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as the chapter goes, the translation becomes more unbearable. it was like directly change from Chinese to English word by word but not edited first so it hard to understand. also the Chinese poison was not removed saying kumogakure people as "black demon".
One of the worst Naruto fanfic I've ever read. Although the grammar is good without any mistakes, the plot and flow itself is hideous and gave me an headache to read. Many times the chapter repeats the same thing paragraph after paragraph just in different words. It seems the author tried to make this fanfic more about politics and schemes, but he did it badly with many plot holes everywhere. I've only managed to read till chapter 60 before I gave up and dropped it
Una historia muy entretenida, lo que encontré malo es que es un poco confuso el hecho de que se dice en un capítulo que algo está pasando y al siguiente es como si no se hubiera dicho, la gente se sorprende por escuchar otra vez la misma información como si fuera la primera vez.
i really liked this novel. its not a cup lf tea for Everyone. As a online reader of the same era from Wuxiaworld, its extremely hard to find anything worthwhile. But this is good, as a mary sue, over powered novel, with a lot of momnets that makes you angry and almost give up the novel. The one thing i will tell anyone, before they start this novel is- Throw your expectations And PREVious Novel reading expariance. 😆
Story just changes halfway thru.. ik the story was heading into politics but the politics was just exaggerated and prolonged for no reason the story change from P2W uchiha to politics bs .. it’s all the same ruse, nothing new.. progressively got more boring after a certain amount of chapters. Maybe author changed or the author couldn’t contain himself to not overlap ideas to create terrible plot.. the essense of the story changed.. I was excited for mc getting money to level up his abilities.. that just stopped like the author forgot about the system and just focused on politics instead…
Один из самых лучших фанфиков, особенно в жанре Наруто! Всем советую к прочтению и самое большое преимущество этого то что фанфик законченный ! И это отлично! 10/10 !!!!
8.8/10 Uchiha-centric, Political-centric, Chinese translated Naruto fanfic. A lot of Sarutobi, Danzo, Shikamaru, and Naruto bashing. If you like politics and cunning MC, then this fanfic is definitely for you. Personally, I'm astounded by the amount of political intrigue and maneuvering of this fanfic. It's something that you won't see at the level of a free naruto fanfic. Not only it is lore accurate for the most part, but the MC's ideology feels really realistic for a world like Naruto. The only part that I'm dissatisfied with is the epilogue part of the fanfic, like most Chinese books. Not that it's bad, but relatively too rushed. That said, I'd say it's still a worth read if you like politics and naruto.
To be honest, this is one of the best Fanfiction. I even consider it better than the original Naruto series. Politics and the attitude of the uchiha are best depicted in this story. Anyway, it's a great Fanfiction and one must read it...🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
WONDERFUL, TOP 2 NARUTO FF! THERE MAY HAVE A SYSTEM BUT THANKS TO ROB IT IS NOT IMPORTANT AND IS LITTLE MENTIONED. BUT THE STORY IS FANTASTIC AND THE PLOT IS VERY INTELLIGENT. YOU CAN READ WITHOUT FEAR, APPROVED
really liked the ff, it was a bit over the top at the start but it was almost like the writer evolved after the first like 50 chaps and the story kept getting better although there were a few things that were off, like the gold coins to qi luck wasn't well transitioned and the system practically disappeared. also for bleam: qi luck is like good destiny, as long as theres qi luck, fate won't betray you, and it's developed like good karma usually(good leads to good) so when he has a lot of subordinates with strong fate he can get a bit of it in the form of qi luck, and in the same vain if he has a high position, the people below him(civilians) give him a steady supply of qi luck, in Chinese culture(I think) qi luck is something for like the development of a dynasty, like it's this ethereal thing that makes people treat there commoners better(cause if they don't the dynasty's qi luck will decrease and the dynasty might fall) thats all i can remember off the top of my head (i think it's also like merit/ heavenly merit in this case if you know what that is)
Quem fará parte do harém do MC ? .... ..... ......... Preciso de nomes e a quantidade do harém total !!!! .......... ................ ....................
a good read though has a rushed ending and the system the mc used to get powerful before was simply not used afterwards of time he got his mangekyo even though he had resources to get more powerful way more quickly.
one of the best naruto fanfics out there, the translator made a pretty good job translating it, be in terms of translating quality and the frequency of updates, keep bringing to us amazing translations Bleam
good story, ending feels a bit rush but not complaining as is works and is actually completed. highly recommended for anyone.
I'll be brief. Best narutoverse fanfic ever! Actually I like this alternate storyline fanfic more than the canon. The characters and the story are philosphically more realistic and more adhering to the common sense than the canon storyline. SUPER HIGH RECOMMENDATION!!
a long time addict here, I smell the webnovel long enough to switch from opiods /s on serious note its very good webnovel you should read if you like smart,manipulative and cruel(but only towards his enemies) MC, that grows stronger through a system (which is honestly quite barebones compared other system I seen) while navigating the real world and politics that exist (which is definetely the best part of the novel). It utilise pretty much every single Naruto media upto _____, in a very satisfying way, exploring abilities that was never shown. And if you a Uchiha fanboy, and this is a treat as well. note:Yes its harem that has more than one female.
Imo ending was bit rushed. There is a system but not that important (you forget about it after sometime). Starting it was funny then it become serious at the end. Needed more Yoru hehe moments. Overall it was awesome. Thanks for all the hard work author and translator.
I enjoyed the story. MC is the type of Uchiha I always wished to see in a fanfic. At first, it may seem slow and the actions of MC might seem weird, but when everything starts to fall into place, the story takes off to another level.
The political plot is smart but MC is sick and extremely disgusting, a hypocrite, addicted to lying and acting, garbage, a soulless covert narcissist.
I love this fanfuc though pls the authur/translator should indicate translation above please 🙏 and viewers pls support me nd my work
Interesting take on the naruto world, I like the characters and their interactions. But be aware, that the written language is poor, haven't check if it is because of a translation from another source or if the author is not fully comfortable with English
Top 1 naruto fan-fic…… if I only look from the political side of things…… It's as if Author's forte is in formulating dialogues and narratives with underlying meanings…… Which is just amazing (for me personally)…… This is simply amazing writing…… (I know this is Translation… but it doesn't feel like MTL at all)
It's a pretty well done translation. Spoiler alert by the way.near the end of the book it's racist asf but other than that it's a satisfying ending
good work overall author 👌 but it seems that I can only access chapter 168 and above can't read from chapter 1
The person reading this message is the biggest idiot alive today if he doesn't read this story. This is literally the best thing I've read in a very long time, probably the best fanfic of my life. Almost everything in this novel is good, and most importantly you'll feel like you're reading a real story and not just some fan fiction, I literally cried at one point while reading this masterpiece. The characters, the dialogue, the plot, everything is believable, everything makes sense, everything is just good. This story goes off the beaten track of Naruto fanfic, you'll see things that have never been attempted before, and it works. The author brilliantly handles originality and talent, coupled with a setting we all love and sub-genres - politics, a bit of clan building - fun, creating a fantastic book that should be your number one reading priority. Many thanks to the author for his frequent updates. Full support.
Its good to read OP characters once in a while but reading weak to strong troupe characters are really fun and interesting. I'm only at 45 but everything is good. MC has been doing mind games and BASIC game of thrones political ploy with the higher ups. The story is a bit slow for my taste but its fine since the author has a way to keep you interested through the way he portrays the characters and how they interact with the MC. He doesn't dumb down the characters like most fanfics and you can actually see the difference in power levels from chuunin to jounin to a sannin. Over all its a fun and good read, give it a shot.
P2W Uchiha in Konoha embodies elements that everyone wishes Uchiha in Naruto would be. As one reader commented, 'This is better than the original' — and I'm not capping. If you're curious to understand why people enjoy it so much, read it now! Seriously, you won't regret it.Yes, this is a translation, for those who are unaware.
as the chapter goes, the translation becomes more unbearable. it was like directly change from Chinese to English word by word but not edited first so it hard to understand. also the Chinese poison was not removed saying kumogakure people as "black demon".
One of the worst Naruto fanfic I've ever read. Although the grammar is good without any mistakes, the plot and flow itself is hideous and gave me an headache to read. Many times the chapter repeats the same thing paragraph after paragraph just in different words. It seems the author tried to make this fanfic more about politics and schemes, but he did it badly with many plot holes everywhere. I've only managed to read till chapter 60 before I gave up and dropped it
Una historia muy entretenida, lo que encontré malo es que es un poco confuso el hecho de que se dice en un capítulo que algo está pasando y al siguiente es como si no se hubiera dicho, la gente se sorprende por escuchar otra vez la misma información como si fuera la primera vez.
i really liked this novel. its not a cup lf tea for Everyone. As a online reader of the same era from Wuxiaworld, its extremely hard to find anything worthwhile. But this is good, as a mary sue, over powered novel, with a lot of momnets that makes you angry and almost give up the novel. The one thing i will tell anyone, before they start this novel is- Throw your expectations And PREVious Novel reading expariance. 😆
Story just changes halfway thru.. ik the story was heading into politics but the politics was just exaggerated and prolonged for no reason the story change from P2W uchiha to politics bs .. it’s all the same ruse, nothing new.. progressively got more boring after a certain amount of chapters. Maybe author changed or the author couldn’t contain himself to not overlap ideas to create terrible plot.. the essense of the story changed.. I was excited for mc getting money to level up his abilities.. that just stopped like the author forgot about the system and just focused on politics instead…
Один из самых лучших фанфиков, особенно в жанре Наруто! Всем советую к прочтению и самое большое преимущество этого то что фанфик законченный ! И это отлично! 10/10 !!!!
8.8/10 Uchiha-centric, Political-centric, Chinese translated Naruto fanfic. A lot of Sarutobi, Danzo, Shikamaru, and Naruto bashing. If you like politics and cunning MC, then this fanfic is definitely for you. Personally, I'm astounded by the amount of political intrigue and maneuvering of this fanfic. It's something that you won't see at the level of a free naruto fanfic. Not only it is lore accurate for the most part, but the MC's ideology feels really realistic for a world like Naruto. The only part that I'm dissatisfied with is the epilogue part of the fanfic, like most Chinese books. Not that it's bad, but relatively too rushed. That said, I'd say it's still a worth read if you like politics and naruto.
To be honest, this is one of the best Fanfiction. I even consider it better than the original Naruto series. Politics and the attitude of the uchiha are best depicted in this story. Anyway, it's a great Fanfiction and one must read it...🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
WONDERFUL, TOP 2 NARUTO FF! THERE MAY HAVE A SYSTEM BUT THANKS TO ROB IT IS NOT IMPORTANT AND IS LITTLE MENTIONED. BUT THE STORY IS FANTASTIC AND THE PLOT IS VERY INTELLIGENT. YOU CAN READ WITHOUT FEAR, APPROVED
really liked the ff, it was a bit over the top at the start but it was almost like the writer evolved after the first like 50 chaps and the story kept getting better although there were a few things that were off, like the gold coins to qi luck wasn't well transitioned and the system practically disappeared. also for bleam: qi luck is like good destiny, as long as theres qi luck, fate won't betray you, and it's developed like good karma usually(good leads to good) so when he has a lot of subordinates with strong fate he can get a bit of it in the form of qi luck, and in the same vain if he has a high position, the people below him(civilians) give him a steady supply of qi luck, in Chinese culture(I think) qi luck is something for like the development of a dynasty, like it's this ethereal thing that makes people treat there commoners better(cause if they don't the dynasty's qi luck will decrease and the dynasty might fall) thats all i can remember off the top of my head (i think it's also like merit/ heavenly merit in this case if you know what that is)
Quem fará parte do harém do MC ? .... ..... ......... Preciso de nomes e a quantidade do harém total !!!! .......... ................ ....................
a good read though has a rushed ending and the system the mc used to get powerful before was simply not used afterwards of time he got his mangekyo even though he had resources to get more powerful way more quickly.
one of the best naruto fanfics out there, the translator made a pretty good job translating it, be in terms of translating quality and the frequency of updates, keep bringing to us amazing translations Bleam
good story, ending feels a bit rush but not complaining as is works and is actually completed. highly recommended for anyone.
I'll be brief. Best narutoverse fanfic ever! Actually I like this alternate storyline fanfic more than the canon. The characters and the story are philosphically more realistic and more adhering to the common sense than the canon storyline. SUPER HIGH RECOMMENDATION!!
a long time addict here, I smell the webnovel long enough to switch from opiods /s on serious note its very good webnovel you should read if you like smart,manipulative and cruel(but only towards his enemies) MC, that grows stronger through a system (which is honestly quite barebones compared other system I seen) while navigating the real world and politics that exist (which is definetely the best part of the novel). It utilise pretty much every single Naruto media upto _____, in a very satisfying way, exploring abilities that was never shown. And if you a Uchiha fanboy, and this is a treat as well. note:Yes its harem that has more than one female.
Imo ending was bit rushed. There is a system but not that important (you forget about it after sometime). Starting it was funny then it become serious at the end. Needed more Yoru hehe moments. Overall it was awesome. Thanks for all the hard work author and translator.
I enjoyed the story. MC is the type of Uchiha I always wished to see in a fanfic. At first, it may seem slow and the actions of MC might seem weird, but when everything starts to fall into place, the story takes off to another level.
The political plot is smart but MC is sick and extremely disgusting, a hypocrite, addicted to lying and acting, garbage, a soulless covert narcissist.
I love this fanfuc though pls the authur/translator should indicate translation above please 🙏 and viewers pls support me nd my work
Interesting take on the naruto world, I like the characters and their interactions. But be aware, that the written language is poor, haven't check if it is because of a translation from another source or if the author is not fully comfortable with English
Top 1 naruto fan-fic…… if I only look from the political side of things…… It's as if Author's forte is in formulating dialogues and narratives with underlying meanings…… Which is just amazing (for me personally)…… This is simply amazing writing…… (I know this is Translation… but it doesn't feel like MTL at all)
It's a pretty well done translation. Spoiler alert by the way.near the end of the book it's racist asf but other than that it's a satisfying ending
good work overall author 👌 but it seems that I can only access chapter 168 and above can't read from chapter 1
The person reading this message is the biggest idiot alive today if he doesn't read this story. This is literally the best thing I've read in a very long time, probably the best fanfic of my life. Almost everything in this novel is good, and most importantly you'll feel like you're reading a real story and not just some fan fiction, I literally cried at one point while reading this masterpiece. The characters, the dialogue, the plot, everything is believable, everything makes sense, everything is just good. This story goes off the beaten track of Naruto fanfic, you'll see things that have never been attempted before, and it works. The author brilliantly handles originality and talent, coupled with a setting we all love and sub-genres - politics, a bit of clan building - fun, creating a fantastic book that should be your number one reading priority. Many thanks to the author for his frequent updates. Full support.
Its good to read OP characters once in a while but reading weak to strong troupe characters are really fun and interesting. I'm only at 45 but everything is good. MC has been doing mind games and BASIC game of thrones political ploy with the higher ups. The story is a bit slow for my taste but its fine since the author has a way to keep you interested through the way he portrays the characters and how they interact with the MC. He doesn't dumb down the characters like most fanfics and you can actually see the difference in power levels from chuunin to jounin to a sannin. Over all its a fun and good read, give it a shot.
P2W Uchiha in Konoha embodies elements that everyone wishes Uchiha in Naruto would be. As one reader commented, 'This is better than the original' — and I'm not capping. If you're curious to understand why people enjoy it so much, read it now! Seriously, you won't regret it.Yes, this is a translation, for those who are unaware.