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you are doing a splendid job with this fic, keep the good work, the only thing that disappointed me about this fic is the number of chapters.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
how to believe that you will go to the end of the story, you are already too lazy to make a synopsis. how to believe that you will go to the end of the story, you are already too lazy to make a synopsis.
There are a lot of missing things in this fic.... The characters are one dimensional... The OC gets trusted so easily... Usopp-Kaya ship does not sail... Mikita having no reason to be there... Chopper barely has any dialogue... The ship doesnt even have to be Marine Warship size... definitely unnecessary....
Reveal Spoiler you are doing a splendid job with this fic, keep the good work, the only thing that disappointed me about this fic is the number of chapters.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
how to believe that you will go to the end of the story, you are already too lazy to make a synopsis. how to believe that you will go to the end of the story, you are already too lazy to make a synopsis.
There are a lot of missing things in this fic.... The characters are one dimensional... The OC gets trusted so easily... Usopp-Kaya ship does not sail... Mikita having no reason to be there... Chopper barely has any dialogue... The ship doesnt even have to be Marine Warship size... definitely unnecessary....
Reveal Spoiler