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Tbh, I haven’t read this fan-fic yet. But based on his previous work, I’m very excited to see you produce more chapters for this novel.
A very nice fanfiction. I read a few chapters. The author has definitely made a nice fanfiction. But I stopped reading, the reason is simple; There is no romance. I'm a fan of heavy romance. But don't think it's bad because I left the story unfinished and make sure you read it. Note: I have looked at the author's other stories and I am reading some of the stories that interest me.
I'm only leaving a review because the author said that you are gay if you don't leave a review so that's why I'm doing this (Help Me He Has Me At Gunpoint!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
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in the beginning i thought it will be something subpar cuz nobody really trying to make fanfic anymore just chinese translations... but was surprised how funny and interesting are the chapters hope to see/read more
Good fic, the best current One Piece one. The writing quality is decent, with the humor characteristic of One Piece. There are two chapters a day, great story development, and a good pace. The character design is excellent; I like Ace and how he interacts with his crewmates and the world. I also like his goal, and the OCs are good. There are some minor issues with the ages of certain characters, but nothing major. The author could still edit these errors, though.
I enjoyed it Conversation is quit funny Its good for a quick read (Had to leave a review author has a gun apparently)
Alright, really good start, I'm compelled to keep reading, but the only problem is the lack of chapters, even though I can see that the author updates at least 2 chapters a day? I pray for a whip so I can give it to someone who can whip the author into doing a minimun of 10 chapters a day.
I read this story It sounded like a lot of Op character, It was cool, but he put some characters out of their Time zone, also not canon related. I stopped reading when he Made a fight with cocodrile and Make him use "Awakening" I Actually forgive the One about bonney in His crew, while she's 7 in the story but he said he write It before Oda's reveal. but really Awakening for alabasta crocodile. also 4 years prior to Luffy's???
unoriginal wishfullfilment ff with super op MC... its an AU and not actuall one piece as well.. crocodile had haki and awakaned logia... story feels rushed
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The pacing is too fast that despite the already established canon characters, it feels like any attempt for an emotional route seems so cheap. Being reborn as Ace is already a blessing already. The system rewards spoiled it for me, it removed any sense of payoff for his power ups.
As always great ff! Looking forward to more. Thanks Author! More chapters please.
Amazing story, I highly recommend reading it. The only flaw I can find is that the author overplays his stupidity.
Well, I've read till 20 chapters . It's overall good considering story quality. I'm just not a fan of the way mc behaves .It feels like he's trying too hard to be funny or the dialogues are just not good enough. I get it that the author was trying to relate to the dialogue style of one piece story, but I'm not a fan of it, especially considering that mc is not originally from there. Also, comedy isn't really working. Otherwise, everything is pretty much good. Story has good pace and amazing writing as usual.
(PT-BR) Comentando para motivar o autor, dizer que estou ansioso por mais capítulos e também para dizer que estou gostando bastante da história.
(PT-BR) Pelo amor, se for pra parar na melhor parte e fazer eu esperar ansioso é melhor não postar por um tempo e postar tudo de uma vez, agr estou ansioso esperando o capítulo. Mas Agora falando sobre a história, na minha opinião, continua boa e está se desenvolvendo bem.
Writing Quality - 3 🌟 There are grammatical errors plus the overall quality is in my opinion not up to standard. more information is in the other rating. Story development - 3 🌟 Very rushed, I understand you want to go to action as soon as possible but the story feels lacking, there is no depth to it. So it just felt like a summary rather than the story for me. Character Design - 4 🌟 There is not much to complain about here, the rating falls short due to the subpar character interactions. Updating Stability - 5 🌟 nothing to say here World background -2 🌟 the story progresses with the intention that you already know of the one-piece lore and story, but even for a fanfic, there has to be more to it. you have to add more details and make it engaging for the readers even if it is nth time they are reading it. This Is just my honest opinion on this fic, To those who read this review, just read at least 10 chapters, and see if you like it. Good luck to the author.
(PT-BR) POR FAVOR autor, não desista dessa história, são não vou ter que caçar você e sua família, pena que estou sem pedras do poder para poder motivar o autor a escrever mais essa história maravilhosa.
It’s a great novel, absolutely zero flaws. The author is handsome with jade skin and sword-like eyebrows…… Can I feed my kids now? I did what you asked of me!
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Tbh, I haven’t read this fan-fic yet. But based on his previous work, I’m very excited to see you produce more chapters for this novel.
A very nice fanfiction. I read a few chapters. The author has definitely made a nice fanfiction. But I stopped reading, the reason is simple; There is no romance. I'm a fan of heavy romance. But don't think it's bad because I left the story unfinished and make sure you read it. Note: I have looked at the author's other stories and I am reading some of the stories that interest me.
I'm only leaving a review because the author said that you are gay if you don't leave a review so that's why I'm doing this (Help Me He Has Me At Gunpoint!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
Like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like lilke like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like lilke like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like lilke like like like like like
in the beginning i thought it will be something subpar cuz nobody really trying to make fanfic anymore just chinese translations... but was surprised how funny and interesting are the chapters hope to see/read more
Good fic, the best current One Piece one. The writing quality is decent, with the humor characteristic of One Piece. There are two chapters a day, great story development, and a good pace. The character design is excellent; I like Ace and how he interacts with his crewmates and the world. I also like his goal, and the OCs are good. There are some minor issues with the ages of certain characters, but nothing major. The author could still edit these errors, though.
I enjoyed it Conversation is quit funny Its good for a quick read (Had to leave a review author has a gun apparently)
Alright, really good start, I'm compelled to keep reading, but the only problem is the lack of chapters, even though I can see that the author updates at least 2 chapters a day? I pray for a whip so I can give it to someone who can whip the author into doing a minimun of 10 chapters a day.
I read this story It sounded like a lot of Op character, It was cool, but he put some characters out of their Time zone, also not canon related. I stopped reading when he Made a fight with cocodrile and Make him use "Awakening" I Actually forgive the One about bonney in His crew, while she's 7 in the story but he said he write It before Oda's reveal. but really Awakening for alabasta crocodile. also 4 years prior to Luffy's???
unoriginal wishfullfilment ff with super op MC... its an AU and not actuall one piece as well.. crocodile had haki and awakaned logia... story feels rushed
👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻👨🏼💻🤴🏼🦸🏼♂️🏊🏼♂️🏄🏼♂️🏂🏼🪂🚵🏼♂️🚴🏼♂️🏇🏼🏇🏼🏇🏼🏋🏼♂️🏋🏼♂️🏋🏼♂️🏋🏼♂️Good fanfictions to read only problem too much
The pacing is too fast that despite the already established canon characters, it feels like any attempt for an emotional route seems so cheap. Being reborn as Ace is already a blessing already. The system rewards spoiled it for me, it removed any sense of payoff for his power ups.
As always great ff! Looking forward to more. Thanks Author! More chapters please.
Amazing story, I highly recommend reading it. The only flaw I can find is that the author overplays his stupidity.
Well, I've read till 20 chapters . It's overall good considering story quality. I'm just not a fan of the way mc behaves .It feels like he's trying too hard to be funny or the dialogues are just not good enough. I get it that the author was trying to relate to the dialogue style of one piece story, but I'm not a fan of it, especially considering that mc is not originally from there. Also, comedy isn't really working. Otherwise, everything is pretty much good. Story has good pace and amazing writing as usual.
(PT-BR) Comentando para motivar o autor, dizer que estou ansioso por mais capítulos e também para dizer que estou gostando bastante da história.
(PT-BR) Pelo amor, se for pra parar na melhor parte e fazer eu esperar ansioso é melhor não postar por um tempo e postar tudo de uma vez, agr estou ansioso esperando o capítulo. Mas Agora falando sobre a história, na minha opinião, continua boa e está se desenvolvendo bem.
Writing Quality - 3 🌟 There are grammatical errors plus the overall quality is in my opinion not up to standard. more information is in the other rating. Story development - 3 🌟 Very rushed, I understand you want to go to action as soon as possible but the story feels lacking, there is no depth to it. So it just felt like a summary rather than the story for me. Character Design - 4 🌟 There is not much to complain about here, the rating falls short due to the subpar character interactions. Updating Stability - 5 🌟 nothing to say here World background -2 🌟 the story progresses with the intention that you already know of the one-piece lore and story, but even for a fanfic, there has to be more to it. you have to add more details and make it engaging for the readers even if it is nth time they are reading it. This Is just my honest opinion on this fic, To those who read this review, just read at least 10 chapters, and see if you like it. Good luck to the author.
(PT-BR) POR FAVOR autor, não desista dessa história, são não vou ter que caçar você e sua família, pena que estou sem pedras do poder para poder motivar o autor a escrever mais essa história maravilhosa.
It’s a great novel, absolutely zero flaws. The author is handsome with jade skin and sword-like eyebrows…… Can I feed my kids now? I did what you asked of me!
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Great novel, but is doesn’t feel like Ace and feels more like a Luffy character