from naruto. it feels weird and impossible to measure the mc with other people. the trope of mc appearing weak to everyone because he is outside of their system is so overused im seriously confused why authors do it so often. its at the point where the general story map is exactly the same in all of these novels that are derivatives of the authors pov..
Honestly, this novel has so many flaws but I still persevered because I liked the mc's powers ( one of the flaws is in his power ) the mc's personality is so inconsistent. He was shown to be someone indifferent, someone who doesnt care about others but suddenly turns into a compassionate guy who is overly friendly... definitely will be disappointed if your here for some cool mc ( he is a coward. ) his powers.. ugh.. they are nerfed so bad- anyway, if your a reader who doesn't care much about mc's personality go ahead.
fgsdgsdgsdgdsg dsgsdgdsgsdgsdgsdtwgegew twe tewtewtew tew tew tew tewtew tew twet wet wet ewtr utr uytkukyu kyuk uykuy kyukuy iti6uru5e y 4et w rwr qw rwr
keep it up i really enjoyed reading this novel i had great time reading it.
a story definitely worth reading, my only critique being the poor use of pronouns(he/she/him/her),in rest 10/10[img=recommend]
good start I love the main character his lonely side and his personality to want to get stronger PS (he had the harem category was you removed will the romance go little by little or we focus on the mc or he will have a harem but much later)
I found this novel when i was searching for a good novel to read and i enjoy it, well its all i have to say and you have my support
The best book I have ever read, I request all readers to read this book and be hooked by it. That's all.
I really love this novel....and the mc power is similar to gojo as well....and I really wanted to read a novel with an mc with similar powers a long time ago,and it seems it got granted as well...author I am truly grateful for this and I hope you succeed in completing this novel as well....for anyone who reads similar Webnovels like these I strongly recommend this one...I have a very good feeling about this novel
By the way, even if I give the novel a high rating, I don't think it deserves this much. Anyway, hello everyone. I hope you are living a good and happy life. If you're curious about the course of the novel, I've shared the reasons at the end of chapter 246. From there, you can see the detailed information. If you ask me why I'm sharing it from there, it would be difficult for my old readers to see the announcement I wrote in the first chapter. So I wished they could see it from there without spending money on the announcement chapter.