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Love the story and i enjoy the fast paced, you are not wasting chapters with too much detail. Straight to the point. Hope to have more update because one chapter a week is terrible
So author great story just as I like an overpowered novel.But there are some problems such as1.Story is too fast paced.Try to explain everything a little.2.It seems emotionless. Dont't focus on a single character's emotion while avoiding others'. 3.MC is overpowered no doubt but why he is not using his powers. Hiding his powers like a coward. Make him intelligent not extremely cautious.4. Give some illustrations while you are at it.5. I am from India also
Captivating and great storyline. I hope it does not develop into a story that has mindless harem.
Hi bro, I hope you recover soon. Your story development, Character Design and world Background are really good, especially your pace of developing a story I like. There are spelling mistakes but no problem. I really hope you will continue to write the story at least 3000 chapters or more and don't drop it please. I really hope there will be stable and mass updates.
so here's my review on this novel Story is to fast faced character 👌 Up dating stability do mass release bro, I like to read this type of novel so it's good try reading it if you want. 😉😉😉😉
wish theres more chapters tbh :) good book so far looking forward to the future chapters
this story will hit you with one cliche after another. basically there is some story is a novel full of cliche. ..... not good at all. it have every urban cliche you can imagine..
Love the story and i enjoy the fast paced, you are not wasting chapters with too much detail. Straight to the point. Hope to have more update because one chapter a week is terrible
So author great story just as I like an overpowered novel.But there are some problems such as1.Story is too fast paced.Try to explain everything a little.2.It seems emotionless. Dont't focus on a single character's emotion while avoiding others'. 3.MC is overpowered no doubt but why he is not using his powers. Hiding his powers like a coward. Make him intelligent not extremely cautious.4. Give some illustrations while you are at it.5. I am from India also
Captivating and great storyline. I hope it does not develop into a story that has mindless harem.
Hi bro, I hope you recover soon. Your story development, Character Design and world Background are really good, especially your pace of developing a story I like. There are spelling mistakes but no problem. I really hope you will continue to write the story at least 3000 chapters or more and don't drop it please. I really hope there will be stable and mass updates.
so here's my review on this novel Story is to fast faced character 👌 Up dating stability do mass release bro, I like to read this type of novel so it's good try reading it if you want. 😉😉😉😉
wish theres more chapters tbh :) good book so far looking forward to the future chapters
this story will hit you with one cliche after another. basically there is some story is a novel full of cliche. ..... not good at all. it have every urban cliche you can imagine..