Reviews of Orphan in Naruto World by edisonmarcus - Webnovel

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Beyond_

So far so good, a pity the chapters are too short but I suppose this increases the choices and decreases the time it takes to be released. Try adding dashes later depending on the choice, if it's an important one

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edisonmarcus

Hey Author here this story is all about Your input. select a direction in which the story should move it will move in that direction. I too don't know where it will end it will be short chapters but I assure you that I will speed up the process with more chapters in a day if the chapter comments are more

1yr
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Beyond_

So far so good, a pity the chapters are too short but I suppose this increases the choices and decreases the time it takes to be released. Try adding dashes later depending on the choice, if it's an important one

1yr
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edisonmarcus

Hey Author here this story is all about Your input. select a direction in which the story should move it will move in that direction. I too don't know where it will end it will be short chapters but I assure you that I will speed up the process with more chapters in a day if the chapter comments are more

1yr
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