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It's almost like a slow-burner. It isn't really too interesting at the beginning, but it later begins to speed up and cause things to become much more exciting.
This type of story is quite good, creative, the content of the story is a bit boring at first, but later it seems very attractive. Your character should be described in more detail. hope you can consider my comments
started 3 chapters with a very interesting plot bro You can write more about the division of heroes, power like Batman is hero A, and iron man is Hero B, so be it. I hope to have a hero Moon knight next time[img=recommend][img=exp]
wow the series is very interesting it seems like the main character controls the character into the real world in another world really wanted to read Beatrix's arrival when he found out :)
New series but very good and worth reading After reading 3 chapters, I feel like the new topic of controlling the character to go on a quest, while the main is hidden
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hold up. now before anyone point guns at me, this sounded like a novel i read somewhere before. yeah read it in an MTL before. the description sounded the same too. this may be a new novel but just pointing out, y'know? I hope I'm wrong because this is not the only i noticed with the similar name and description.. well if it is, I hope they'd put the translated from MTL or so... y'know, just to pay tribute. if I'm wrong, I'm willing to admit it, of course. might send another review later because maybe I'm wrong, y'know? till then, I'ma put it here first.
Reveal Spoiler It's almost like a slow-burner. It isn't really too interesting at the beginning, but it later begins to speed up and cause things to become much more exciting.
This type of story is quite good, creative, the content of the story is a bit boring at first, but later it seems very attractive. Your character should be described in more detail. hope you can consider my comments
started 3 chapters with a very interesting plot bro You can write more about the division of heroes, power like Batman is hero A, and iron man is Hero B, so be it. I hope to have a hero Moon knight next time[img=recommend][img=exp]
wow the series is very interesting it seems like the main character controls the character into the real world in another world really wanted to read Beatrix's arrival when he found out :)
New series but very good and worth reading After reading 3 chapters, I feel like the new topic of controlling the character to go on a quest, while the main is hidden
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hold up. now before anyone point guns at me, this sounded like a novel i read somewhere before. yeah read it in an MTL before. the description sounded the same too. this may be a new novel but just pointing out, y'know? I hope I'm wrong because this is not the only i noticed with the similar name and description.. well if it is, I hope they'd put the translated from MTL or so... y'know, just to pay tribute. if I'm wrong, I'm willing to admit it, of course. might send another review later because maybe I'm wrong, y'know? till then, I'ma put it here first.
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