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translator might as well have never translated the story and just passed it through mtl the translation quality would reduce by maybe 15% ....... also the story takes heavily from Chinese culture elements and stuff there are already quite a few cheng ding and stuff by chapter 15 it barely gives any Naruto vibes when the characters seems like they are from a cultivation world
This is absolute garbage dont waste time reading. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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do you have a bot running or smthing? why still post this chinese trash . . . . . . . . . . . . .....................................................
it went down hill very quickly. started to add things from other universes very quick and it made no sense for the story.
writing quality, story development, character design are 1★. updating is 4★. and lastly world background...... 3★. overall 2.0
at first is not bad. aroun chapter 70is MF Start getting lazy and use some weird Mtl. the result is so bad i stop reading.
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I changed my mind. This story is worth reading, sometimes it just takes time to recover from the Chinese braggadocios sensibilities though. Still worth reading if you can survive that.
Translator Here, This is a Chinese Fanfic and is highly influenced by Chinese elements.But all the Chinese elements are well integrated into Naruto lores and missing information from Naruto are filled with Chinese element.Not everyone may like it. But I am translating because it is a good read. Also the reason Mc has bloodline limit is due to mutation caused by transmigration and assimilation into Orochimaru and it will be explored in the future.Also Naruto world already have chinese cultivation system in it known as Senjutsu and Novel focuses on this and more mystical norm of Naruto as introduce new things. And that is the reason it is a fanfic. Also spoiler alert but later Orochimaru also comes back. How? Well wait for chapter here or go to my ko-fi account and read advance chapter there and know the answers.
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I started reading this story, because I liked the idea of having Orochimaru as the MC. Unfortunately the Author decided to add a lot of AU elements and it quickly started to feel more like a xianxia novel, than the Naruto fanfiction it was supposed to be.
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Thanking the author,there is hardly any Orochimaru story! hope you don't drop it[img=update][img=update][img=update] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Orochimaru is a scientist without blood ties, whose achievements are based on hard work, experimentation, research and the desire for knowledge. To claim that he has blood ties is a blasphemy against the character. There are also a lot of mistakes like the main character being referred to by two different names, character names being wrong. In short, I regret reading a Chinese fan fiction just because the main character is Orochimaru.
Yo, I really like Orochimaru. He is such an underrated character, keep up the good work.
translator might as well have never translated the story and just passed it through mtl the translation quality would reduce by maybe 15% ....... also the story takes heavily from Chinese culture elements and stuff there are already quite a few cheng ding and stuff by chapter 15 it barely gives any Naruto vibes when the characters seems like they are from a cultivation world
This is absolute garbage dont waste time reading. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Reveal Spoiler garbage 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
do you have a bot running or smthing? why still post this chinese trash . . . . . . . . . . . . .....................................................
it went down hill very quickly. started to add things from other universes very quick and it made no sense for the story.
writing quality, story development, character design are 1★. updating is 4★. and lastly world background...... 3★. overall 2.0
at first is not bad. aroun chapter 70is MF Start getting lazy and use some weird Mtl. the result is so bad i stop reading.
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I changed my mind. This story is worth reading, sometimes it just takes time to recover from the Chinese braggadocios sensibilities though. Still worth reading if you can survive that.
Translator Here, This is a Chinese Fanfic and is highly influenced by Chinese elements.But all the Chinese elements are well integrated into Naruto lores and missing information from Naruto are filled with Chinese element.Not everyone may like it. But I am translating because it is a good read. Also the reason Mc has bloodline limit is due to mutation caused by transmigration and assimilation into Orochimaru and it will be explored in the future.Also Naruto world already have chinese cultivation system in it known as Senjutsu and Novel focuses on this and more mystical norm of Naruto as introduce new things. And that is the reason it is a fanfic. Also spoiler alert but later Orochimaru also comes back. How? Well wait for chapter here or go to my ko-fi account and read advance chapter there and know the answers.
Reveal Spoiler I started reading this story, because I liked the idea of having Orochimaru as the MC. Unfortunately the Author decided to add a lot of AU elements and it quickly started to feel more like a xianxia novel, than the Naruto fanfiction it was supposed to be.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Thanking the author,there is hardly any Orochimaru story! hope you don't drop it[img=update][img=update][img=update] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Orochimaru is a scientist without blood ties, whose achievements are based on hard work, experimentation, research and the desire for knowledge. To claim that he has blood ties is a blasphemy against the character. There are also a lot of mistakes like the main character being referred to by two different names, character names being wrong. In short, I regret reading a Chinese fan fiction just because the main character is Orochimaru.
Yo, I really like Orochimaru. He is such an underrated character, keep up the good work.
Love the book pls more and keep updating. Your work is fantastic 👍